'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new - Page 73

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

K will do now
Will update as soon as I get time lol

and please give a long update ,atleast 8 pages of ms word
we readers deserve a long update for the long wait

Originally posted by: andy.a

and please give a long update ,atleast 8 pages of ms word
we readers deserve a long update for the long wait

Hahaha and andyji tell me the fomt also lol

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Hahaha and andyji tell me the fomt also lol

ok times new roman
size 8

Hi Andy😊.

Finally got a chance to comment😆.

Great update Dear 👍🏼.

Loved the beginning (Manveer's chat) , it was so "AWWW"😳 (sorry - can't find a word right now that fits there😕).

Then comes the plan to get Komal to confess her "crime" . I LOVED THIS PART ❤️. Uday's plans were totally masterful. The way he tampered with the security system ... then sneaking Manyata into the palace ... then causing the disruption with the fire-works ... then causing the power-cut ... and lastly turning Manyata into a ghost😆 and getting a confession out of Komal!!! All that was superb. Well done Andy ... that was brilliantly written👏.

Uday also saved Manyata 1 last time as Komal made a final attempt at taking her daughter's life. That also was ingenius👏. (WHERE DO U GET SUCH IDEAS FROM😕?)

The "last hug" made me so sad as I knew what was coming next😭.

BTW ... comment is for chapter 23😃.

Thoroughly enjoyed THIS PART.

Newbie Flood in Andy's thread🤣

Originally posted by: Priya46

ok if uday is smirking he's definately got some thing up his sleeve

yes he has😆

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

hey andy 😊,hi chitra😃 the story is shaping up really good, this is so unlike all the stereo type storythanks so much😃. But again even if Manyata truly loves Uday, she has masked her love for him by remembering his previous deeds, I'm not sure how is this going to shape from here.i am trying to figure it out, soon😉

I agree Uday has killed people who so much deserved to Die, but ha has also killed innocent people, and that doesn't sit well. As you said, you have all plans of keeping manveer together, and this is what is taking my expectations to a whole different level in terms of story shape-up. I'm really looking forward to know, how are to planning to create a new clean image of Uday , I mean Uday is drenched in blood, cleaning his character up will be quite a task. I'm sure I wont be disappointed.chitra, really hope i will be able to take the story forward in a way you would like. i really dont want to mess up with this story as this is one story i love to write. yes, cleaning uday is going to be really difficult

Looking forward to the next update.i did update, but did not get time to reply to your comment

PS. Really sorry for not commenting regularly, things are pretty heated up in personal and professional front, I dont even come to forum often, but whenever I come I do read the story that have really kept me hooked up and urs is one of them. So I will again be irregular with my comments but you keep up the amazing work on this story, I'm looking forward to read this.

ah, chitra, read only when your free, i can understand it, no problem about the comments

thanks so much chitra for this comment, it really encorages me to write more😃

omg manveer are going to die

Andy i just read the chapters in one go. I have so much to tell about this ff nd how much i loved reading it but m not finding enough words to expess my feelings. This ff was defo diff from all other stories in this forum. In previous chapters i had a hard tym thinking who's mister Shark. Couldn't even concentrate on my biology class today. As i gradually reached the revealation part i got shocked knowing the true komal. Yeah this revealation came as a blow to me. Nd about Uday it made me sad thinking if Uday's Mr. Shark then how we'll get Manveer. I thought let's wait nd watch what happens but then when i read the promo of chap 23 it broke my heart in thousand pieces. Andy i know u r an amazing writer wid a Dexter mind. U deserve more response but pls don't do this to us. It's been a great journey from the begging till chap 23. pls don't close this ff lyk this. Trust me u won't feel good after ending it lyk this. I feel it's lyk your baby ff which u wrote wid much care nd passion but this can't be the ending u thought, can it? So i'm begging u not to make it a sad ending. Pls try to make it a happy one. Btw i guess our dex girl Andy can find many other ways to clear out Mr.Shark from his deeds can't she? I know u can so pls give the ff a second chance

No plz dnt use dt promo n it ws as usual supperb plz continue
N ALL THE BEST FOR EXAM