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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heya guys ๐Ÿ˜† i know i was kinda gayab for a long time ๐Ÿ˜ณ but was busy with school and all. Last night before going to bed i kinda randomly wrote a poem so thought of sharing it with you guys๐Ÿ˜†
Just cuz i wrote it doesn't really mean i believe in it ๐Ÿ˜†
Lost In Love
Love is a melody
Makes your heart dance away
Love is a pray
that Makes you hopeful
Love is a spell
That Makes you charmed
Love is eyes
That Makes you see
Love is fertile
that Makes you abundant
Love is a killer
That Makes you die in peace
Love is cup half full
That makes you whole
Love is a mystery
That Makes you wonder
Love is lust
That Makes you desire
Love is tears
That Makes your heart ache
Love is a dagger
That puts you together
Love is a touch
That Makes you shiver
Love is a thirst
That burns your throat
Love is inspiration
that Makes you live
Love is life
That Makes you breathe
Love is you
That makes me complete

LOL that was it, it was my first time writing a poem and that too randomly out of no where i started writing it. Please share your views about my shayri ๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful and way romantic is all I can say Alissa๐Ÿค—

๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing aalu
just loved it
specially the ending ๐Ÿ˜†
u r actually an amazing writter
love u ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Alissa u posted this poem ๐Ÿค—, ooosome ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘, loved it,

Love is cup half full
That makes you whole
Love is a touch
That Makes you shiver
Love is you
That makes me complete

my personal favorite lines, though i liked the whole poem, I just keep re-reading these lines
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just loved it to the core.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great Poem Bacha
Very Well Written Welldone
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: adorable_rana

Beautiful and way romantic is all I can say Alissa๐Ÿค—

๐Ÿ˜ณ

Awww thank you ๐Ÿค—
yayyy you liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you sarah ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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thank you ๐Ÿค—
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Originally posted by: chitra_rao

Hey Alissa u posted this poem ๐Ÿค—, ooosome ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘, loved it,


Love is cup half full
That makes you whole
Love is a touch
That Makes you shiver
Love is you
That makes me complete

my personal favorite lines, though i liked the whole poem, I just keep re-reading these lines

yeah yahi waali post kari ๐Ÿ˜†
dursi waali abhi finish nahi hui ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Awww thank you sista ๐Ÿค—
so happy you liked it ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†
lol i think that line has too much depth in it ๐Ÿคฃ

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