manveer ss:AJNABEE EHSAAS.ch-30pg56 - Page 31

Originally posted by: harika04angel

awsm😊

thankz for cmnt

Originally posted by: Pooja_0910

Fantastic update...all the scenes were awesome...glad to see all family members of Uday supporting him except of his mom...its good to see Uday Tara bonding...looking forward for next

thanx 4 cmnt dear.

Originally posted by: priyash..

yr had hoti hai yr had hoti hai koi ithna kamina kese ho sakta hai maya tho bhoth badi kamini hai or priya or piya joote marne ka man karta hai karan bhai sabse bada kamina sabse sahi uday hai kithna cute hai yr or ye priya or piya zayad bolna aa rha tha yr pari ek thapad tho marvana tha yr had hoti hai !!! haa nhi tho !!! vese whole update jaisa hota hai awesome yr ab kabhi bhi piya or priya mai se koi bole na tho thappd tho zaroor mrva diyo haa nhi tho !!!!

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ha ni to jrur
thanx

Originally posted by: maneet..

ha ni to jrur
thanx

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc00ff">Pari firstly a very very big wala sorry for not getting much time to read ur upadtes and comments, but finally I did it, I read all ur updates in 3 days lol, wat an amazing ff pari👏, dil garden garden ho gaya😳😳, eagerly waiting to read the next chapter.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc00ff">I wish in this 3 months Manyata and Uday confess the love that they are holding back in their heart and she becomes fine😳</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc00ff">Sorry again pari, and love you🤗and a very very happy new year to you😛</font>

no need to sry swty.
its ok..
thanx 4 cmnt..
I m glad u lyk it new stry theme...
thanku


happy new year dear

Maanveer ss:ajnaabi ehsaass
part-23...
Manyata jagi hui h,wo preshan use karwat bdlnda
ka man kr rha h,pr wo ni kr pa ri h...
Wo na bol pa ri h uske sath jay soi h,jay rote rote
so gai thi.
manyata use dekh k smile krti h nd she thout'kitna
ganda mjak kra h na jay kismat ne mere
sath,mujhe dance krna pasnd lekin bhgwan g ko
ye pasnd ni tha to unhone hath pair chlana hi bnd
krdiya...
Main bolti bhoot jyada thi to unko wo bi pasnd ni
tha...
unhone meri awaaz chin li..
wo rone lgti h,to meri saanse mere pas kyn chod
di wo bi chin lete...ye is trh jeene se mrna aacha
tha...
Uday tarrice pe khada h preshan h,or ball se khel
rha h uspe apna gusa utar rha h...
To pdose(neighbour)me ek chota bacha aata
h'uday bhaiya,thoda aaram kllo,thak gye ho...
uday use dekhta h'tum kaun ho jao yha se rat ho
gai h.
Child'mela nam aaryan h,main apne papa ka beta
hu.
uday'aacha to tum apne papa k bete ho,or mumy
kha h?
Aaryan'mumy to aalam kl ri h,wo loj(roj)aarm krti
h,wo chl ni takti na,or dekh bi ni takti..
uday ruk jata h,or towel se apna muh pochta hua
beith jata h..
'or papa kha h?
Aryan'mele dady bhoot aache h,wo mumy ka
bhoot khayal rkhte h,loj khana bnate h,mumy ko
ol mujhe khilate h..
Uday'tum school jate ho..
aaryan'ha,loj jata hu...
Ok main jata hu,mumy mele bina ni toti..
uday'toti ye kya?
aaryan'ale,toti(soti) wo soke btata h.
uday uski aadte dekh k hsne lgta h'bye,gud nyt..
aaryan smile'hste huye aap bhoot tute lgte h..
or pta h mumy thti h mutibat sbki life me hoti
h,agar wo na ho to mja ni aata...qki life football
khelne jitna easy ni h..
Bye.dudenyt.
wo chala jata h...
Uday'bat to ye bi shi h,mushkile to apna kam kr rhi
h,hme to apna kam krna h...
I love u yar,ye to bhagwan k rup me aaya..aryan thanku...

Manyata ko pyas lgti h,wo awaaz bi internly
voice bi nikalti h bt jay soi h...
Wo thak har k khud tble pe rkhe paani se bhare glas ki trf dekhti h,wo apna mouth leke glas kr trf jati h...
Or wo apne hotho se glass ko pkdne ki koshish krti h,bt paani chalak k rh jata h,or wo bi glas ko pkdne k chakker me khud bi aage hone lgti h...

Wo bad se uska blanace bigdta h,girne wali hoti h tbi uday use aake use shouldr se pkdta h,jeise(manyata bad pe h,uday niche beith k use hug kiya h)position me...

Uday phle uske hair ko coverd krta h,nd uske bck pe hath lgata h,manyata feel hm hand on hr bck...she s feel embresd...
uday use cntinuosly dekh rha h..
Or phr uska cution thik krta h,or use carefuly beithata h..
or phr wo apne hatho se use paani pilata h...
Manyata use dekhti h or uday use dekta h to manyata najre chura leti...
Uday'ek bat btao,apne aap ko jhansi ki rani smjhna kb chodogi...
Manyata apni aankhe guse me use dikhati h.
uday'akad ni jayegi..
Smjhti rho apne aap ko jhansi ki raani...
Pta h main uper chat se kuch dekh k aaya hu..
Manyata without voice said'kya?
Uday'tumhein btau ya ni,chodo tumhare liye ni h.
pta h wo cheez ka srf dekhne ka mja h...
Manyata muh bnath h'plz
uday'muh mt bnao,aacha hint deta hu,taric pe jo bi h wo swarg se bi khubsurat h...
use bs dekhne ka mja h...

manyata feel sad ki wo jayegi keise?
uday'kheir chodo,tum aaram kro..
He thout'tumhein thik krne k liye jhuth ka sahar lena pd rha h...

Continuos
pari

awwsmmm pari kamini cant cmment long due 2 exams

It is really nice.
I loved uday-aaryan scene.