'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new

anushruthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#701

great update

Manyata character is really good ...

so in the conflicting between her heart and mind

her mind won

she is a perfect Yuvrani .. ready to put her love behind
bars to preserve Rajdharma but Uday only killed

people who deserved to die

The Promo is scary

I want a happy ending

please dont end this SS that way ...

all the best for your exams

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Nibir Chowdhury

@cnibir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#702

nicely written... Thnx for the PM and you r right i don't like a sad ending either.. See i am doing my part by commenting and i understand your situation, not getting feedback in something you have put effort in really upsets a person. Anyway, it was a great chapter but i don't want it to end next chappy, i want uday to change and to live happily ever after with Manyata. Good luck for ur exams and take ur time in studying.

Plz pm me again when you have finished with the next chapter. Good LUCK.

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angleroops

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Posted: 12 years ago

#703

i think uday and manyaa will lose their memories but the ring which manyata wears

will remind them about their past

its just a gusse

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Pranoti aka Sanju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#704

andy dont end this here yaar.
warna tumhari dusri 2 stories bhi padhna band kkar dungi haan nai toh.
and lz i dont want this promo.
dagebaaz manyata. will giv a gud comment as i get frm my lappy

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MrsSSO

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Posted: 12 years ago

#705

Please Andy don't end this story here 😭

Take more time and then update ...

And please change the PROMO it is giving nightmares 😆

Happy endings are always good !

BTW the chapter was really good and short 😆

Continue soon ...

And,

Best of luck for your exams !

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huma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#706

awsssmmm andyyy plzzz dont use that promooo

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#707

woww..double update
updates were awsomeee
OMG..scary prormo plzz..dnt use it
update soon thanx for PM.

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LittleDhampir.

@LittleDhampir.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#708

res for now😊

scroll down 4 the comment😛

Edited by edward123 - 12 years ago

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zainab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#709

edited my comment on page 95😉

Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#710

andy mein tujhse bahot gussa hu...
itni achi story likhi hai aur mujhe pata bhi nahi???😡😡😡
jao mujhe nahi bat karni tumse...
hehehe kiddin😆
but sach batau bahot achi story hai...
u know mene 23 chapters pade that too in a go...
mere exams kal se hai😭😭😭😭😭 aur text book ke chapters ke bajae mein pagalon ki tarah tereh chapters pad rahi hu...😉😉😉😉😉
anyways bahot bahot achi story hai...
loved it loads...
aur han plz plz mujhe pm karna... han nahi toh...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

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