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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sirjee

waooo awsum..plsss continue soon..cant wait to know wat will happen next..


thanks dear! 😊
will update next part in a short time 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shals9

Wow! Amazing, super duper, fantabulous updates.


Pls update soon. Loving chaku waali manyata and shirtless halkat veda! πŸ˜ƒ


thanks dear! 😊
will update soon! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Dear it s amazing


I loved d cute fite ...n pia saving his name as "Halkat veda"πŸ˜†

Shirtless uday...(Steal my breath)

Continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tani23

Wow Dear it s amazing



I loved d cute fite ...n pia saving his name as "Halkat veda"πŸ˜†

Shirtless uday...(Steal my breath)

Continue soon😊


thank a lot yar!
pia saving his name as "Halkat veda"πŸ˜† 🀣
now what is she up to i don't even know πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello guys i am updating chapter four do read and like and comment!! will wait...so without any delay here u go chap 4




piya= 😲 was shocked to see a shirtless uday in front of her and that to holding her so so close!
uday= shall we?? πŸ˜‰
piya= pushed him with all her might and said hat parry kameny and got the knife out!!
now piya was all set to stab uday...hahaha ab tu bach muj say kuttay suar teri himat kaise hui aj to tera game bja dalu gi ma..
uday= 🀣 hahaha tum mera game bjao gi! kia cartoon ho tum wait a minute tum nay mje kutta suar kaha 😲
piya= han ye hi nahi tu kamina hai, tarak ka peepa hai khoon choosnay ala jonk sand kahi ka saying this she moved forward to him pointing the knife towards his face...! idhar aa tu salay aj teri sari aikri nikal dugi har waqt aik hi jaap krta rehta hai ma yuvraj udayveer hu...aik bat bta jub bhagwan dimagh bant raha tha to tu kia chanay bech raha tha halkat!
uday=🀣 🀣 oye miss TAPORI ye sub kahan say seekha... tum mje maro gi wow main bhi to dekhu k yuvraj udayveer ko kon mar skta hai 🀣...saying this he got hold of her waist again pulled her very close to him!
piya= haaww 😲 chor mje kuttay
uday= na πŸ˜ƒ
piya= ruk tu tje abi pta nai hai ma kon hu...lagta hai tu bhul gya us din road par ma na us larkay ki kia halat ki thi...she pushed him on the bed tied her dupata to her waist and came over him...!
this was beyond joy for uday piya over him...but he actually don't know what she is up to!
uday= kia bat hai hume to aj khud ba khud lado mil rahe hain...irada kia hai miss tapori!
piya did not reply him she was busy setting him! πŸ˜‰
uday= oye yee..kia kr rahi ho tum! πŸ˜•
piya got up and moved toward his head side she put his head in her lap and both his arms under her legs! (just imagine the position and laugh 🀣 )
uday was hell confused he didn't get what was she doing...
piya= hahaha bht zuban chalti hai na teri ab tje kon bachae ga she put the knife on his neck! but in the opposite direction in a way that the un sharp part was on his neck just to scare him!
uday= 😲🀒 oye pagal hatao ise hume lag jae gi hatao!!
piya= ku dar gya
Uday= dekho hum sirf mazak kr rahe thay ab ye chaku hatao 😑
piya= said proudly piya tje to oscar milna chaheye akhir tunay is ghamndi yuvraj ko dra dia 🀣 she was laughing so hard that she loosened her grip on uday...that was all!
uday= snatched the knife from her rolled over her and haha now it was his turn to scare his miss tapori!
piya= oo teri khair! ye kia kr dia piya sher k mu ma hath dia tunay!
uday= han to tum mje marnay lagi thi...wow tumhe to oscar milna chaheye na ku k tum na is ghamandi yuvraj ko dra dia hena? πŸ˜‰
piya= tu na such ma bht bada yeda hai...ma bhala tje ku maro gi says fully trying to butter him.. πŸ˜ƒ
uday= ab kia hua dar gai kia...thori der pehlay to world war 3 k liye ready thi tum...
piya=nai nai ma to bus mazak kr rahi thi...wo actually mje split personality ki problem hai! says makin a puppy face πŸ˜’
uday= acha...kitni bari drama queen ho tum πŸ˜†
piya= dekh mje jane day ja tje maaf kia ab ma chalti hu... 😳 says and tries to move!
uday= na na itni jaldi nahi miss tapori thori saza to banti hai! πŸ˜‰
piya= πŸ˜•
uday= slowly moves towards her face...now their lips are inches apart piya closes her eyes tightly waiting for the punishment! 😭 after waiting for 2 minutes she slowly opens her eyes and for her shock finds uday standing infront of her wearing his shirt with a very serious face...!
piya= immediately gets up fixes herself and is about to leave when uday tells her to stop...!
uday=comes forward to her and unties her dupata from her waist and puts it on her shoulder, and says aise bahar jao gi to subko lagay ga ki tum kabadi khel kr ae ho...! 😊
piya= 😊 smiles and leaves the room!


