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Superb update.1^st wen Manyata said that she was already married I was upset.But was relieved wen I realized that her hus was d library.But wen she refused 2 teach udayveer & wen uday refused 2 accept her as his Guru I was disappointed.but finally they both agreed.happy.So manyata is depressed as Uday is engaged 2 JN,she luvs him a lot.Surprise.cant wait 4 their meeting

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Omg...it's truly a fairy tale yaar...just amazing...omg what's gonna happen when they meet omg...brilliantly written ...but one thing...don't play with ur eyes...loving to write us good...but why dont u tell someone else to update...nothing is more worth than ur eyes...just I think so...not wanting to offend u

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

WWOWOOWWW...

that was so awesome..

but actually i was shell shocked

Manyata was really serious about getting married to a library??

i mean why??

tho she wants to run away from uday...this is not the path to be taken...

cant wait for manveer meeting...

cant wait for the mgic to work cant wait for the floweers to bloom love...

and u write awesome

you give it a perfect fairytale look n shape

u give it justice

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Yes Payel di ... I want to kill u for this update , I mean ; HOW CAN U WRITE SO BEAUTIFULLY? The chapter was an absolute pleasure to read. It was spectacular 👏. I loved Unnati's part in this. She feels responsible for Manyata's present state and she has taken it upon herself to rectify things. I enjoyed how she persuaded Manyata to accept the job of teaching Udayveer. I'm not sure if I feel sad for Manyata's state ... she got herself married to a library , but she is content in that life. She has accepted the library as her life-partner ; and she has devoted herself completely to it. Of-course , I do understand how her parents feel about that situation; but they needn't fear as help is on the way 😳 ... RIGHT???😉 Another aspect that I enjoyed was Udayveer's answers to his father. Though it was arrogant , with a bit of ignorance ... it shows us how AN ORDINARY MAN would react to how Manyata is living.

Can't wait for Uday & Manyata to meet in the next chapter .

I loved the chapter di ,

hope u continue soon, thanks for the Pm😊.