Love Vs Fate... FF (chptr 28 pg 146 - Page 45

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princessSonia

HHHiii Krishna.

D update was jjjzzz awesum. 😃😃😃
LOVED d scene betwen neelima n mansa❤️❤️

"Uday couldn't take any more'Iam not a piece of meat dad..I am a human I have my own feelings..aur jahan tak manyata ke sawal hain..woh jaldi hi aapke saamne honge shayad aaj hi'(staring to giri's eyes) aur jahan tak aapki do kaudi ki ladki ki baat hain bahut jald aap usse izzat dena seekenge dad'bahut jald . He turned on to leave and whispered behind'Mansa will surely come between me n J '.surely'..

Uday left the room leaving behind a surprised DS,Brij n Giri'"


Dis was d best scene according me!!!!

M SPEECHLESS!!!!!!!

do cont soon😃😃

Plz vil u PM me wenver u Update!!!!! PLz PLz Plz

Thanks dear😊...
thanks a lot 😊
will update soon and surely pm u dear🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swetsurati

wowww...amazing update..love it...i m confused about rohan & manyata are they together????????jagat and J was awsomeee...nilima is sooo..caring...uday is getting jealous...last scene was awsmoee...Iam not a piece of meat dad..I am a human I have my own feelings...beautifull update...update soon thanx for PM.👍🏼

thanks buddy...will update n pm u...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx

Gr8 job di 👏 👏 👏
loved the update ⭐️
The way u described manyata and neelima's relation ws superb 👍🏼
OMG!! Uday ne jealous hona chalo kr diya 😉
Rahan is jst a 'good friend' ya kuch or 😛
Jagat -jeh scene ws very cute 😊
Waiting fr the party 😊
thanxx fr such a gud update 🤗 ❤️

thanks dear...rohan n Manyata are above friends...party is here toni8...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arna753

nice chap.😊 i think uday started feeling for mansa. esp wen rohan was touching her. giriraj's too irritating. waiting 4 the revelation.

waiting for the update.

ya uday do...thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Plz update soon
Eagerly waiting for the part
Plz plz plz reveal mansa's real identity soon
It will b a big slap for brijraj and giriraj
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roshni101

Plz update soon
Eagerly waiting for the part
Plz plz plz reveal mansa's real identity soon
It will b a big slap for brijraj and giriraj

ya it will be a shock for them..infact a slap on their ego...
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Posted: 12 years ago
update next part soon waiting...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 14


All went to get ready for party '

At party'mansa was in a pink gown while J was wearing a blue one'Both were looking extremely beautiful that any eyes would drop for them..Once getting ready mansa and J went to Meenakshi's room to get her ready'She was wearing a red lehenga '

At first Meenakshi and Pradik entered with hand in hand and following Jagat,Mansa,J n Rohan came down together.Mansa excused herself and made J hold Jagat 's hands and herself caught Rohan's hand..The four were looking great and strong enough to seek everyone's attention.

Uday looked at her and for a slip second mansa's eyes fell on him..She didn't knew that it would be a mistake..Their eyes were on eachother until she realized they are down the steps in midst of guests.

Rohan's jerk pulled her out of his eye's field.He holded her by waist and took her to his friends. She turned back and looked towards him. Uday 's eyes who were so calm and serene all of a sudden turned pale for her to notice and soon he knowingly diverted his attention to the people around only to realize that Giriraj was noticing him all these time.

He gave an angry frown to him but Uday just ignored it and got involved in talk with Jagat.

Unnati gave a dissapointed sigh and left.

DS who was seeing all these decided to talk to Uday..She excused herself from party and reached Uday..

DS: Uday bete we need to talk ..

Uday: yes DS ..

DS looked at Jagat and he understood the meaning..

Jagat: c u latr Uday'

DS guided Uday outside to lawn 'On reaching DS was silent and so do Uday. Finally Uday broke the silence

Uday: Dadisaab whats it'

DS: That's what I want to know bte.

Uday gave a confused look'.to which DS continued with a smile..shayad aap humse kuch kehna chahti hain aur hum yahan aapki baat sunne ayi hoon. (Giving a smirk) I hope u got it Yuvraj.