the next morning..
piya was working she glanced at her watch amm 8am abi halkat k anay ma bht wqt hai...thori der soo jati πŸ₯± hu itna kam tha k ma sari raat nai so pai 😭
she puts her head down and with in minutes she doses of to sleep!
its 9am uday comes to his office goes to the table but hears some strange noises and what he sees makes him 🀣 subha subha iske pagal pan ka dose mil raha hai mje!! πŸ˜† he finds piya snoring loudly poor girl was so tired!
uday= ye to sara jungle bech kar so rahi hai... πŸ˜† he wants to wake her up but stops because he finds her so cute sleeping...aww she looks like an angel
uday goes to his table and soon gets busy in his work! after a while he finds piya murmuring in her sleep...and it was quiet audible to him...
piya=(in sleep)chor mje halkat vede chor!!
he chuckled at her πŸ˜† ...ye sotay hue b meray baray ma soch rahi hai not bad πŸ˜‰
his phone rings and he moves out to attend!
uday=hello!
karan=hi uday! kahan ho yar aj kal tum miltay hi nahi!
uday=man i was too busy in work...lets meet in the mall...i am comming in 10 mins!
karan=ok see u then!
Uday goes to the mall and finds karan..
karan=hugs uday and says kahan hai tu yar kab say ye chand sa chehra nai dekha!
uday= chaand sa chehra to uska hai
karan= 😲 kiska??
uday= amm...kisi ka nahi tu apnay chotay say dimagh par zor na dal!
karan= achaa!! mje tje kisi say milwana hai?
uday= wow so finally tje b koi larki pasand a gai!
karan= tje kaise pta ma larki ki bat kr raha hu?
uday= mje sab pta hai!
karan= antaryami hai tu?
uday= nai...acha bta kon hai?
karan=ma na usko bulaya hai thori der ma ati ho gi..
uday=okk 😊

here piya wakes up after a long sleep! she gets a call and jumps of joy...
piya= kamini tje meri yad a gai?
the girl on phone is piya's best friend her name is tina..
tina= teri yad to har wqt ati hai meri jaan!
piya= to phr itne din kia coma ma thi?
tina= nai yar...acha tu dant bad ma lena abi meri bat sun..
piya=bol?
tina= mje 10 min ma mall ma mil tje kisi say milwana hai..
piya= kis say?
tina= sawal bad ma abi jaldi aja she says and cuts the phone not letting piya reply..
piya= ab kia kru ma kaam chor kr kaise jaon ye halkat mje kacha kha jae ga! waise lagta hai abi tk aya nai! aisa krti hu is say phone par permission lay leti hu!
she picks her cell and scroll to find his number when it comes she stars to laugh 🀣
calling halkat veda ...
HIS all 32 teeth come out giving a wide smile πŸ˜ƒ when he finds caller is piya...and this is very well noticed by karan
karan= 😊 kon hai jiska nam parh kr teri batisi bahar a gai!
uday=πŸ˜‰ and attends the call!
piya= hello sir! i need to ask something!
uday= sure
piya= i need half day leave i have some urgent work!
uday= okk 😊
piya= thanks bye 😊
karan= agr phone band ho gya hai to larkiyon ki tarha sharmana band kr!
uday= karan 😑
karan= acha sorry sorry!
uday= kab ae gi teri larki?
karan= kia matlab meri larki? πŸ˜•
uday= halkat vede mera matlab teri girl friend! oo shit what did i say!
karan= 😲😳 ye kia tha...ma dekh raha hu tera rawiya kuch ajeeb sa hai...mera matlb tu wo yuvraj type nai raha..us din phone par b behki behki batien kr raha tha or aj bhi! chakar kia hai boss larkiyon ko phasane wala kahi aj khud to nai phas gya!
hearing this suddenly piya came to his mind... πŸ˜• huh karan aisa kuch nahi hai bus waise hi kam ka pressure hai...
karan understands his friends nervousness and says...phone par kon tha?
uday= piya my PA!
karan= to tje piya nam ki bemari lag gai hai ab samjha teray 32 daant ku bahr a gye thay uske phone par!
uday= karan nooo😑 its not like that wo to is liye ku k wo bht funny hai πŸ˜†
karan=han han mje sab pta hai!
uday= meri chor apni bta...
here tina and piya meet in the mall and both jump on each other
piya= mje ku bulaya kis say milwana hai?
tina= blushes amm mera mr.right! 😳
piya= aww hugs her and says chalo mje b milwao?
tina= okk

