A Hate- Love Story: Ch-15 pg- 56 (Updated 27/11/16) - Page 7

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Wow nice update continue soon n add me ur pm list plszz
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ummm... I cant compare varun nd ashish...none of them can dominate each other!!! Nd as ashish is lead soo i cant see varun as 2nd lead or supoorting actor sooo for me its rithvik for role of another yuvraj...
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😛awsmmm storylineee!!!!!!!!!!
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Plz... update next chapter plz.. fast..
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read all in a go
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your punishment is from now you have to update asap
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READ ALL D CHAPTERS

LOVED IT LOADS

CONTINUE SOON DEAR
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CHAPTER- 4
Helloo.. Manveerians... I hope you all are fine. First of all a big thank you to Mahi because of her help so many of you have read my story and liked it So I would just like to make a small request to the ones who had read the story earlier.. please read the cs and chapter 2 again as I have made some changes..

There is a song in the update... I have changed some words from the lyrics... the song originally was sawli si ek ladki.. and I have changed it to gori si ek ladki.. please do read the lyrics and the dance steps are same as in the video.. please see the video too

Now here's the update...

Suddenly they all hear an announcement...

Gori Si Ek Ladki
Gori Si Ek Ladki Dhadkan Jaisi Dil ki -2
Dekhe Jiske Woh Sapne Kahin Woh Main To Nahin
Gori Si Ek Ladki Dhadkan Jaisi Dilki
Dekhke Jiske Woh Sapne Kahin Woh Main To Nahin
Gori Si Ek Ladki
Uski Ghani Zulfon Mein Kiski Taqdeer Hai
Uski Haseen Aankhon Mein Kiski Tasveer Hai
Aata Nahin Mujhko Yaaken Par Kahin Woh Main To -
Nahin
Gori Si Ek Ladki
Yahan Wahan Kahan Kahan Jaane Rukti Hai Uski Nazar
Waise To Main Hoon Bekhabar Itni To Mujhko Khabar
Koyi Bhi Hai Hai Woh Hai Yahin
Par Kahin Woh Main To Nahin
Gori Si Ek Ladki Dhadkan Jaisi Dilki
Dekhke Jiske Woh Sapne Kahin Woh Main To Nahin
Gori Si Ek Ladki Dhadkan Jaisi Dilki
Dekhke Jiske Woh Sapne Kahin Woh Main To Nahin -2
Kahin Woh Main To Nahin

Ok guys I think u all have read the lyrics now before seeing the video there are a few things that u should keep in mind...

1. Please miss the starting part of Hrithik Roshan and Rani Mukherjee.. 2. Hrithik Roshan is Uday, Rani Mukherjee is Manyata, Uday Chopra is Karan and there is no Kareena Kapoor.. 3. The part where KK dances with HR is Uday dancing with Manyata.. and like wise others... 4. And please also miss the HR playing the guitar part

So here is the link.. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6nPSaUqjtQ4

After the dance all the youngsters made a group or I should say a "gang" for meeting each other...

Manyata: Kaha tha tu Karan (hitting him on his arm)

Karan (In playboy tone): Tereko pata hai na ye ladkiya... peeche hi pad jaati hai..

Manyata: Acha toh phirse ladki... Tu ek ladki par tik kyu nahi sakta...

Karan: Kya karun yaar kabhi wo tikne wali mili hi nahi' jisko bhi try karta hun sari bakwas nikalti hai

Manyata: Bakwas ladki nahi tu hain acha btw meet (pointing towards uday) Yuvraj Udayveer Singh and (to uday) (pointing towards karan) this is.. (interrupted)

Uday: Yuvraj Karanveer Singh

Karan: Haan Manyata tum hume kyun introduce kara rahi ho... we know each other very well..

Uday: Haan I was not in touch with you but I was frequently talking to everybody else.. (smirk)

With this Manyata totally boils with anger

Manyata (with a frustrated look): Karan mujhe tumse yeh umeed nahi thi' Uday nahi par tum toh mujhe bata sakte the na..

Karan: Sorry madam ji par this was a surprise for you..

Manyata murmers to herself yes this was the worst surprise I could ever get...

Manyata: Acha let me call Aditi Di... Dada ne kaha tha ki she'll be here at the party.. but abhi tak aai hi nahi..

Suddenly someone says something from behind:

Aditi: Phone karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai... I am here..

Everybody turns around to see Yuvrani Aditi Kumari

Manyata: Di aap aa gaye.. pata hai main kabse aap ka intazar kar rahi thi...

Saying this she hugs her...

J/Unnati/Vijay (pushing Manyata aside): Arre hame bhi toh milne do..

They all greet her...

Unaati: Di aapko aane mein itni der kaise ho gayi...

Aditi: Arre batati hun pehele thodi saans toh lene do... main pehele hi aa gayi thi par brij aur giri uncle ne rok liya tha...

After a small conversation they all went to have dinner... Slowly everyone left now they were all relaxing on the tables and chit chating when a servent came upto them and told them that they are called by Giri and Brij in the hall... Without any delay they all went to the hall...Brij and Giri were already there waiting for them. They offered the youngsters to sit. All of the sat opposite the two...

Brij: Manyata beta hume aapse kuch baat karni thi.

Manyata: Haan dad kahiye...

Giri: Baat aisi hai beta... humne aur aapke dad ne bachpan mein aapka aur uday ka roka karvaya tha... Before he could continue Manyata interrupted...

Manyata (With an utterly shocked expression on her face): Kya??

Brij: Haan beta... hum dono chahte the aur chahte hai ki humari aur Jaigarh aur Devgarh ki itni purani dosti ab rishtedari mein badal jaye...

Giri: Aur vaise bhi aap aur Uday bachpan mein saath mein rehte the... aur aapki ankho mein dikhta tha ki aap ek doosre se pyaar karte hai...

Manyata: Giri uncle... kya please aap aur uday thodi der ke liye bahar jaa sakte hai...

Giri looks towards Brij and then walks out of the hall with Uday

Precap: Manyata and Brij's talk...

I am really sorry... there were no manveer scenes in this update and maybe not in the next one too' I am really sorry...

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Edited by nityatandon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome really loved it after a long time u update i wonder if manyata will agree to marry uday please update soon and thanks for the pm

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