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Posted: 12 years ago
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update soon sonia. cant wait to read the next chap.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey ,had my exams,so online nehi ho payi!!!!!!😳 read bth the promo,and the cs,bth r awesome!!!!! thank god majnu manyata ke peeche nehi haiii,wat a relief,par ye avni kaha se tapak padii!!!!!!! promo ne to mujhe cnfse kar diya!!!!! will be waitng for the chapter!!!!!!😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: pia.raha

hey ,had my exams,so online nehi ho payi!!!!!!😳 read bth the promo,and the cs,bth r awesome!!!!! thank god majnu manyata ke peeche nehi haiii,wat a relief,par ye avni kaha se tapak padii!!!!!!! promo ne to mujhe cnfse kar diya!!!!! will be waitng for the chapter!!!!!!😊😊



thnks dear
glad u liked it
will update today
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Hello Manveerians...🤗
hw r u all..???

Well i knw m updating aftr 6 months...
M really sorry for that..😭

Plz Plz do Forgive me...
i knw sum r evn ready to kill me...
for eg.. (Tanu n Hinu...)

Dis Chapter is Dedicated to all my Di's on IF...☺️

Navi Di... (..navina..)

Archu Didzs (dreamjennice)

Krishy Jiji (snowdream)

Anmol Di...

Priyu Di...

Swetu Di...

Shruts Di...

Sanya Di...

n Two of my LOYAL READERS...

sweet.tashi n coolsaloni.nira

Luv u all My Di's..
Now without wasting ur precious Tym. Here's the CHAPTER 2 (A) of Manveer SS - Have Faith On My Love...

Recap:-

Karan :- " tum vahi ruko hum abhi aa rahe hai."And he cuts the call.

Giriraj :- "kya hua Karan beta kiska phone tha?? Aur yeh aap kaha jane ki baat kar rahe hai???"

Karan :- (happily)" dad humare logone avantika ko pakad liye hai aur unhe humare Lonvala ke farmhouse par rakha hai. Hum vahi jaa rahe hai. "

Hearing avantika's everyone has slight tears in their eyes. Vasundara is the one who speaks first.

Vasundara :- "Matlab ab humara beta hume wapis milega. Sunna aapne unnati dada ne kya kaha."

Unnati :- "haan ma hum bhi bohot khush hai. Akhir 16 salo baad hum dada se milenge. "

Griraj (angrily) :- "Hum nahi chodenge uss aaurat ko uske baje se hum apne bete se 16 saal dur rahe ab aur nahi. Akhir 16 salo baad hume humara 'UDAY' wapis milega. " saying so happily he hugs brijraj.




Making way to the TRUTH..



It was been 3 weeks since they found Avantika. Many things had changed in this 3 weeks. It had affected very once's Life..but he was the most affected. His life had taken a 360 degree turn...

His Existence changed...His Famiy changed...mostly he himself had changed...He was no more the Sweet, the boy next door any more...He was a Ruler , a Born Ruler..to a state of only which he had seen in India's Map and heard about . Life was no more the Struggle for existence for him..He had all the luxuries any Middle class or even Upper Middle class Boy of his age could ask for...He just had to name the thing and it would be infront of him as fast as possible... May it be Clothes, Watches , Perfumes , Car , or the latest Phone... anything..

He no more had to hide and do things from his Mom... oops sorry his so called FAKE MOM...😡 who had separated him from his true family, his estate , his friends, his people... He still remember that day, THE CURSED DAY..😭 that he used to call it before...but now it was THE FATEFUL DAY... 😃the day he got back to his real Family... ..Lots of truths were out... Their were voices of Guilt, of Hatered , of Happiness mixed with Anger..Of Surprise... by Surprise he remembered how shocked she was to know His real Identity...

She still remembered the Day when He was back forever...

Back to his Family, Back to his Estate, Back to his people, Back to her... But fate was against it... Karan's word were still ringing in her ears as if he was at present saying all the things... although it was 3 weeks before.. but the incident seem so real to her.

