SS~Socha na Tha~updated pt-6 pg23 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update dear

UV or M ki takraar se hi unka rishta itna acha hai

Aise nok jhok walle luv stories mujhe bahuth pasand hai

Waiting for the next update to c the fighting n loving each other
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princessnia

RAH
RAPPAT
RAPCHIK
RAPCHUNDAS
VHABKKA
urfff
Awesome
Mindblowing update choti.Cont soon:)


thank you soo much di 😊i'll update in 10 minutes...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: killerashish

superb update shivi baby 👍🏼uday veer sing fir pohanch gaya colage


may haayyee baechari manyata ka kia haal ho gya usay dekh kay😆

car may kia jawab diya ha uday ko rishtay may tou hum tumharay

baap lagtay han or naam ha sehansha 🤣or manyata ki speech

bohut achi thi iss liay vibha ko galiyan nhn pray ge👏😆manyata nay

kabhi uday veer ko dekha nhn ha fir bi kehti ha tumhain kis nay kaha

ha kay may us say nafrat krti hn 😳abhi say hi itna pyaar ☺️ab

next kia honay wala ha ab uday apnay hathon say manyata ko

award de ga kiacont soon baby 😉thnxx for the PM🤗


Thank you so much mamma🤗😛im glad ki aap ko pasand aaya...😉mein thodi der me update karti hoon...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: afreshbegin

Lovely update dear

UV or M ki takraar se hi unka rishta itna acha hai

Aise nok jhok walle luv stories mujhe bahuth pasand hai

Waiting for the next update to c the fighting n loving each other


Thanks Abhi😊 i'll be updating in few minutes...
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Posted: 13 years ago
please update soon please please
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part-4

she kept on sitting there for more than 15 minutes and started getting bored. She was such a girl, for whom sitting in one place for more than 10 minutes was quite a task. she was thinking of ways to kill the time, when her mobile caught her attention. i'll surf the net and pass the time she decided.she was just logging onto indiaforums when there was a knock at the door. one of the girls must have come she thought and said "andar aajao"
the person who came inside was not a girl by any angle, Manyata felt she must be seeing things because the figment of her imagination had appeared right out of nowhere. she blinked twice to dispel the illusion. no he was still there. when she gathered her wits, she tried hiding her embarassment by yelling at him.

Manyata: Tum ! yahaan ladkiyon ke green room me! tumhari himmat kaise hui istarah bin pooche andar chale aane ki!
Uday: pehle toh maine andar aane se pehle knock kiya tha, aur doosra apne guest se koi aise baat karta hai kya?
Manyata: Udayveer ke bachche daal daal ke kachche, ruk me abhi chilla kar sab ko ikattha karti hoon..
Uday: bachche toh shaadi ke baad honge usme abhi time hai, lekin tum logon se kahogi kya, yahi ki tum mere baare me daydreaming kar rahi thi, aur maine aakar usme rukavat daaldi...
Manyata :oh teri, tujhe kaise pata ki main kya kar rahi thi aur kya kaha tune bachche?teri toh main.-(Interrupted)
Uday:shh,,,Manyata chup, bilkul chup...kitna bolti ho tum, ab ek aur lafz nahi..
at this point he came really close to her and she moved a step back.
Manyata: dur hat tu mere se..

