Fan Made EPISODE 28 updated :) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

RESERVED.😉

EDITED.🤗

Wow Chotu what an update yaar.👏 👏 This was your first fanmade episode as a writer, I must say you did a great job Chotu.👍🏼 Thannxxx Jiji...!!😳

Firstly I'm really very very very sorry for the late comment, Stuck with my studies,😳 but now I'm free n reading all the pending updates n episodes.😉 awww...no probs..atleast comment toh kiya😆

You're not only a good editor⭐️ but a great writer ⭐️ also.😊 Fab.Fab. episode.👏 👏 👏 Thanxxx a lot😳

K. Let's start with Manveer scene Manyata was feeling so tensed cos of AD's words n now UV wanted to cheer up Manyata n made a plan.😉 a secret plan...husshhh..!!!!😉

Morning scene of Manveer so so cute n sweet, I loved it.😊
I love this coochie-coochie bandru🤣

UV arranged a surprise for Manyata in a hotel wow.

UV-Manyata -VB-Unnati convo was nice. both couples surprised to see each other.😆 surprise-surprise😆

Manyata's dialogue," Maine sun liya." n " Maine phir se sab sun liya." Hahahaa loved it.😆 That was my fab dialogue...hahaha😆

Date scene of Manveer n Vijay-Unnati was so nice. Did I write abt Manveer date..???😕

AD was what trying to do? 😲 n after watching J- Jagat's news he was smiling evily.😲 Precap was really exciting.😛 Thanxxx to Shana dii for the precap😃

Chotu episode was simply, beautifully n sweetly written.👏 I really enjoyed it at the time of reading.😊 alright..now stop dancing😆

Simple n beautiful dialogues. After so many time I read moniya's dialogue in Manyata's style.😛 Moniya's dialogues in Manyata's style...wow..!!!🤣

Thanks for the wonderful update.🤗 Great job Princess👍🏼 n thanks for the PM also.😊 Nah..I didnt pm u..😆

Once again I'm really sorry for the late comment.😳

MAST EPISODE CHOTU. 9.5/10 from my side.👍🏼 Agar pure no. dete toh sabko lagtega humne apne chotu ko jyada marks de diye.😆 haha...alright..love the Bandru😆

HUGS .🤗 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: AKlover-16

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

🤣 🤣 Chotu humeein sach mein yaad nahi hai ki tumne humein episode PM kiya tha ki nahi wo toh comment mein Thanks for the PM likhne ki aadat ho chuki hai na isliye likh diya tujhe kya karna rakh le thanx humare paas kaafi stock hai Thanks ka.🤣 Nahi Manveer date nahi tha par humne imagine kar liya.🤣

WO coochie coo bandru humara bhi fav. hai.☺️

K Humne dance bhi stop kar diya hai.😆 Humein ye LOL wala smiley emo accha nahi lagta.🤣 Haan Moniya's dialogue in Manyata'sstyle.🤣 MONIYA KAHIN KI.🤣 TU karke baat karti hai apne itne sexy hubby se.🤣

Originally posted by: AKlover-16

achhi baat hai...fir hum rakh lete hai ye Thanxx🤣waise pm ke liye thanxx bolna toh sabka aadat ban chuka hai😆
Manveer date toh har koi imagine karta hai...hum toh Riaveer date imagine karte hai☺️
yeh LOL wala smiley mujhe bhi achha nahi lagta...🤣
mai bhi 'tu' karke baat karungi apne sexy hubby Uday se😳🤣

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

CHOTU PAHLE WALA PROFILE PIC JYADA SEXY THA.☺️ YAAR TU JAKE ASHU KI BOLI LAGA HUMARE UV PE NAZAR MAT DAAL YAAR ITNA PROTECT KARNA PADTA HAI USSE.😆 SABKI NAZARON SE USKI KOI NEELAMI NAHI HONE DUNGI HAAN NAHI TOH.☺️

NAHI TU KARKE NAHI BAAT KARNA BURI BAAT BURI BAAT.☺️ JAANU KARKE KAR SAKTE HO LEKIN TU.😲 🤣 HUMAR UV KI IZZAT KI BAAT HAI YAAR.😉

Originally posted by: AKlover-16

Oh achha...fir hum apna profile pic change kar de kya..???😲 Waise UV toh already humara hai..ab Ashu ko bhi lena chahti hu🤣
UV KI NILAMI TOH WAISE BHI NAHI HOGI...HUM HONE NAHI DENGE☺️☺️ AUR MUJHE "TU" KARKE HI BAAT KARNI HAI..PLZ PLZ...!! MEKKO ACHHA LAGTA HAI🤣

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

Nahi tu jake apni twiny ke pati pe nazar daal UV ko toh humare liye chod.😆 haan yaar wo pic ki aadat hai humein mast tha.😉 Ek baat pe agree hoon UV ki neelami nahi hone denge humara UV anmol hai.☺️ uski koi kimat nahi hai.😉