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Posted: 11 years ago
hey!!!
awesome update just loved it😃
waiting when they will bcom one and the dance was good
u penned it beautifully👏👏
after a long time u updated
thanks for the pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
really nice chapter and gr8 to c maanyata be jovial and uday to be less guitly. thx for update and for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey:)
I read the whole of this SS in one go:)
You are an amazing writer! You write beautifully:) And the story is very interesting!
Please update soon and please PM me as well:)
Really eager to read the next part:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
⭐️⭐️Fantastic . Excellent, engaging description of dance without being too technical, great discussion about gunas and funny rebuke of fifty gurus. I loved this update.👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
At least unnati understands their hidden feelings.Uday is excellent in bharatnatyam too...both of them danced 2gether.I was imagining it.Ashish wud look great in d classical dance costume.He is a true shishya now.loved d last part:
"The only thing that completes me, is you Princess!"
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey my dear Payel, how are you 😊

first CONGRATULATIONS on becoming IF Rokerz...i am very happy 😳 and 2nd thank you so0o0o0o much for updating Library princess. i was missing this SS very much 😭

so coming to the update, it was so0o0o flawless and beautiful...full of intense and perfect surrounding. 😳 i loved both of them when they were dancing...i greatly wish i could see that scene by my eyes. 😆 it was so0o0o gracefull, and you defined it in a very lovely manner as always...uday's emotions were on peak...i sensed it, if he is a complete shishya now then he soon will leave devghar ri8 😭 i think princess manyata will feel her inner love after uday's absence. 😭
i loved unnati in this update also...she makes the gloomy atmosphere lighter 😆
seriously payel loved this update by the core of my heart. 🤗 thank u sooo much for updating...thanks for the p.m also 😃 do continue abhinashwar...missing it like hell 😭
take good care and stay blessed...love you, hugs 🤗 ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
hellow Payel jiji. 😊 i am very happy that you finally updated 😃 i was jumping like crazy when i got your p.m😆 thank you soo much foh updating.
the chappy was very thrilling and manveer's dance was totally out of this world. awww you present them very nicely, but i am hell angry on uday that why he is not telling her what he feels. 😵he is making spaces becoz she is his guru. i am keenly waiting for the day when manyata will becomes completely his 😳 but for this we have to wait long 😆 no problem we will.
thanks again jiji for the update. i enjoyed each and every word. thanks for the p.m and take care. do continue soon when you got time 😎

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mimi.maik

hey my dear Payel, how are you 😊

first CONGRATULATIONS on becoming IF Rokerz...


Thank you 😳

i am very happy 😳 and 2nd thank you so0o0o0o much for updating Library princess. i was missing this SS very much 😭

I was trying to write it for a long time but kya kare I was suffering from writer's block 😭

so coming to the update, it was so0o0o flawless and beautiful...full of intense and perfect surrounding. 😳 i loved both of them when they were dancing...i greatly wish i could see that scene by my eyes. 😆 it was so0o0o gracefull, and you defined it in a very lovely manner as always...
awwnn I am blushing 😳
uday's emotions were on peak...i sensed it, if he is a complete shishya now then he soon will leave devghar ri8 😭 i think princess manyata will feel her inner love after uday's absence. 😭

Don't be sad the library Princess will remember her Prince in a perfect manner 😊

i loved unnati in this update also...she makes the gloomy atmosphere lighter 😆

Thankz 😊
seriously payel loved this update by the core of my heart. 🤗 thank u sooo much for updating...thanks for the p.m also 😃 do continue abhinashwar...missing it like hell 😭

But very very sorry to say that I might not be continuing Abinashwar here anymore, because I find some parts are imperfect, there is lot I will need to change and I want to write it in a different manner, it won't look like an FF then, so discontinuing Abinashwar..
take good care and stay blessed...love you, hugs 🤗 ❤️


Thank you Mimi 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: alina.mahar

hellow Payel jiji. 😊 i am very happy that you finally updated 😃 i was jumping like crazy when i got your p.m😆 thank you soo much foh updating.
the chappy was very thrilling and manveer's dance was totally out of this world. awww you present them very nicely, but i am hell angry on uday that why he is not telling her what he feels. 😵he is making spaces becoz she is his guru. i am keenly waiting for the day when manyata will becomes completely his 😳 but for this we have to wait long 😆 no problem we will.
thanks again jiji for the update. i enjoyed each and every word. thanks for the p.m and take care. do continue soon when you got time 😎


Thank you Alina🤗 only few more chappys are remaining of this SS I'll try to continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Cotswolds

⭐️⭐️Fantastic . Excellent, engaging description of dance without being too technical, great discussion about gunas and funny rebuke of fifty gurus. I loved this update.👏


Thank you cotty😃

Thankz for reading 😊

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