MAKING UDAY AND J JEALOUS PG 19 CHAP 7 - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sirjee

waoo beautiful really lukng forward to read more..

thank u dear😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsomee...thank god uday ko baby ke bare me pata chla gaya precape is intresting update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
CHAPTER 6
Uday shouted mnayata name but couldnt find her so he run inside the security allowed him becoz he was a yuvraj he screamed

her name he saw a girl from back with same structure of manayata he tapped it but she was not manayata then a announcement

was given that the london flight is going to fly so plz the rest off the passenger hurry up.its was 12;00 now manyata has gone he

started to cry badly then he heard a voice .it was familiar
a girl was siiting and manegar was asking her several times that if she want anything and she said several times no but he asked

her again and agin which make her angry
M:meney kaha na hamey kuch nhe chaiye hamey kuch chaiye hoga to hum ley le gey ap plz jaiye
uday moved towards her slowly and slowly
the manegar got upset ,she felt bad
M:theel hei i am sorry hamarey behaviour ke liye ap humey one coffee dey dey okay now happy,the manegar got happy
manegar;thank u mam apke flight delay hogae or hamare to bhag hei key ap YUVRANI MANAYTA yahn per ho to un ke to

khidmat bane hei hum abhe coffe lekey atey hei
uday listend that name and got happy
u;manayta nhe gae wo yahe pey hei than god she moved towards her and taped her shoulder now mnayata was angry
m;ap kon hei (she turn towards the man who shocked her )
M:tum
U;manayta (he hugged her,but manayata didnt hug him
manegar;mam apke flight ka time hogaya hei chaliye or yeh apke coffee
u;plz mnaayataa mat jao plz
m;kyn na jaiye hum or plz yeh natak hamarey samney mat dekhou(manayat moved towards the entarance of the plane manayta

was upto enter when
u;(shouted)manayata tum pregnant ho yeh jana nhe cho ge key yeh bacha kiska hei
manyata stooped and turned around with wide open
m;kya bola tumney
u;tum maa banry wale ho or mei baap i am sorrr meney jo bhe kiya wo nashey ke halat mei kya magar mujhey uska pachtawa

nhe,mujhey ap or mera bacha chaiye or kuch nhe i am sorry for my behaviour humney apko samjhney mei galti krde sorry he

kneeled down everyone who were present ther were watching them a man was holding a coke he snatched it and pulled its cap

and said yuvrani manayata will u marry ur halkat veda
manayata was so happy and her eyes were filled with happy tears and nodded in eyes and he made manayata wore the cap ring
everyone clapped and then uday
u;i am sorry manayata
m;hmmm ab kitna sorry bolo gey chalo ghar chaltey hei
uday nodded and they went off
then they reached mahal were everyone was present and jay and jagat also uday was angry on jai he tried to move towards her

but he was stopped by manayata ...manyata move towards jay and hugged her and jay cried and
j;sorry jiji i will not do it again hamney ap key sath kitna galat kiya hamey maaf kardijiye
m;shhh its okay wesey bhe tum mere chote bhen ho or chotey galtiyan kartey hei or barey usey sodhartey hei so ismey guilty

feel karne ke zarurat nhe hei ,,,,uday was confused
u;yeh sub manayata kya hei
j;hum bata tey hei .humney tumhare or unnati ,jagat ke baat sune the or use waqt hamey hessas hua key mei galat kaam kar rhe

hun or isliye mei foran airport poche wahan meeny jiji ke flight delay kara de takey tum wahan pey pouch sakooo
i am sorry jiju sa
everyone was shocked but they were happy and then everyone hugged each other and jay kissed and jaggat and kneel ed down

and asked will u marry me he was happy and nooded in yes ds was standing and watching them with teary eyes manayat saw her

and was very happy she rapidly ran to her and hug her and ds also hug her
ds;hum bhot khush hei key ap or uday ek sath hei or isey bhe yeh khushi hei key ap maa baey wale hei this line maked manayata

blushed
ds;magar hum dono ko apke shaadi jald sey jald kardene chaiye isey pheley key media ko pata chaley
all noded and moved towards there respected room manayat got a call it was from her pa he told her all info about aksh manayat got planned and she dialled a number and said u have to kidnapped someone-----------------------------------
and he agreed aksh was sitting in his room in deep thoughts when his cell beeped it was a unknown number
p;hello aksh kesey ho
a'kon hei manayata
m:oh pechhann liya hamey wow thats nce
a'kyn phone kiya hey hamey batau
m;bus dil cha raha tha hmay tumsey milan hei plzzz
a;kyn milna hei ab kya chate ho
m;in sweet tone.tum
a;kya mei tumsey pyar nhe karta samjhe
m;kyn jhoot bol rahey ho mei jante hun tum mujh sey pyar kartey ho kartey ho na
a;(it melts his heart)kaha milna hei
M;suicide point theek 11;00 bajey bye akashhh
a;bye mei a jau ga
precap;
akash chap finish
manayata and uday marriage and manayata and his cute baby

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swetsurati

awsomee...thank god uday ko baby ke bare me pata chla gaya precape is intresting update soon.

thank u 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
It is awesome
Loved it
I could visualise the whole thing
And the cap ring idea it is from desi boys right
Great imagination
Keep up mahi
Loved the whole thing
Precap as usual is super duper interesting
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

It is awesome
Loved it
I could visualise the whole thing
And the cap ring idea it is from desi boys right
Great imagination
Keep up mahi
Loved the whole thing
Precap as usual is super duper interesting
Thanks for the pm

thank u and r8 guess and wats the plan dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
udayy soo sweetly propsed manyata,airport mein itne saare logon ke beech waooo!!!!!!!! all prbs slveddd,big happy familyy😊 thaank god akash ka chpter finish hone wala haii,waitng a lot for dat😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

udayy soo sweetly propsed manyata,airport mein itne saare logon ke beech waooo!!!!!!!! all prbs slveddd,big happy familyy😊 thaank god akash ka chpter finish hone wala haii,waitng a lot for dat😊

thank u ya pyar mei jaga thore dekhe jate hei😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update Mahi.👏 👏 👏 So everything is sorted out between Uday n Manyata.😉 Airport scene was nice.😛
J apologised for her mistakes, that was very good.😊Precap sounds exciting.😊
Thanks for the wonderful update n PM buddy.😊
Do update soon, waiting for the next chappy.😉
Good job.👍🏼
🤗 🤗
Edited by Vasishtha - 13 years ago

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