karan=wo a gai
uday=kahan?
karan= wo samne
uday= finds piya comming with a girl his eyes got wide from shock he thought piya is karan's gf! he got sad by this! πŸ˜’ to ye tha madam ka imp kaam! isko to ma bad ma dekh luga or karan ko sari duniya ma ye mili thi... 😑
here piya is equally shocked to see uday she also thinks the same as he!
but when the come face to face they find karan and tina hugging each other!
piya-uday= πŸ˜²πŸ˜³πŸ˜›
uday= his happiness is beyond everything thank God Thank God he says and hugs piya! he keeps on murmuring Thank God! πŸ˜ƒ
piya-tina-karan=😲
piya= pushes him and glares at him😑
uday= so she is the one pointing at tina and trying to chane the topic!
karan= yess!! meet her she is my life tina and tina meet him my best buddy yuvraaj udayveer singh!
uday= naam to suna hi hoga πŸ˜‰
piya= phir say suru ho gya iska jaap
tina= han han bilkul suna hai apko kon nai janta!
uday= hena...piya looking at her raising his brows πŸ˜ƒ
piya=😊 ji
karan-tina= tum dono aik dusray ko jante ho?
uday= pulls piya to him and speaks ya she is my girl friendπŸ˜‰
piya=😲 she is hell shocked bua..aa she is about to speak when uday cuts her and says...
uday= come on sweety dont be shy from ur best friend!
tina= piya ki bachi tunay mujsay chupaya!
piya is about to speak uday again cuts her...
uday= why piya thats not gud! well let me tell u tina actually hume milay abi 1 week hua hai...to usko tym nai mila hoga!
piya= lekin...she is again cut by uday.
uday= lekin kia baby? he whispers in her ear
uday= chup chap jo ho raha hai honay do! πŸ˜‰
piya= tje to ma bad ma dekh lu gi 😑
tina= oye kahan kho gye dono...chal piya tje maaf kia come on guys lets have fun!
karan= right baby! lets go to the bar!
uday= yea lets go! tum dono chalo hum atay hain saying this he again holds piya by her waist!
karan comes to uday and whispers in his ear...to ye hai teri PA hmmm not bad πŸ‘πŸΌ
uday= (smirks) πŸ˜‰

in the bar...
they all are sitting on a private table as its uday's bar so he has made their privicy...!
uday= to tum dono ka age kia plan hai...
karan= kal hamare ghr sub a rahe hain shadi ki date fix krne!
tina= or tum dono bhi a rahe ho samjhe!
piya-uday=😊 han hum zroor aye gay...!
uday=sweety tum kal tayar rehna ma tumhe pick kr luga!
piya=its ok ma khud a skti hu...
uday=nahi tum meray sath ao gi
piya=no ma khd a jao gi
uday= ma na kaha na tum meray sath jao gi
piya=ma nay kaha na nai ma khd cahi jao gi
uday=nai tum mray sath jao gi
piya=nai
uday=han
piya=nai
uday=han
piya=nai
uday=han
piya= nai matlab nai
uday=han matlab han
the both kept on arguing and other hand karan and tina were just looking at both with wide smiles πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†
karan-tina=bus bus!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
tina= kia tum log han nai han nai
karan= inka ab ye haal hai to shadi k bad kia hoga πŸ˜†
uday-piya= shadi 😲
uday=smirking ye to hamara pyar hai kun sweety? πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
piya=😑
tina= ok ok stop fighting both of u! piya tum kal iske sath hi ana and thats my order!!
piya=buu...tt
karan=no if, no but, sirf JUTT
uday-piya-tina-karan= 🀣
piya=ok will come with him!
uday=πŸ˜ƒ
they all have a long chat and all become very good friends! but uday keeps on looking at piya with great affection!
this is noticed by both karan and tina and they pas smiles to each other! 😊

pheeewww man it was so long 🀒 thats all for this chapter...now i have been writing since the whole day 😭 and in return i want ur likes and comments!! πŸ˜ƒ guys check pg 1 i have updated tina's character shilpa anand first ridhima in dmg will play tina's character!
come on its my turn to read and ur to write!! πŸ˜›
love u all
zina😊
Edited by zinayrules - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res 9 will comment later i am in skul )

edited :

k sory sorry zina for the late comment
the update was super duper awesome
the dialogues were awesome
i love the hindi u write
manveer sweet nok johk was super duper
uday made manyata his girlfriend in-front of his friend 😲😲
wow 😳😳
i am so waiting for the next update
i so love manveer in this story
please update soon
i beg of u
thanks so so much for the pm
and update soon
thanks for lenghty update
u rock
hats off


Edited by vampire12345678 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsssmmmupdate zainiii
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piya is scaring udayy awww
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piya is sleeping and snoring
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uday hugs piya in excitment
😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
piya uday gf bf
🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣
piya uday han nai fight jst love it
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uday piya go to tina's home togather
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Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
****EDITED

I m 🀣 thinking about d fite ...

uday hawty ... d cute smile on his face ..haaye

karan n uday : i like d brother chemistry


OMG UV introduced Piya as his GF ,,,,n din let her speak nything πŸ˜†

Luving d cute n small fites b/w dem ..

Thanks for d PM

Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago
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Ye updating board mujhe bilcul posond nahi hai. So, commenting...:-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update dear:)thanx for the PM:)waiting for the next part..

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