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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
awesome update
very funny part
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
awesome...
dialogues were superb...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Wow awsome. .
I was just holding my stomach and laughing like a maniac. .
And guess wat?
My stomach is paining like hell. . .
Bt,i realy lovd it.Superb. .
Lovd it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
hahaha laughed alot...]thnxx fr d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
ROFL đŸ€Ł đŸ€Ł
i was laughing n laughing all da tym
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
very cute ff...
waiting for more...
cont soon naa...
goa mein doosre ladkon ke saath flirt...hmm nt a bad idea if guys r also upto some mischief!
update!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Chapter 2

Recap: Goa jaane ki planning.

Christmas mein nahi hua toh Valentines Day pe hi sahi. Chale gaye Goa.
A plane full of people landed in Goa. The people contained Kriyansh, Manveer, a hell lot of baggage & a surprise.

K: Wah! Kya mausam hai! Hotel mein rakhke beach pe chalte hai.
M: Ha, ha. Of course. Waha pe toh bohot saare hotties honge na?
R: Nahi honge.
U: Aur honge bhi toh hum unko bhaga denge.
M: Bhagaya na toh mein tumhara korma bana dungi. Mutton ya chicken nahi. Uday korma. Kyu Rey? Khana hai kya?😡
K: Ha bolo...khaoge Uday? Rey korma?😡
R: Nahi bhabiji aap rehne dijiye. Hum mutton korma kha lenge.
U: Mein bhi kha lunga.đŸ„ș
K & M: Good boy!😃
Kria & M bhai move ahead. Bohot jaldi hai hotties check out karne ke liye.
Par in the mean time Uday 2 Rey: Rey bhai dukhi mat ho waha pe sirf larke nahi honge. Larkiyan bhi hongi!
R: Sachi muchi???
U: Ha bhai ha. Ab chal.

At the beach--

Kria's outfit-

Manyata's outfit--


The hotties on the beach were busy checking them out. They were also busy checking the hotties out when suddenly all the heads turned towards a tall woman.


It was Chandramukhi Chautala!!! Yay!!!
Following her were three of the most handsome men on the beach--



Seeing all this the girls were super jealous and the guys were super happy.
The police officers were the surprise. They also landed in the plane. Secret mission. They had been teamed up with CID!! ACP Praduman, Daya & Abhijeet. Even Gopi, Gulgule & Billu were there!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Full on dhamaka hone wala hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
sounds vry intresting malvu...
awesum update

uday korma...😆😆
their outfits...awesum

bt thoda chatu tha ...
nxt tym bada wala ...

update soon...😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was short but sweet...Manyata's colourful language for Uday haha poor guy...they all r at beach intresting...

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