*~*ManVeer FF: Destined To be Together~Ch3 Pg37*~*

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@WhatTheF

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#271

awsome...mind blowing fab...update very well written...

hawww...uday toh bada kamina hai but still love him

poor manyata ko kitna pareshan karta hai...hayeee...agar pareshan karne wala uday jaisa ho toh me roz pareshan hone ke liye taiyar hu...

hailaaa...kidnaping...uday ne manyata ki kidnaping karvali...update soon...thanx for the PM.

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Rubaa Rana

@adorable_rana

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#272

comment reached on pg 37😉

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#273

thank god karan ne bacha liya manyata ko!!!!!!! manyata ne kya jawab aur punch mari udayy ko,love dher for dat!!!!!!! the war is on now!!!!!!! last aprt wa sscaryy,doo cntinueee soon!!!!!!!!!😊

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ilvuday

@ilvuday

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#274

u noe i read ur 3 chapters n ur ff reminds me of this korean drama boys over flowers there they are called f4...

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#275

very well written i loved it to the extent...
OMG uday is soo evil typesss...
but manu is no less hehe she punched him that was gud for what he did was very wrong poor girl he dropped all her lunch and evn stepped over that...such ma bigda hua yuvraj hai...thanks to karan who helped manu on time...
amm now what next will he do with her i hope he dosent do what i am thinking...
thanks for pm...update sooon..!

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Mehwish

@CharmingAngel7

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: ilvuday
u noe i read ur 3 chapters n ur ff reminds me of this korean drama boys over flowers there they are called f4...

Ya it is inspired from the show But I hvnt watched this one I hve watched the other version of it.. I had already stated it at the start before writing the prologue that the FF is based on a show I watched I'll write the same story on Manveer... actually I loved the show and started imagining on ManVeer everyone here doesnt watch these shows so I thought I'll share the story with everyone here by writing the story on Manveer I have done some minor changes to it as well like in chappy2 have added Manveer scene inbetween (the locker room one) also Manyata family scene in chappy3 is diff and flash back that Manyata gets as well...also there will b changes in coming update as well... abt the grp name i didnt like it mch so changed it...

Edited by CharmingAngel7 - 13 years ago

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Mehwish

@CharmingAngel7

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: Dae_drmer
hehe..lovd Manveer momnent cafeteria!!
mein imagine kar rahi thi...PriyAsh iss pe hote toh kaise karte!!

manyata punching uv...lolzz superb!!!
ur update iz fascinating!!!
ty for da PM...update soon...

Thanx so mch... I imagine that too hehe
I m so glad u liked it...
my pleasure okii.. :)

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Mehwish

@CharmingAngel7

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#278

Thanx for all the lovely comments... means a lot to me will reply to all of em individually later...

Thanx so much *Hugs*

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Mehwish

@CharmingAngel7

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#279

Going for now... will b back on later ;)

Take care

Ba bye

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Pooja

@Pooja_0910

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#280

Awesome Fantastic update Wish...
Uday & his gang is sooo evil they have no limits they have just bad attitude...Uday stoop so low to prove his power on college that his group friend vicky sam tried to raped Manyata:( Only Karan is good from all of them...
Whatever Manyata did in cafeteria she did right...good job girl...
Eagerly waiting for next chapter...
Thanks for pm