He moved one more step closer and she went back even more..
He kept on coming closer and closer and she kept on moving back..now there was no moving back because she was pinned to the wall and on top of that he placed both hands on her sides. she was trapped from all the sides. again he stared into her eyes and this time there was no mischief in his eyes. she felt like he had a X-ray machine fixed in his eyes, which tells him whats going on inside her mind. He came closer and closer and she felt angry at herself for enjoying his proximity.
Manyata: chodo mujhe bahar-(Interrupted)
He placed an hand over her mouth and she meekly looked at him...
He was so close now that she could feel his breath on her neck. her practical mind was shouting at her to push him away and run away from their but she chose to ignore it. He moved his mouth towards hers and Manyata found herself closing her eyes in anticipatiion. she waited for the aww sensation in her lips to start(SORRY COULDN'T FIND THE RIGHT WORD).
one...two...three...four...nothing
She opened her eyes to see there was no one in the room. The gall of the man! he had arised the craving in heart, and left when she was about to surrender to her own desire. 'Chii Manyata, yeh kya kar rahi thi tu'she reprimanded herself...
and then she looked out of the room to see if anyone was around to notice when she was so much lost in him..thank fully the hallway was deserted. Then she heard the voice of one of her lecturers saying proudly "ab mukhya athithi se aagrah karte hai ki wah iss manch par aayen aur hamare college ke pratibhavaan vidhyarthiyon ko apne haathon se inaam de"
OMG the moment had arrived where she has to face him, she came out of the green room only to be greeted by a bear hug by J.
Manyata: J tu...
J: haan main, kyon jiji kisi aur ko expect kar rahi thi kya? pata hai main aur mom dono tumhe guest se prize lete hue dekhna chahte the..isiliye mom bhi mere saath agayi..woh dekho 2nd row me mom baithi hai...she pointed out.
Now Manyata was in a catch 22 situation. there was no way she could avoid him now. she thought "theek hai jo hota hai hone do, baad ka baad me dekhlenge"
Finally after a long time, the final year students names were being called out. The Headmistress who was proudly calling out her students names said "Now please welcome on stage, Miss Manyata Kumari, the batch topper of the year 2012.Please give her a big round of applause". Manyata took a deep breath, pasted a fake smile on her face and advanced towards the stage. As she got near he moved forward with a handshake. She had no choice but to comply with what courtesy demanded.Then he handed over the Prize and said "Congrats Manyata". Manyata?? what happened to 'Miss'. He was already behaving like he had known her for years. The guy who was taking their photos said "Madam zara idhar dekhiye toh". Unwillingly she had to bare her teeth for the Photograph now. She was posing for the photo when he whispered in a low tone so that only she could hear "Badi dhamakedaar cheez ho tum Manyata". His comment made her blush, she couldn't understand why..She quickly recovered herself and said in a low voice "Halkat vede, khasmanu khane, khabardar jo apna muh khola toh"
Uday: Toh?toh kya karogi? kiss deke chup karaogi?
What they didn't realize was the photographer was done with the photo and they were still posing! they heard the titters and giggles in the audience and Manyata ran away from their due to embarassment. while running away from there she didn't see where she was going and tripped, only to be caught by a strong pair of arms.

To Be continued...

I know guys yeh update bohot hi chota hai...im really sorry for that😳but mere mid term exams chal rahe hai and i could manage to write only this much...and i've written it in such a hurry there's bound to be lots of mistakes. i promise ki agla update chahe der se ho par lamba hoga...Thanks for all those who commented and liked the previous part...and sorry if i left any one out of PM list...
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PS: i think i can update the next part only by next month because of my exams..😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic update shivi baby👏 👏loved it manveer scene hayyee☺️maza agay udayveer


manyata kay pass green room may chala gaya kia baat ha himaat ha uday may or manyata kay

itnay pass uday😳manyata kay bi hossh ur gaye uday ko itna pass dekh kay lakin yeh uday

kahain gayab ho gya tha achanak say 😲shivi baby bohut mast likha ha lakin bohut short likha

ha update ko thora long karo or manveer nok jook bi dalo thora or romance bi☺️thnxxx for the

PM iss bar tumhari mamma late ho gaye comment krnay may sorry baby 🤗love u muuah

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Edited by killerashish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome and wondrous beautifully written i loved it please update soon and best of luck with exams
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Posted: 13 years ago
Note:Sorry guys😭shayad jaldi jaldi me meine galat page ka link sabko PM kardiya hai😳i'm soo sorry for the inconvenience...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
and too cute manveer scenes..
update soon...and good luck for ur exams..!

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