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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#511

Originally posted by: ...navina...
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Awesome chapter Gargi ... if you're tired & u give us a chapter like this ... I shudder to think what a master-piece we'll get if u write in a relaxed frame of mind!!!!

Coming back to the chapter:

Uday pulled her closer to him and replied..."What say?..Lets do it again..You will atleast know that you are moaning in your conscious state!..Uday smirked

I loved the start❤️. Uday is so cheeky😳!!! That dialogue was just priceless.

Shaurya and Chand's sword-fight was superb. It was (as I expected) -HOT!!! I knew Shaurya would win ... WINNING IS HIS HABIT😉. He is rather crafty as well , I mean when Chand announced that she will never be his in this lifetime ... he immediately "made preparations for their next birth" 😆 . So now that they jumped off the cliff ... I KNOW THAT THEY DIDN'T DIE . But - is their love-story going to start here??? I say this because : Uday looked to the "lush green hills" and remembered it as "their favourite romantic place" 😳. ( KEY WORD being "their" ... not his but both of them collectively).

I am so excited for the next part,

... please update soon😊.

Navina u really bring a big smile in my face with ur comments as you so very well understand my FF..😃

I like ur minute observation very much and all the mnute details in ur FF...

The answers are hidden in ur comments dear😊

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pmpm1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

Nice update! And thanks for the pm.

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#513

Sorry for late comment
Awsomeee...love it
love the sowrd fight scene
CL kuch jyada hi attitude dikha rhai hai
and i dnt think so ke shaurya aur CL abhi marenge...update soon thnax for PM.

Edited by swetsurati - 12 years ago

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#514

Sorry sorry sorry for the late comment
my exams got over today and i read all the two updates together
the first one was sooo hot my my my it was well written
the second one was lovely the morning fight was cute
i loved the sword fight and especially shauryas dialogues continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: andy.a
Sorry sorry sorry for the late comment
my exams got over today and i read all the two updates together
the first one was sooo hot my my my it was well written
the second one was lovely the morning fight was cute
i loved the sword fight and especially shauryas dialogues continue soon and thanks for the pm

Its ok andy..but I was thinking ki where have u disappeared!😆..and why there are no comments from ur side...Thanks for reading dear🤗

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#516

Chapter 12: Promo Of the Dark Love Story

"Hey where do you think you are going?..."..He fumed with anger at the way she just marched away without a reply...

"I don't want to be raped again, so don't want any help anymore..."...came the cold and bold reply...

"Hey wait.😡..you can't go like that..I have my everything there..Ohh shit what do I do now..😭"...

"Ohhh..she looks so beautiful when she keeps quiet and sleeps!...She doesn't seem to be the arrogant and stubborn Princess...I shouldn't waste this opportunity..If she wakes up she will never be mine..I will make her mine in her sleep..Once she is married to me, she won't complain😉"...

"Heeeyyy!!...where m I?😲..What are you doing?..."

"No I was just...".."Whatever your doing..just don't stop...If I come to my full sense maybe Ill never be yours again.☺️.!!."..

and they become one with the rituals of love and promises that were stronger than sanctity of some chanted rituals of the priests!☺️😛