WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE~~MANVEER SS~Prt24 newpg 78 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Mahi loved the cs and prologue!!
Paart one was really very cool!! reminding me of some other ff similar start dfferent concept!!
Loved the part!!
Pls pm or scrap me when ever u update!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Really nice and great👍🏼

would like to read more😳

Update soon😊 and pm me next time

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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
really nice i loved the characters and dialogues the whole thing was beautifully written please update sooon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fantastic Character sketch n first update Mahi.👏 👏 👏
J is a good n sweet girl, I'm so happy after reading it. I always wanted to see M-J Sis bonding, thank God she's not desperate for Uday.😆
Manyata-UV First meeting scene was very nice.😉
A short n sweet update.😊
Thanks for the beautiful SS n PM also.😛
Pls update ASAP.😊
Thank you.😊
HUGS.🤗 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asweme update dear. Loved it. Manveer meeting was very nice. Please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb, update next part ASAP ok luv it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE

PART 2: MANVEER:::::::: <3 :::::::

Anya reaches college and sees Aarman waiting at the gate'

Aarman: yo girls ane mein itni der kyun ho gai??

Anya: puch mat yar'raste mein kisi gadhe ne rasta kat liya'

Then niks tells aarman what all had happened'

Aarman: don't worry yar hum use dhundke usi ke muh pe ye pese marenge'.

Anya back to cheerful mood: han nahi toh'

They all three enter the college,

they see that all seniors were ragging their juniors..

but then she saw two guyz troubling a girl wich was more than limits'

.anya gets angry and is about to go there when

niks stops her': wah mat ja anya kahi who tumhe bhi na rag karde'

Anya: tu unse darti hogi mein nahi darti'

She goes near the girl' that girl was non other than unnati'

anya looks at the guyz in anger'

Anya: sharam nahi ati akele ladiki ko ched rahe ho'

1st guy: oho tum kon ho Jhansi ki rani jo ise bachane ayi ho?

Kahu to tumhe bhi chedu??

At this all laugh'

Unnati: ek bar dada ko ane do phir dekhenge'

Guy: kyun tumhara dada humara kya bigadlega sweetheart??

He then tries to touch her..

But a strong hand slapped his face'.it was non other than anya..

She holds unnati's hand andis about to leave wen the guy catches her arm

And pulls her back..

Guy: tumhari himmat kese hui akash rai chaudhari ko thappad marne ki..??

At this anya holds his neck digging her nails in his neck hurting him..

Anya: abhi toh bas thappad mara hai'agar apne harkatoh se baaj nahi aye toh yahi sabke samne maar

Dalungi'han nahi toh'

Every1 was shocked to see how brave the girl was'

Akash was stunned..

Then she jerked of his hands from her shoulders and leaves from there taking unnato with her'.

Vijay comes running'.to unnati'.

Unnati hugs him: tum kaha the vijay??

Vijay: im so sorry unnati hum princi ke sath busy the' jese hi hume pata chala ki akash aur uske chele tumhe rag kar rahe hai'hum dodte hue aye'humne uday banna ko bhi khabar kar di hai'tum thik to ho na??

Unnati smiles: aaj isne hume bacha liya'thank you so so much'

Unnati hugs her'

Unnati:humara naam unnati singh hai'

Vijay: aur humara vijay dinanath chauhan'

Anya: mera na..

nam anya saxena hai.

Vijay: oh hello anya hum is college ke GS(genral secretary) hai aur agar tumhe koi bhi parshani ho to be jhikjak humare pass aoo ok??afterall now we r frnz'

Anya: of course'wow college ke pehle hi din itne ache frnz'

Vijay: abhi kaha sweet heart abhi to tumhe tumahre sabse ache honewale dost se milna hai'.afterall wat you did for unnati manyata sure uday banna aur tumhari achi jamegi'

Anya: oh..i'll look forward for it anyways by guyz I have class to attend'

Anya leaves just when uday arrives'.he sees unnati and vijay'

Uday: choti tum thik to ho??

Unnati: all thanks to anya dada pata nahi agar aaj woh nahi hoti to pata nahi aaj hamara kya hota'

Aap late kyun hue??

Uday: are who ek pagal bandariya ne humara rasta kat liya'.he tells wat all happened on way'

Vijay banna aap kaha the??

Vijay: hum to princi se baat kar rahe the' anyways apko bhi anya se milna chahiye chota packet par bada dhamka'I tell u..

Unnati tells everything that happened..

Uday impressed: ab toh is ladki se milna padega jisne akash ka gala pakda hehehehe'

Unnati: han dada apko manyata

milna chahiye who bilkul apjesi hi hai'.

Uday rolls his eyes: oh plz choti' aaj tak esi koi ladki peda nahi hui jo hum jesi hai'

Vijay: except manyata hai na??

Uday smiles and then saddens'

Unnati beats on vijay's arms and whispers

Unnati: pagal ho kya vijay udas kardiya na dada ko'

Uday was lost in his thoughts wen suddenly unnati shouts'.

Unnati: dada who dekhiye anya'

Anya was facing back towards unnati'.

Talking to niks and aarman'.

Unnati and uday moves towards her'

Unnati from back: hi anya'

Anya turning say:hi unna..tum

She says angrily pointing towards uday'.

Uday also shocke and says: tum'

Unnati: wow dada aap dono pehle se hi ek dusre ko jante ho??

Uday: ha choti'ye wahi badariya hai jisne hamara rasta kata'

Anya: ye gadha tumhara bhai hai'??

Till now all the crowd had gathered around them' most of the girls to see uday'

Vijay interrupts: wow kya achi Jodi hai.. gadha-bandariya'made for each other'.

Both together..

"shut up vijay'"

Uday: is bandariya ne tumhari jaan bachai jabki ye khud jaan dena chahti hai??

He says angrily and is about to turn'

Anya: ruko'

He turns back'

And suddenly a bundle of notes landed up on his face'

Anya: ye rakh tere diye hue pese aur jaa apne liye ek naya chalne wala dimag leke aa'han nahi toh'

Uday was at first shocked and then fuming inanger'all the crowd had already started gossiping'

But before he could say anything..anya left..

Unnati was also shocked and she saw anger in uday's eyes..

Unnati: calm down dada'

Uday: nahi choti usne yuvraj udayveer singh ko insult kiya hai'hum use itni asani se nahi denge' I promise you anya hum tumhe itna humiliate karenge ke you will cry im front of me for my help''"

~mahi~

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Edited by MAHI1198 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Awesome, awesome, awesome update Mahi, jus loved it.👏 👏
Very well written. Unnati- Anya first meeting was superb, oh that ba******d was Majnu 😆 I mean Akash.🤣 One tight slap on Majnu's face, Muahh thanks for this slap to Majnu.🤣
Manyata was Unnati's saviour 😊 n Unnati-Anya-Vijay convo was also nice.😛
U-M second meeting 😉 Again fighting with each other.😆 Kabhi nahi sudhrenge.😆
Great -great update Mahi.👍🏼
Thanks for the beautiful update n PM.😛
Pls update soon n next time I want a long update k.😉
Great job.👍🏼
🤗 🤗
Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
awesome lovely please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
superb, update next part soon ok i luv it

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