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Alissa

@alissa345

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Archi02
Just loved it to the core.

thank you archi 🤗

so happy you liked it 😃

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Alissa

@alissa345

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
Great Poem Bacha

Very Well Written Welldone

mumma 🤗🤗

yaayyy thank you 😆

mummy ko pasand aayi

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LazyBing

@LazyBing

Stunner

+ 11

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

OMG, i cnt beliebve ki tumari first tumari first try hain, its really gud!!!! Waise tumne abhi tak apne FF's continue nahi kiye! Kab karo gi???

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Alissa

@alissa345

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Manveerfan123
OMG, i cnt beliebve ki tumari first tumari first try hain, its really gud!!!! Waise tumne abhi tak apne FF's continue nahi kiye! Kab karo gi???

😆 yeah first poem hai 😆 😆 pata nahi kaisey idea aaya 🤣

Awww thank you 😳🤗

Lol yeah ffs bhi update karney hain 😳 i will surely update all my FFs once i get done with my midterms 😊

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

amazing as always..so now apart from a good FF,SS and OS writer you are a good poet as well😉..keep it up

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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

as i said earlier gabbu...i loved it..

beautiful awesome amazing...❤️

start to end...it was just BEAUTIFUL...

this poem is so so sweet and beautifully written..

well done..👍🏼 if this is your first try...

i love these following lines ALOT...

Love is a melody
Makes your heart dance away

Love is a killer
That Makes you die in peace

Love is cup half full
That makes you whole

Love is lust
That Makes you desire

Love is a touch
That Makes you shiver
Love is a thirst
That burns your throat
Love is inspiration
that Makes you live
Love is life
That Makes you breathe
Love is you
That makes me complete

pori poem hi ho gai..but these lines are so deep and beautiful amazing gabbu...👏👏really i loved it...😃

thanks for sharing...😊

u should right more...and yeah LOVE ko itna acha define tu wahi kar sakta hai jo khud isy feel kar raha ho...😉🤣

i mean lost in love ho...🤣

but awesome title...👏gabbu par kafi suit hota hai..🤣

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Riyu

@Devil.Gal

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: alissa345

Lost In Love

Love is a melody
Makes your heart dance away
Love is a pray
that Makes you hopeful
Love is a spell
That Makes you charmed
Love is eyes
That Makes you see
Love is fertile
that Makes you abundant
Love is a killer
That Makes you die in peace
Love is cup half full
That makes you whole
Love is a mystery
That Makes you wonder
Love is lust
That Makes you desire
Love is tears
That Makes your heart ache
Love is a dagger
That puts you together
Love is a touch
That Makes you shiver
Love is a thirst
That burns your throat
Love is inspiration
that Makes you live
Love is life
That Makes you breathe
Love is you
That makes me complete

😆

haila apni lissa baby hume tu app se love ho gia hai 😆chota chatri khush hua😳kia awesome shayri hai❤️love is blind too 😆becoz i love u my jaanu😉chota chatri n lissa 😳best couple forever😳🤣

Edited by mrs_kapoor - 13 years ago

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Killer

@.Killer.

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Firstly wanna say...AWESOME.👏.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏(the same old dialogue)🤣
Alright now second thing...When r u goin to post the next poem..???
I've already read it ..so felt boring..Lol...Roflmao🤣🤣

So now Write another one

Edited by AKlover-16 - 12 years ago