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Originally posted by: angleroops

wow nice udate

when will mnveer becum one

Originally posted by: annabh

Hey jiji

that was just so good

thank you

I was waiting for the update for REAL long

And I was suffering from writer's blog😭 so the update came late

woa the dance was so good

remind me of a scene of my fav novel

which Novel? may I know?😊

awn I hinted kinna jealously in

manyata voice while uday mentioned about his guru

sorry have to go to study

ok thank you for the pm

byee

Originally posted by: harikarocks

hey!!!

awesome update just loved it😃

waiting when they will bcom one and the dance was good

u penned it beautifully👏👏

after a long time u updated

thanks for the pm!!!

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Payel di😃. How are u? Congrats on becoming I.F Rockerz🥳

Thank you, I am very fond of the color of IF-Rockerz..my name comes in lovely RED 😃

Coming to the update ...

It was fabulous (as always😳).

Loved how Manyata was teasing Uday - that was so sweet😳.

Then of-course the dance was superb! Your description of the ambience (firstly) , then (secondly) the language of dance was awesome. Could visualise the entire sequence .

I really want Manyata to realise her feelings now😳. I'm sure Uday is reaching the end of his educational term with her , and then he'll leave ... so when will she accept her feelings for him😕?

Don't worry, main hoon na 😃

Anyways - the update was a pleasant surprise,

1 which was thoroughly enjoyed😃.

Do continue soon,

thanks for the PM😊.

Originally posted by: Avina-Ashvik

Hey:)
I read the whole of this SS in one go:)
You are an amazing writer! You write beautifully:) And the story is very interesting!
Please update soon and please PM me as well:)
Really eager to read the next part:)

Originally posted by: panchaali

Thank you Mimi 🤗

Originally posted by: mimi.maik

Originally posted by: panchaali

yar why you are discontinueing abhinashwar...its really a perfect story, and i love it to0o0o much...😭 😭 😭 it has such an amazing concept and base...dont waste your hard work 😭 i will miss it alot. 😭 but last decision will be yours coz u r a writer and you know better than me. but still re think.