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Posted: 13 years ago
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Episode 26


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Hey guys, this is the first time I'm writing a DEK epi 😳

I'd just like to thank three people, Anam meri mummyji, wishy and also shana di.

Without them, I'd never be able to write the epi, and also thank you to all my friends for encouraging me to write.


Okay that's enough with the talk, do enjoy reading 😳___________________


Brijraj paces back and forth in the room, deep in thought. The place was dead silent with the exception of the buzzing electricity. He then stops his pacing, and freezes on the spot.


"Yeh mein kya kardiya?" he says to himself, hitting his forehead hard. "My own daughter... chi chi. Why did I even go and get drunk last night?"


He goes over to the bed and sits down. Brijraj hides his face in his cupped hands; ashamed.


"It was all my fault. What if something happened to her? Brijraj, your a rubbish father," he continues talking to himself.


"I have to stop all this."


Suddenly, two people appeared from no where. He recognised them. One was all dressed in white whilst the other in black. These two people were his very own self.


"Brijraj? You want to stop all this?" The man wearing black asks. "Okay, your friends got a bit drunk but it wasn't you. Why do you want to stop? You have always wanted to be with Maya. Now you finally have the chance. What are you waiting for?"


Brijraj considers what he said. "I guess your right. I have always wanted to be with her..."


The other person hits the guy wearing black, and he disappears.


"No, no Brijraj. Don't listen to him. Your making a big mistake. Leave Maya, you have a whole family now. They are all dependant on you. Devgarh will fall if you go running after Maya! You won't ever get a wife like Komal, and neither daughters like Jainandini and Manyata," The person dressed in white says.


"I guess your right too," Brijraj says. "I do have a family... one I've hurt due to my actions. I- I will leave Maya..."


**


A lady rushes into the police jail who is soon stopped by the police. She uncovers her face from the hood she was wearing and whispers to the police man. He nods and allows her past. The cell is unlocked and she is allowed in to talk.


"Abhay?" The women asked; her voice was perfect. Like honey trickling down from a spoon, with an addition of a cat purr. The guy turned around to see who was visiting him. He hadn't expected anyone to come and meet him here in his cell.


"Tum? Yahan?" Abhay asks shocked. The women smiles evilly and walks closer to Abhay.


"Haan jaan, mein yahan hoon. Want to know why?" She adds with another purr.


"Kyun?" He says, trying to avoid her purrs and falling for her honey-like voice. This could only mean one thing; she wanted something. "Tell me Minakshi, what do you want?"


She looks at her freshly painted nails; her smile still plastered on her face. "How convenient is it? Seems like we've got the same enemy."


"Yeh tum kya kehrahi ho?" Abhay asks confused.


"I'm sure you already know who it is. The one who got you in here..." She trails off, waiting for his reaction. Abhay stiffens up, realising who she had meant. Satisfied from his reaction, she carries on speaking. "Don't you see Abhay, we have the same goal. Only together can we both get the revenge we want."


"Hmm... I think how you think Minakshi. Together we can break their marriage," he says with an evil smirk plastered on his face.


"So this means we're on the same side?" Minakshi asks.


"Yes, we are," AD replies to her. "But how can I do anything if I'm stuck here?"


"Oh don't worry about that. You'll soon be out of here. Very soon," Minakshi tells him.


"But how?" He asks.


"Money."


**


Meanwhile, Manyata was in her room reading when her phone started ringing. She puts her book down and reaches out for her phone and picks it up.


"Hello?"


"You b*tch. I won't ever leave you!"


"Hello, kaun bol rahi hai?" Manyata asks frightened.


"Aur kaun? Think darling, think harder. Who else would promise you a revenge?"


With those last words, the call cuts off leaving a scared Manyata still clutching her phone.


"Wifey," Uday calls out, as he happily walks into their room. He slows down when he sees Manyata frozen. "Princess... kya hua?" He goes to the bed and sits next to her. "Manyata?"


"W- woh, woh," Manyata stammers.


"Kaun? Manyata, sidi sidi bolo. Kaun?" Uday asks who was now worried.


"Woh, Abhay..." She trails off.


"Princess, Abhay is in jail," Uday tries to reassure her.


"No he isn't... he came out today. A- and he called just now... And said... he said that... he promised us that ' he will take revenge on us," She finally tells him, and starts crying. Uday wipes her tears and pulls her into a hug.