Uday looked in to her eyes which hid a fake yet meaningful smile'The lady have never changed..Ri8 at the day he saw her as a little boy she has been the same. Bina kuch kahe hi sab kuch keh dete hain aur bina kuch sunne hi sab kuch sun lete hain'hippocrat yet truthful' cruel yet lovely. He has always admired the women since his childhood.

DS: hum aapke jawab ke intzaar kar rahi hoon bte.

Uday returned a smile and turned his face opposite to her'He whispered in a calm ye composed yet loudly 'Mansa Dixit is a scotophobia patient '

For a moment DS was silent .She felt as if the soil below her leg is flowing off'Uday was waiting for a split second and then turned to see the reaction.He saw her standing as though she got the greatest shock of her lyf.He smirked at DS and walked off..He was going away from her but a single word stopped him'

We need proof '

Uday heard it clearly but didn't wanted to stop himself so just walk off '

DS stood there for a while breathing in fresh air which she wanted the most at the moment. Finally her foot showed the way inside'

On reaching back Uday's eyes searched her but she was not thr'He saw her choti n dad busy in talk .

Uday ran his eyes all around but was disappointed seeing her missing..

Meanwhile Unnati who was waiting to see khushi moved to jagat ..jagat whr's Khushi..I mean won't she be attending the party.

Jagat: ahh no Princess unnati she won't be attending the party due to some personal issues ..(It was khushi's mom's death anniversary .Jagat was aware of it bt then he didn't wanted to publisize it)

The party was on full swings and thn in between all of a sudden lights went off'

While other's were confused with the untimely lights off, a spot light fall on rohan'He was wearing an elegant black suit smoking the senses of all girls present there'.

Soon music started playing on background'.

His face was enlightened with a deep romantic smile'.

[Bin Tere Sanam, Mar Mitenge Hum
Aaa Merii Zindagii
Bin Tere Sanam, Mar Mitenge Hum
Aaa Merii Zindagii'..]

He raised his hands and pointed it towards the stairs in waving his better half'.

Mansa ran down the stairs to his arms'

[ Aanaa Hii Padaa Sajanaaa
Zaalim Hai, Dil ki, Lagii.
Aanaa Hii Padaa Sajanaaa
Zaalim Hai, Dil ki, Lagii ].

He was twisting her continuously and she falled off to his arms..

All other's were enjoying it. Except two people who were glaring eachother

[Tere hi dum se hogi, dil ki muraad puri
Tere bagair jaanam, hai zindagi adhoori]



Aiye mere hanseen, ab na jaa kahin, aa meri zindagi

He hold by her waist while she was partially hugging him and caressing his cheeks.

[Aanaa hi padaa, sajana, zaalim hai dil ki lagi]

Both of them were purely in full on romantic dance and moved to side'.

[Bin tere sanam...]


Now the projector was on and something flashed'it was a news paper saying'.Princess Neelima is no more a part of Raigarh Riyasat'

Mansa with sad face'.and holding his hands'


[Ye jaankar balamji, thaami hai teri baahen

Sahani padengi sabaki, kaanto bhari nigahen]-2

Rohan caressed her cheeks and took her in air on his arms while holding her waist'

[Sab sahenge hum, aur hansenge hum, aa meri zindagi

O ho ho, aanaa hi padaa, sajanaa, zaalim hai dil ki lagi]



The song ended with mansa partially on air and partially in his arms'.

While a photo was being flashed on background'Showing the old picture of Ritesh n Neelima..Devgarh and Jaigarh family members were shocked by seeing the picture'especially seeing the girl in Neelima's embrace..Komal clutched on to Brij's hand ..while J clinged to Vijay

Komal: Maharaj humaribeti'

Brij(consoling her): komal sambhaliye apne aapko...haan humari beti hi hain woh pls sambhaliye

Before they could recover the light was on and projector went off disappointing several eyes'.

And rohan and mansa came to centre along with Jagat Meenaksi n PradikHey dad mom this was for u'..Rohan announced it loudly ..Neelima's eyes were moist by the time. Just thn neelima noticed that her husband was near her'

Ritesh Khanna(neelima's husband holding her waist): hi beautiful'.

