'MANVEER MARRIED LIFE '~THREAD 2, CHP 56 PG 106NEW - Page 67

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

OMG...anish dear CS is awsomeee...
Hayee...adhi cricketer hayee...i love cricket and cricketers both...
Cnt wait for Next part
plzz...update soon thanx for PM.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Roze12

great character sketch...👍🏼...addi as a crickter... woww...😳please update ASAP...😃..thanks for the PM...🤗...welcome back..😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 55 (scroll down)
Yuvraj Adhity Singh

Yuvrani Adithi Singh

Sejal


Samay

Sulabh

Sahaas



Maya

Princess Sanjana



Edited by huma12. - 07 February 2013 at 5:40am

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CHAPTER 55

Note - (read da character sketch on pg 96 before u read this update , to understand this update )


MORNING AT JAIGAD PALACE , IN MANVEER BEDROOM



MANAYTAH - she gets ready and sits infront of dressing table combing her hair

UDAY - he hugs her from back

MANYATAH - uday thum besharam ho ...apne umar ko dekho ...ur 48 years old now ...romance karne chale aayi

UDAY - hello maharani ji ...age pe math jaana ...look at me ...am still so fit and young ...abhi bhi ladkiya Marthe muj par

MANAYTAH - haha good joke uday ...budde pe ladkiya Marthe kya

ADITHI - she comes from behind and tell " mom don't call my dad Buddha ...he is handsome ...good morning dad" she hugs uday

UDAY - good morning beta ...he kisses her on forehead

MANYATAH - lo Aaya dad KI chamchi

ADITHI - wat I said is true ...I'll explain it to u wait ..." mom we all youngsters still love actors sharukhan salman khan and saif Ali khan and AAMIR khan ... Saif Ali khan is 48 years old and recently married kareena ...AAMIR khan is 47 years old and he has a one year old son ...still they are heroes ...forget about the age ...they still look young and hot ...just like my dad uday veer sing "

MANYATAH - very funny ... I don't agree ... Khans ka tho Alag Ba'ath hai

ADITHI - oh really mom ...u know many girls in my collage like AADHI bhai ...die heart fans ...and u know one more thing there are even few girls who like uday veer also ... Mom if u allow they are ready to date dad ...my dad is so handsome ...I think girls are ready to marry uday veer ...hai na pappa ...she winks at uday

UDAY - he giggles


MANAYTAH - ailaaa ...she catches adithi 's ear ...badmaash collage padne ke liye jaa raha ho ya pappa KI setting karvaane ke liye

ADITHI - ahaaa mom leave , pappa it's pAining

UDAY - he removes MANAYTAH hand ...

ADITHI - thanks pappa ...but mom and. Dad u know ...I really feel odd and WIERD wen all girls in collage keep asking me about dad and bhaii always ...wen I pass throug they keep telling " dekho uday veer KI beti jaa rahi hai ya ADITHY KI behen jaa rahi hai ..." .
Am fed up with all crazy girls . Some kiss me and feel as if they kiss bhaii . They tell " hey adithi tell ur bhai that I asked about him" . U know they always try to come to our home with some reason so that they can see bhaii ...

MANAYTAH - chal ab chup bhi ho Jaavo besharam ...maa baap ke saamne kuch bhi bolthe ho

ADITHI - mom am telling u truth ...it's happening ...aap ko sunne mein dikhath ho raha hai ...mein jhel raha hu yeh SAB ...

MAID - maharani ji ...yuvraji has come to mahal

ADITHI - oh finally my brother came after 15 days ...(aadhi went to Australia for cricket match and returned now )

MANVEER - they are so happy about ADITHY return ...that too he won match ...They go down to welcome him

MANAYTAH - she gives AARTHI to AADHI and welcome him

AADHI - he hugs both his parents and take their blessings

UDAY - am so proud of u AADHI ...Congrates man ...for ur score record ...

AADHI. - he doesn't reply to his dad ...his eyes are searching for his little princess adithi

MANAYATH - AADHI kya hua ...dad Thumse kuch KEH raha hai

AADHI - sorry mom...sorry dad ...woh sunshine kaha hai ...Ghar mein nahi hai ...college gayi ...Sunday hai ...so no college ...we're is she mom ??? Did she go to devgad palace ???

UDAY - he laughs at his son's restlessness

MANAYTAH - beta if u give gap to answer ill tell u

AADHI - mamma bathao na

UDAY - junior u dint take adithi's call yesterday evening and u dint reply ...do u remember that

AADHI - but dad I thought of giving her surprise today ...directly by coming home

MANAYATAH - thumaara surprise mehinga pada ...jaake MAnaav apne behen ko ...she is angry with u

AADHI - margaya aaj ...k were is she ???

UDAY - in my bedroom ...