What had happened 3 weeks before????😕😕

Flashback

3 weeks before :-

All are happy that they found Avantika so now they could even find Uday. But someone is confused. She is none- other than Manyata. As soon as she hears Karan's words her eyes became moist. Tears were threatening to flow out before that she excused herself and made her way to her room. No one notices her. Karan, Griraj and Brijraj were about to go at that time DS spoked

DS :- " Rukiye hum bhi chalte hai aapke saath."

Brijraj :- " Nahi maasabeh aap yehi rukiye hum sab jake aate hai."

Giriraj :- " Haan maasabeh hum aate hai aap yehi rukiye."

Vasundhara :- " Maharaj hum bhi chalte hai."

Griraj :- " Nahi vasu aap zidh mat kijiye."

Vasundhara :- " Par Maharaj hume Uday se milna hai. Aur hume kuch sawalo ke jawab chahiye Avantika se."

DS :- " Hum samjhte hai Vasundhara. Karan aisa kijiye aap Avantika ko yaha lekar aayiye. "

Karan :- " Thik hai DS." He then calls his men's and tell them to bring Avantika to D&J mahal.

Back to Manyata in her room...

There she starred at their Childhood picture.. Both dressed as PERFECT ROYALS... He had a small Turban with Jaigarh's symbol on it... looking the Perfect Young Prince he was n she in looking cute in her light blue Ghagra- Choli... Tears were now continuously following through her eyes. Why did it always happened with her??? She had with so much difficulty made herself ready for her engagement with Karan. She had finally decided to MOVE ON in her life. But Fate was as always Cruel on her... They had found Avantika...means they would soon find him too... Will he even recognise her??? His Childhood Bestie come Fiance??? Does he even remember me??? What if he is Married??? Or... Tak-Tak or Knock – Knock

Back 2 present...

her thoughts were broken by a knock on the door... " Come in" she said without turning back.


To Be Continued...


ps. I knw its Very Short... Really Sorry about d Size

Chappals/ Tomatoes/ Comments/Likes/Gaalis...are welcumed...

Bcz i m very very Late dis tym...

Guys one more thng.. As u knw many of our old members left IF..

so i m REVAMPING MY PM LIST...

so plz if u want PMS for d further updates plz...

Feel Free to mention it in ur Comments...😆

Chalo ab mei bhagti hu..

Warna m dead today...🤢

Bubye...


Plz do post ur Reviews...😳☺️






Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
hey dear...just wanted to ask u whn r u going to update the next chap??????????
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira

hey dear...just wanted to ask u whn r u going to update the next chap??????????


soon dear
maybe 2mrw or day aftr
actually i hve written only half update😭😭😭...
sorry
Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
hey hi...sonia...
its not really fair sonia...
u havnt updated the second chap of ur story since so long...
everytime i make a post regarding the same ,,,u always say u will post in a day or two but then again u dont update it further...😭
plz do tell truly,,,,r u thinking to continue this ss or not...
as i already found a deep liking for ur story...
plz do tell
whn r u going to update the next part of ur story...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice promo hope u update soon thnx for pm...I LUV UR STORY LIKE ANYTHING..UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZPLZZZ PLZZZ PLZZZ PLZZZ PLZZZ PLZZZ PLZZZ PLZZZ PLZZZ
I CANT WAIT ANYMORE...Yet thinking wat willl happen next..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey choti.. Finally I found ttime to read this ss...infact the only one from a long long time...that too coZ I saw ur name on it...u were telling that day na that u were writing. .so here's my verdict...ummm...ummm...hmmm...surely not as good as my ss ...defo not like mine...but much much much better...very very good. ..so simple...and the concept is too cute...I really like it...ur narrative is quite simple and serene I would say...jini...ka juju is jagat. .and sis sis relations is so damn cute...I liked this karan...I am feeling sad for him.. .but I think since it's aalways gonna be maanveer...it will end up with avni and karan...I want an happy end for him...I think me on coment line choti will surprise u ..very good work choti...I wish I could take time out and read...but on and off I would read it choti...since it's urs and I am already loving it ...I wanna no how the couples change...how they fall in love ..wow...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PDATE SOON UPDATE SOON PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZPLZZZ PLZZZ PLZZZ PLZZZ PLZZZ PLZZZ PLZZZ PLZZZ PLZZZ
I CANT WAIT ANYMORE...Yet thinking wat willl happen next..

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