Neelima screamed and got in to his arms without realizing that the lights was on'

Both were still hugging that Mansa came up to them humming..Khulam khulla pyar pyar'.

Neelima got off the hug and holded her ear playfully'isiliye aap aur rohan humme apne practice dekhne nahi de rahi thi'

Mansa smiled with naughtiness and neelima hugged her with all love and passion'Rohan also hugged his dad..

Ritesh: vaise ye idea kiska tha'

Mansa and Rohan soon pointed towards meenakshi'.

Meenakshi giggled and Pradik announced'.Today its not just Mr.Pradik and Meenakshi's wedding anniversary but also the anniversary of Mr. Ritesh n Neelima Khanna which is unknown to many people present over here..Congrats bhuasa and Ritesh Uncle'

Ritesh's hands was now encircling Neelima'and they bowed in thanks'

All congratulated the couple except Devgarh n Jaigarh people who was still in shock.But Mrinalini knew it was the time to act.

Mrinalini Devi came to Neelima and congratulated the couple.It was the first time she was meeting neelima's husband..More than congratulation something else was running in her mind'But for the first time she was in shortage of words. She didn't knew how to ask n were to start

Neelima saw the disturbance in her face and asked'Milu aunty is everything fyn..U seems to be tensed'

DS: ahh beta who hum aapse'

Just thn Rohan disturbed them with his announcement'can we have the couple on the floor.

Soon Rohan came and called mansa for dance '

All came to dance floor while Uday stood out starring at mansa'

Mansa was involved in dance but thn she culd feel the hot gaze on her'His eyes was inviting him.His loneliness was irritating her.

Finally she couldn't take it anymore and excused Rohan moving to Uday..

She went and stood near Uday…He was waiting for her all these time

Mansa: aap aise kyun khade ho..

Uday(looking straight at her eyes): kaise…

Mansa was left out of words ..she just stared blankly to avoid question…

Mansa: J kahan hain..dikhayi nahi de raha…

Uday: woh aunty komal ki thabiyat thoda bigad gayi toh unke paas hain woh

Mansa: what ? kaise? Hws she now..doctor ko bulaya aapne..

Uday just stared at her blankly..Finally she jerked him…uday kuch toh bolo…

Uday: who kaun tha uss picture pe…

Mansa didn't got him …ahh uDay I was aking hws J's mom…well can I see her…

Uday nodded in yes and took her by hand from there..She was shocked by his sudden hold thn she ignored it and followed him…

Meanwhile Jagat was already near komal at her room..and doctor was checking her…Komal was unconscious…Mansa came and stood near Jagat and J..

When mansa reached there all others looked at her …She felt as if she is an alien bt still stood their..

Doctor has finished checkup by now and turned to brij who was standing with Maharaj Prithvi n DS.

Doctor: maharaj inke blood pressure high hua jiske wajah se ye behosh hui..lekin ab chinda ki koi baat nahi..thodi derr mein hosh aajayenge..

Brij nodded and doctor left…

Mansa stared blankly at Komal while brij announced…

Brij: itna beed matbanao kamre mein ..Maharani ko aaram karne dijiye…

Mansa clearly got indication and soon left the room after giving a innocent stare to Uday…Jagat who was pissed by Brij's behavior was about to accompany Mansa but she stopped him and herself went out.

Brij: Maharaj prithvi woh kiske thasveer the..i mean jo dance ke beech dikhaya jaa raha tha…

Prithvi: woh toh neelima aur Ritesh ki purani thasveer hain…

Brij: haan who kaun thi joh Neelima ki godh pe the…

Prithvi: neelima ke gogh pe shayad Rohan the.

Brij: nahi prithvi..woh ek bacchi thi..woh…

Jagat replied ….mansa….it 's mansa Maharaj Brijraj...Saying these Jagat moved out giving a angry stare while all others stood shocked


To be continued...

Hope u enjoyed..pls leave back ur suggestions

Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsmmm episode yar snow love it muaahhh
Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
jaldi se baki part bhi update kardoo!!!!!!😊 ds and uday's convo was suprbb!!!!!!! will add furthr comnts aftr ur full updtee!!!!!!

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