AADHI - he hugs uday " dad I'll be back 15 min " he leaves to meet adithi

ADITHI - she is playing game in her cell and. Pretending as if she is not aware of aadhi's presence

AADHI - hiii meri angel ...how are u ???? He pinches on her cheek

ADITHI - chi don't talk to me ...am angry

AADHI - sorry pari ...I thought of giving u surprise ...nahi tho ADITHY KI ithni himmath Jo yuvrani adithi of devgad KI call na lift kare ...he kneels down and catches his ear

ADITHI - she looks at him and gets up and leaves room

AADHI - he takes guitar and sings song ... Kabi Kabi adithi

UDAY - he smiles at his son and daughter...

ADITHI - she smiles and hugs AADHI ...

AADHI - he kisses her on forehead ... So collage mein kya chal raha hai ...how are my fans???

ADITHI - bhaii poocho math ... Thum nahi thaa na tho woh log dad ke peeche pada

AADHI - haha 😆

UDAY - k all of u get ready ...uncle brijraj called us for lunch to devgad palace ...

ADITHI - k dad I'll be ready in 15 min ...she rushes away

UDAY - he whispers in manaytah's ear " pls princess adithi ko kahi KI aise kapde math Pehna kar ...ithni chote kapde "

MANAYATH - uday ...I can't help it ...she won't listen ...if u want u tell

UDAY - how can I ...am her dad ...mom 's are supposed to tell such things

MANAYATAH - oo uday aaj kal KI bachi aise hi kapde pehnthi hai ...fashion hai ...take it easy

UDAY - wat !!??? Manyatah ur talking to her about this ...that's it

MANVEER - they sit on breakfast table with AADHI and 3 are waiting for adithi to come down

ADITHI - she comes down ...she wears a blue frock ...very short frock exposing her thighs ...

UDAY - he feels odd at his daughters dress ...he looks at MANAYTAH

MANAYATH - she ignores uday ..." nice colour adith "

ADITHI - thanks mom

UDAY - he gives death glares to MANAYTAH

AADHI - but mom don't u think it's too short ...

ADITHI - bhai pls Phir Se MATH shuru hojav ...it's fine

AADHI - no its not fine ...it looks as if u forgot to wear pant down

UDAY - he thinks inside " meri DIL KI Ba'ath kaha mera beta "

ADITHI - shut up bhai ...don't act like 18 th century guy ...

AADHI - it's good pari ...but u know we are going to meet grandparents also ...Dadaaji is coming today ...so pls atleast today a. Decent dress...I mean latest a dress which reaches knees plsss

AADHI - ur really disgusting bhaii ...k I'll wear ...let me eat first

UDAY - thank god finally ...everyone finish off eating

ADITHI - she goes to change dress

AADHI - hey sunshine I got a dress designed for ...pls wear it na

ADITHI - k bhai anything for u ...she opens da pack and finds a baby pink and whitish anarkali dress ..." bhaii I liked da colour though it's like Mughal ai zam dress ...CUTEEE colour "

AADHI - he smiles at her comments ...k I'll wait down ...come fast

UDAY - he feels happy seeing adithi in such a traditional dress

AADHI - so dad ur happy now ...

UDAY - yes beta ...

AADHI - but dad kya Karu adithi j Maasi pe gayi ...choti kapde pehnthi

UDAY - yes beta 😆

ADITHI - her dupatta falls down her legs and get irritated " chi such an irritating dress ""

MANAYATAH - adithi chup ho Jaavo ...all leave to devgad palace

EVERYONE INCLUDING SAMAY SEJAL SULABH AND SAAHAS ARE INVITED TO DEVGAD PALACE

AADHI - he takes blessings of brijraj n Komal and menaka

ADITHI - she hugs everyone

AADHI - he stamps on adithi's leg and signal her to touch their feet . Everyone observes that ...

ADITHI - oh my god bhai ...ur irritating me ...she touches elders feet

KOMAL - she smiles and tells " AADHI ur giving good training to ur sister ...am impressed aaj pari wore a traditional dress "

SANJAANA - she comes running to AADHI

AADHI - he hugs her " Sanju missed u a lot ..."

SANJU - I missed u too bhaii ...Sanju wears a jeans short showing her thighs and a sleeveless top ...

AADHI - Sanju yaar kaisi kapde pehnthi yaar

UNNATHI - pls AADHI tell her strongly

SANJU - bhaii pls ab mera dimaak math kaavo

ADITHI - ooy Sanju didi. Bhai got a dress for u also ...now go and wear ...this 16th century dress

AADHI - he gives dress for Sanju ...same pinkish white dress

SANJU - thanks bhaii ...she changes and comes back

VIJAY - seriously uday ...Sanju and adithi doesn't listen to anyone except AADHI ...yaar AADHI I must say ur a great Yuvraj ...handling girls is a big task ...I tell u

AADHI - Maama in that case am not good Yuvraj ...just a brother wen it comes to my sisters ...no politics

VIJAY - still AADHI ...u really have great control on everyone ...especially these two little vamps Sanju n adithi

SEJAL - she comes there ...she wears a white frock reaching her knees ..." hi everyone ..." she greets elders

AADHI - he looks at SEJAL ( drishti dhami) and gets mesmerized ...

