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Posted: 12 years ago
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hehehe i lyk dis
nyc strt pls cntinue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤣 . . . . Wat a start..

kriyaansh . . & manveer both married 😛

in dono boys ki kuch zyada hi nhi baja di dono gals ne 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Great idea! Definitely going to be a laugh riot!!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Nice... Continue Soon ! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry i am very late actually i was busy with eid and so many guests were at my place...!😭
well its a very nice concept we will get a mixture of stories!😊
do update soon! and please first update ur previous ss the manveer mystery!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fresh and new idea i must say fantastic i love it please carry on i am waiting for it you bring a new creative work
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Posted: 12 years ago
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DO CONTInue PLEAAAjjj
COZZ its sachhi wala amazing...
do pm wen update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome 👏
Update Soon & Thnx 4 d PM 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guyz I am updating the first chapter after a long time. It is continued from the promo. So guyzzz enjoy!

Chapter 1

Now everyone has moved to the drawing room of the Raj Mahal. The famous Seemaji has brought them snacks. Rey was chit-chatting with Manyata and Kria was having a discussion with Uday.

Rey: To tum Kria ko kaise janti ho?

Manyata: Arre mein to bohot saal pehle Dehradun mein rehti thi.

Rey: Oh! Ek school mein parte the kya?

Manyata: Nahi! Mein to kabhi school hi nahi gayi.

Rey (aasman se tapka): KYA?

Manyata: Jee haan.

Rey: Kyu?

Manyata: Yaar bohot lambi kahani hai baad mein bataungi.

Rey (puppy face): Pleej pleej pleej!!!

The other side''

Kria: So Uday, poori kahani batao!

Uday: Hum aapko kahani kyu sunaye?

Kria: Arre, tumhare aur Mon'Manyata ki kahani!!

Uday: Oh wo wali! Uske upar hum ek kitab likh rahe hain. Wo parh lena sab pata chal jayega!

Kria: Wah! Kya naam hai us book ka?

Uday: Wahi to hum soch nahi paye!

Kria: Kya! Abhi tak soch nahi paye.

Uday: Do naam soche hai.

Kria: Kya?

Uday: 'Jainandini ki toh lag gayi' aur 'Akash ki baj gayi pungi'. Better kaunsa hai?

Kria: Story batao phir''.

At that moment Manyata turned to Kria and said'.

Manyata: Abbe teri Rey ko sambhal le. Pagal ho gaya he bechara tere saath reh reh ke.

Kria looked at Rey. Rey was still making a puppy face and saying: Pleej pleej pleej'.. nonstop.

Kria: Areee'.Rey ko Ranchi pagal khane bhejo.

Rey (stopping): Ranchi kyu Mumbai koi pagal khana nahi hai kya?

Uday: Ha hai. Mere friend ka ek bohot acha pagal khana hai. Waha pe khandani pagal rehte hai aur Urdu mein baat karte hai.

Manyata: Oye chup, be!! Usse Urdu nahi ati.

Kria: Toh wo seekh lenge. (looking at Rey) Kyu he na?

Rey: Nahi mujhe Hindi wali mein jana hai Urdu mein nahi!!!

M: Chup ho jayo sab log!! Pin drop silence.

Everyone became quiet at once. Manyata looked at them as if they were kids at kindergarten. Suddenly Uday piped up looking confused''.

U: Par princess, pin kaha hai?

Kria & Rey started giggling at once. Manyata gave Uday a you-are-so-dead look. Uday smirked back at her.But then even M bhai broke into a smile and Uday was all smiles too.

K: Jab mil hi gaye he to eksaath kuch karte hain.

R: Dekho meri wifey ka brilliant idea.

U: Ha ha dekh liya. Par idea acha hai.

M:Chalo iss Christmas ek trip par chalein.

Chorus: COOL!

U: Dekha ultimate idea mere wifey ne diya.

M: Ha ha aur laro kiski wifey zyada intelligent haike upar.

K: Aur hum chalein Goa bohot saare hot boys ke saath flirt karne ke liye.

R & U together (full dramatic style): NAHI!!!! Tum log aisa nahi kar sakte ho.

K : Hum kar sakte hain.

M (smirking Uday style): Aur aisa hi karenge.

U: Arre princess, hum aur nahi larenge.

R: Ye dosti hum nahi chodenge.

Todenge dum magar tera saath na chodenge.

K: Ha ha ho gaya. ab ye gadhe ke awaz mein zyada gana mat gao.

Rey looked as if offended to the core. Kria pulled his cheeks & the same ruthna manana routine followed it.

Seeing this Uday felt as if he was watching p*rn & covered his eyes. To stop this M bahi came to his recue.

M: Arre humare samne hi sab kar dalo ge kya? Kuch bedroom ke liye bhi bacha kar rakho.

K (leaving Rey): Jee haan! Ab jaldi batao kaha jana hai.

U: Buri buri kingdom.

M: Kya?

R: Lagta hai shinchan dekh dekh ke uska "Ata majhi satak li"!!!

K: Guys seriously.

M: Mmm...what about Goa?

R: Ha wahi chalte he.

U: Princess are you sure?

M: Kyu?

U: Nahi bas aise hi.

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P.S- Sorry agar ye bohot chota laga toh. I'll be updating the nxt chaptr in the nxt couple of days.

P.P.S- Is SS mein aur bhi kuch characters aa sakte he.

P.P.P.S.- For pms plz buddy me.

Edited by Malvaika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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rofl
i was laughing holding my stomach
its awesome

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