"Don't worry princess. He won't do anything okay? Now calm down. We will track him down, he won't be able to do anything to us," Uday assures her, caressing her hair and constantly wiping her tears. "All will be okay," he murmurs into her hair. "Everything will be fine."


Manyata looks up at him, breaking away from their hug. "You really think so?" She sniffs.


"Yes princess, I'm sure," he tries to smile, and caresses her cheeks.


"I love you Uday," Manyata says wiping a tear.


"I love you too Princess."


**


"Hello everyone. Today our presentation and purpose for this meeting is about the business in Abhay's hotel," Uday informs everyone in the room. He was sat at the top end on the table looking at each person who where seated on the sides. There were many people attending the meeting; including India's top Hoteliers and other's from abroad but also Uday, Manyata, Abhay and Minakshi were attending.


"We have recently spotted that the business has had a downfall," Uday explains. "Since the last 3 months the hotel has been getting some loses."


"Actually Uday, the hotel has been getting some profit I believe," Minakshi protests.


"Yes, it has. That source you got there was taken from a year ago," Abhay explains.


"That can't be right. We got this information yesterday," Manyata says.


"Silence everyone. Abhay, show me the information then," Uday says clearly. Abhay pauses, unsure on what to do.


"Go on Abhay, give him the papers," Minakshi says.


"I don't have them with me now," Abhay says.


"Yes you do," Minakshi hisses to him, quickly handed him a load of paper.


"Oh actually I do. Here," He says handing them to Uday. Uday looks at them. Other members in the meeting start to whisper amongst themselves.



**


After the meeting, they all go to do finish off some things. Manyata goes alone to finish off some work that she'd left. She carries some papers to her office when suddenly she is pulled into a room. All the paper falls on to the floor. She was about to scream but a hand stopped her. Manyata's eyes widened when she realised who it was.


Meanwhile, Uday was writing notes in a notebook from what he could remember from the meeting. Minakshi remained there to help him out.


"Uday, do you need any help?" She asked sweetly.


"No Minakshi, you can go now," Uday says.


"Are you sure? I could help you out. Take your papers for you?" She carries on asking.


"No, I don't need any help. I can do it myself."


"Okay, at least let me carry the papers to your office."


"Okay then," Uday gives in.


The two then walk into Uday's office, and Minakshi puts the pile of papers on his desk.


"Uday can I do anything else for you? Get you a drink? Coffee?" She asks. Uday suspiciously looks at her but then leaves it.


"No, it's okay Minakshi. But thanks for asking. You can go now," He tells her.


"Okay," She says, and then leaves.


Uday then decides to visit Manyata so he leaves his office to find her. After searching everywhere, he can't find her anywhere.


"Have you seen Manyata?" He asks one of the worksmen.


"No sir," he answered back.


"Where could she be?" He murmurs to himself.


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Edited by shana0127 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fab epi niha. Very well written. So Abhay is back. Btw niha u should write more episodes
Edited by Jarin04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome and nice Niha babyšŸ‘šŸ¼

Episode was so smoothly written and too good..ā­ļø

You have done a great jobšŸ¤—šŸ¤—

Edited by adorable_rana - 13 years ago
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EPISODE 26šŸ˜•24 EPISODE RANA NE LIKHA THA 25 EPISODE KIDER GAYA ?šŸ˜•KIA MEIN NE MISS KAR DIYA?SHANA DIDI PLZ HELP YAARšŸ˜†
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So abhay's back .hate him .whats going to happen to manveer life when enemies unite.its scary.episode was very good loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW LOVED IT HATE MINAKSHI AND AD
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Plzz dnt let manyata get kidanp again but luvly update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome job niha
loved this episode
it was fantastic
u should write more
loved the choice of dialogues

Edited by vampire12345678 - 13 years ago
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Hey Niha , nice work šŸ‘šŸ¼. I have read ur ff's so knew you would do a good job, and here it is 😊. I liked the episode, wanted to read more of it.

So AD-and Minakshi team up against Manveer, Would be a dilight to see how even after all odds manveer win over this evil duo, and please keep Manyata safe.

There has already been two kidnaps, dont want a third kidnap, it will seem so very uncertain. I mean royal ki security ka pura band baja baraat nikal jayega, lolšŸ˜†

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