ADITHI - she stamps on aadhi's foot and tell " bhai stop staring ...everyone is watching "

AADHI - he gets back to his position and talks to vijay

SANJU - she giggles ...bhaii bhi na

ADITHI - seriously Sanju didi SEJAL and bhai are like 18th century couple ...only looks and feeling shy ...no more further proceeding ...am fed up ...kuch DHAMAAKA Karna hoga

BRIJRAJ - AADHI can u pls get the file from my locker ...

SANJU - nice chance ...come we will take SEJAL upstairs and leave with bhai

ADITHI - k done didi ... " SEJAL come let us go up ..."

SANJU - yes SEJAL I'll show u my coin collections

UNNATHI - k u all go up ...I'll call u for lunch ...then u all come down

SUHAAS - ill also come with u

ADITHI - no SUHAAS ...only girls ...u wait here ...SAMAY SULABH will come then join them

SUHAAS - didi plas take me also ...I lie to see coin collections

MANAYTAH - Sanju n adithi ...come on ...SUHAAS is ur younger brother ...take him with u ...

SANJU - bhua pls ... Try to understand ...we girls want to spend time

ADITHI - k SUHAAS come after 10 min

SUHAAS - k didi ...he starts looking at clock

MANAYTAH - she kisses SUHAAS " mera pyaara bacha "

SANJU SEJAL ADITHI - all go up ...

SANJU - she had some pan in her mind



PRECAP -


SAMAY and SULABH will join them

Sanju and adithi leave AADHI and SEJAL in a room , alone

AADHI romancing with SEJAL

SAMAY staring at adithi and his feelings for her ...



THanks everyone for ur comments . PLS HIT LIKE BUTTON AND POST COMMENTS IF U LIKE IT ...

THANK YOU ...



NOTE - pls read character sketch on pg 96 to understand this update ...give ur precious feed back ...waiting for it


ANISHA ...AKA PUGGGYYY





Edited by puggyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome character sketch jiji!! totally loved it... waiting for the update :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
till now it was wonderulll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yayyy im the first too comment
Edited by hans1998 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great CS!👏 Looking forward to read about them! 😉Plzz continuee soon!😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hans1998

till now it was wonderulll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yayyy im the first too comment


Thanks dear

Am giving a lengthy one ...since its aft a long time

In 20 min will complete updating
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Roze12

great character sketch...👍🏼...addi as a crickter... woww...😳please update ASAP...😃..thanks for the PM...🤗...welcome back..😉


Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hans1998

update update update!


Updated fully 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
PROMO

SEJAL - so sweet of u AADHI ...I jus loved it ...thank u so much ...😊

SANJU ADITHI - they are watching both SEJAL n AADHI from window

SAAHAS - kya dekh rahe ho muje bhi dekh na hai

ADITHI - shut up ... Elders KI Ba'ath hai thum neeche javo

SAAHAS - oh really didi tho mein badi maa ko jaake bathatha hu KI AAp log kya karre

SANJU - adithi be polite to him ..." no SAAHAS mera pyaara bhai ...pls go down ...we will come in while n take u for bowling "

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IN MANVEER BEDROOM


UDAY - princess u still look da same one whom I got from chaul

MANYATAH - kyaa!!

UDAY - I mean da same face ...ur still beautifull like that ...he nears her and gives kiss on her cheek

MANAYATH - she feels shy n bends her head down

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UDAY - he is about to kiss manyatah on lips


AADHI - baam he opens door " dad I need to talk ...oops sorry " 😆😳

MANVEER - they get embaressed 😳

UDAY - he murmurs " juniorrr 😡 Again wrong time entry "

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ADITHI - she looses balance n falls on SAMAY

SAMAY -he holds adithi n gets lost in her eyes

ADITHI - sorry SAMAY ...woh galathi Se

SAMAAY - it's k ...Achaa LAGA

ADITHI - kyaa?!!!!

SAMAY - I mean muje Achaa LAGA KI mein ne thume girne Se bachaaliya


Maya

Princess Sanjana

Yuvraj Adhity Singh

Yuvrani Adithi Singh

Sejal



Samay

Sulabh

Sahaas



NOTE - see pg 96 to understand characters n story ...

THANK YOU ...PLS HIT LIKE BUTTON N POST COMMENTS IF U LIKE

Edited by puggyy - 12 years ago

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