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pia

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Posted: 12 years ago

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heyy dearr do update soon!!!!!!!😊😊😊

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: pia.raha
heyy dearr do update soon!!!!!!!😊😊😊

Next part is looong and bit difficult

I started writing but can't guarantee when could I finish!!!

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pia

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Posted: 12 years ago

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are wahh i luvv long updatesss😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: pia.raha
are wahh i luvv long updatesss😊😊

Thank you... 😃

Then I don't have to be scared to make you guys bore 😊

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anushruthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Lovely Update

Your writing is so beautiful

You portray both Uday and Manyata's character so well

Reading your work seems like being in a different Era

Do ASAP

thanks for de PM

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: anushruthi
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Hi aap kuch bolo plz...

Ap ne break of the dawn mein vhi box reserve kar ke rahki par kuch boli nahi 😭...plz kuch toh bolie...achi buri kuch bhi!!!

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

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first to comment yeaaa
loved it trulyyy
god u ahve magic in your handsss

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panchaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: annesha18
first to comment yeaaa
loved it trulyyy
god u ahve magic in your handsss

Thakzzz 😊

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NAVINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Splendid👏👏👏👏👏!!! Awesome update di 👍🏼. It truly was!

Varun and Uday's "double-meaning" talk at the beginning was great. Then Udayveer's conversation with the soldiers was rather informative ... I mean , he was given a lesson ; right there , whilst on the trip😆.

The meeting with his guru , was utterly perfect😃. Brilliantly written. I loved how humbled Uday became after just a single sentence from Manyata. He really became dedicated to fulfill the task he came there for. I thoroughly enjoyed his dialogues there. The best part was when he told Manyata that he will call her "PRINCESS" ... and she agreed to it😳😃!

Then , his flashback of the last time he came to Devgarh ... was beautiful. Manyata was so chirpy then😳 ... hope in the next 6 months that Uday is going to be here ; he brings back the CHEERFUL , WITTY PRINCESS that he knew.

Happy about the fact that Manyata has permitted Uday to stay at the LIBRARY with her☺️. Maybe he will be able to stir up the repressed memory she has of him😉.

It was a great update di.

Really enjoyed it😛

Very eager to read about how Uday copes with the 3:30 am "wake-up" call 😉😆!!!

Please update soon,

... thanx 4 the PM😊.

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