MAKING UDAY AND J JEALOUS PG 19 CHAP 7 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
superb...specially da luv making n uday having a bandage on his finger..waooo...
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Posted: 13 years ago
THANK U EVERYONE I WILL UPDATE IT ASAP
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CHAPTER 5 ]
uday was tensed and it was showing on his face it was late and manayata never go out in this time then a maid came in hurry and gived hm a letter and said that he found in yuvrani manayta room .when uday read that he was shattered he was crying in that letter manayata express her love for him he was crying then a corrier came it was for manayat he opened it and it was the reports of manyata when he opened it he was shocked it was written that manayaat is pregnant he was now no more sad he was angry that she betrayed her he is preganant he was thinking that the baby is of jagat and they both have done something then unnati came and asked is everything okay he showed her the reports and the letter she was shocked

UN:yeh sub kya hei dada
U:(angrily)manayat is preganat and can u believe that is ka baap kon hei jagat
UN;nahe dada aap yeh kya keh rahey hum mantey hei key manayta pregnant hei magar hamey nhe lagat key manayat yeh sy=ub
U:matlab yeh sub reports jhote hei
the a voice came from behind
JG:jhote to yeh reports nhe hei magar tumhare baatein khoote hei
U;tum yahan or yeh sub naatak karney ke koi zarurt nhe hei hamey sub pata chal gaya hei
JG:kya yeh key yeh bacha tumhara hei
U;yeh bacha mera kesey ho sakta hei meney to manayta key sath kuch
JG stop it man ,i thought key mei tumhey bata dun key manyata ja rahe hie tum usko rok lo magar nhe acha hei wo chale gae .arey kesey insaan ho apney bachey ko bhe apna nhe man rahey aesey baat kar rahey ho jesey key tumharaey or manayat ke beech kuch hua he nhe hei .tumhey sharam ane chiye tum yeh samjh rhaey ho key wo bacha mera hei yahe to tumhare galat fehme hei mei or manayta to sirf natak kar rahaey they tumhey uskey pass dubara laney keliye
U;magar tum dodno to shaadi kar rahey they
JG;abhe bhe tum aesey he samjhtey ho wo sahe khete hei uskey or tumhery pyar mei koi bhorrosa naam ke cheez nhe hei u knw usney sirf aesey he bola tha hum dono koi shaadi karney waley they wo manayat ney tumhey isliye j sey shaadi key liye kaha kyn key tumhey uspey barohsa nhe tha tum samjhtey they key manayata tumsey nhe payr karte isliye usney j sey shaadi key liye kaha kyn key wo yeh samjh rhe the key wo tumhey kabhi kush nhe reh paey ge wo khushi nhe dey paey ge jo shayed j dey dey magar wo galat the wo khushi to tum nhe dey patey usey
U:to phir wo shaadi sey bhagi kyn ...
UN was very angry on his dada ,he was upto cry she was feeling bad for mnaayata and she said angrily
UN;bas bhot hogaya dada ap kya samajhtey hei key manayata ney ap ko dhoko iya han wo gaye to zaror the magar akash ko akhe dafa milney wo ap sey pyar karney lag gae they wo to sub akash or jai ka plan tha or wo jay usney kiaya kiya nhe kiya apdono ko alg karney ke liye ap phir bhe nahe samjh paey key wo undono ko ke chaal hei jai ap ko or manyata ko ek sath nhe dekh sakte usney to ds ko nhe qoma mei dhakela hei or ap she cried
uday broked up and was crying very badly and jagat supported him
jg abhe bhe der nhe hue hei uv mnayat ke flight 12;00 bajey hei or abhe 11;00 bajey hei jaldi jau or apne princess ko wapis lau
uday wiped his tear and nodded in yes and ran towards his car then his car was not workoing so jagat gived him his car and he droved of it was very traffic and the time was 11;80,,,,20 minutes were left uday opened his car and ran and there was a huge tarffic it was now 11;85 ..15 minutes were left and uday reached ther in 10 minutes by ruuning it was 11;95
precap;
uday and manayta together
jay and jagata together
akash chappter close :P:)
manayat and his cute baby

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome
I loved it
The whole thing was fab
Loved how the truth came out
I could picture the whole thing
Beautifully written
I loved the dialogues
Precap is so nice
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Awesome
I loved it
The whole thing was fab
Loved how the truth came out
I could picture the whole thing
Beautifully written
I loved the dialogues
Precap is so nice

thank u really the dialouges were were nce i didnt liked it but ya the next xhap is more intresting
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fab. update Mahi.👏 👏 👏
Thank god Jagat cleared everything to Uday.😊
Precap was so exciting, waiting for the next chappy.😛
Do update soon buddy.😉
Great work.👍🏼
🤗 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
waoo beautiful really lukng forward to read more..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mind-blowing update! 😃 Great precap! 👏 Continue soon! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

Fab. update Mahi.👏 👏 👏

Thank god Jagat cleared everything to Uday.😊
Precap was so exciting, waiting for the next chappy.😛
Do update soon buddy.😉
Great work.👍🏼
🤗 🤗

thank u 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Manveerfan123

Mind-blowing update! 😃 Great precap! 👏 Continue soon! 😉

thank u

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