7 Months In Heaven - Ch 6 Pg 75(Happy Bday Alissa) - Page 16

Originally posted by: fia21

All the best for your mock exams 👍🏼
Awww thank you so much Saira. I am glad I could make it your "Favorite Writers" list 😳

i am damn late in commenting on such a awesome FF...😳

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

i am damn late in commenting on such a awesome FF...😳

but i think its never too late..lol...

starting from your title awesome title...really i loved it i always loved your work..and your titles in alissa's OS..lol..i think u r title queen...loll..sorry...

awesome title really...very catchy...😛

then the prologue OMGGG...that was amazing seriously i have no words to tell u that how much i loved it...

and salute on your point of view about love...really amazing awesome...👏👏👏

when i read that many of us will drop the idea after learning that its gonna be a tragic story seriously and honestly i thought 'oh come on fia its your FF kaun pagal isy nahi pary ga'...

after reading this line Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a teardrop. main jaan chuki thi that this is gonna be the FF i will eagerly wait for the update...and one of my fav..and after reading the first chapter i can tell u that your FF is worth waiting and reading and i will defiantly wait for your awesome updates...

the prologue was awesome and all those lines was magical...i really loved it...

👏well done for the prologue...

now coming to the first chapter...oh my my...the chapter was fantastic, superb, amazing, ,lovely,wonderful...pheww..loll but seriously after reading that first chapter i was suffering from loss of words and really u just updated the first chapter and i am feel already getting hooked onto this story..i wanna read moreee...i never thought that i will so soon fall for this story...ahhh..i am in love with your story..lolll..but seriously u wrote is amazingly well...awesome..out of the world...

i wonder what r u gonna do in next chapter...

i am super excited to read the next chapter...so please update soon...😊

so in the first chapter i loved how u explained UV's feelings...

and then the party scene ,manayata-jay sisterly bond , jay's desperation to meet the prince ,uv-karan friendship, karan's competition in business , i mean everything was beautifully explained...👏👏👏

and from the start till the end it was a awesome chapter...

and UV- KARAN CONVO was amazing and funny a bit ahaa i must tell u that i like that karan guy i mean he is really a true friend of UV till now...

so i laughed alot on this line "This might sound gay, but I'm gonna miss you dude" 🤣🤣🤣

this simple funny line shows that he much he loves his friend...😳

and wohooo UV had lots of problems in his life...hmmm...i would love to read more about him..and his problems..😛

and then J and Manayata..J was so desperate to meet UV and manayata was not at all interested and even she mentioned about some sharma...hmmm...intersting so we got a triangle here.....

and the lines i loved in there convo was:

"Stop whining. You can have your first kiss some other time too but I might not get a chance to meet the Prince of Jaigadh again so zip it"😆😆

"Aha I knew it" , a delighted Manyata raised her arms in victory.😆😆

🤣 "Relax Jay. He must be clustered around more of your clones who would practically be drooling on him right now, just like you" manayata called J clone...🤣🤣

"I think I over estimated the number of your brain cells Jay" , replied Manyata looking at her sister like she had grown an extra head.

and in the last part the way u showed/explained the love and care manayata had for J and the friendship and care KARAN had for uday was amazing and so beautifully written,awesome words awesome lines brilliant situation...

all in all there was love care affection friendship enmity royalty and so many more emotions..the very first chapter was full of emotions...awesome... brilliant excellent piece of work...👏

so after the first chapter what i think about character till now..its to early to have a opinion about any character but i am saying till now and waiting eagerly to read more of your awesome work...

manyata is a girl with brain not much like our original manayata..but she too don't care about money and power...

J and manayta bond is impressive and interesting wanna see more of there convo's please...

and karan..aww..lolll...i kinda like this character really so honest and true friend to UV again "till now"..lolll

and UV tu UV hai...us ki tu bat hi kuch or hai...but i loved his character too..i mean he have lots of problems and his royalty too seems a problem in his life..

and i liked manveer first meeting...very good...

actually i prefer stories with suspense tragedy a bit of drama on all lovey dovey ones...and the story revolving around all the characters all relations i.e friendship and blood relations...and the story contain not just one emotion but all the emotions feeling one feel in life...

and your FF is one of that kind and your writing is cherry on top...😛

and please update soon because i am eagerly waiting to read more...

omg...that was long comment...sorry...🤔

and thanks alottt for the PM... thanks alott...

and once again..i always loved your writing but this FF is amazing..and after the very first chapter is added in my fav list...😉😆

OMGGG...this is a very long comment..ahem..i don't remember main ny itna lambaaa comment kahin kiya ho ga..🤔sorry for the length...

Hey Jehan. Finally you are back 🤗
Where were you lost dude? 😲 . Hope everything was okay. You are absolutely right, it's never too late 😊 . Lol I am glad you liked the title, I always feel so good every time you take notice of my titles 😳 . Hahahahah Title Queen? 😆 . I am honored 😉 . Thank you so so much Jehan. Really I feel so good now on my decision on having started this FF. You guys are really so sweet and supportive. I am really glad that you liked the prologue so much and the teardrop line. I felt people could really connect to that. Awww really Jehan you are too sweet 😳
Oh man now my face seriously hurts. I am smiling so much reading your comment. I am really happy that you liked the first chapter and only the first chapter got you so hooked to my story. Thank you so much for the appreciation and the lovely words. Well what happens in the next chapter, you'll have to wait till tomorrow to find out 😉 . You pointed out exactly the main parts that I focused on and am glad you did. I feel elated to know that you liked all those scenes, especially the party scene and the bonds between Uday-Karan and Manyata-Jay. Every time someone appreciates Karan's character I feel so content because Karan's character was not planned to exist at all. It just suddenly came to me while I was writing the first chapter and I instantly knew I had to include him. So thank you for liking him. Lol yea I like that line too 😆 . Yes you will read more about his problems since my SS is basically Uday's perspective. I would show Manyata's POV too in the middle, but this is basically Uday's story. Well there isn't really any love triangle in this story. Oops I don't know if I had to tell you that 😛😆 . Anyway the reason I mentioned the Sharma guy was because as you must have noticed, the Manyata in my SS is different than the original. And so is Uday. I made Manyata's character more mature, smart and outgoing. A girl who isn't unaware oh her surroundings and who's hormones function like a normal girl so she is not afraid to voice her likings for a guy 😉 . Lol.
Wow you mentioned all those lines that I thought would have an impact and it feels so good to see that you pointed exactly those out 😃 . Well as you said, I focus more on the emotions of a character and their surroundings. So that was basically what I tried to do, to show the emotions of the characters so that people could connect to them and it feels good to see that people are connecting to them. Exactly, this Manyata has brains and she doesn't are about materialistic things. I will include more of Jay and Manyata, but not for a while. Because as i said, this SS is basically Uday's perspective, but Jay will stay in the story too. I have mainly focused on the young characters as individuals and haven't included a lot of family drama, so that is the main reason I included characters like Karan and Jay because Manyata and Uday do need someone they could talk to about stuff, since sometimes parents don't really get you! But that does not mean that the parents and family do not exist. They are there, but won't be too focused on. Awww thanks so much Jehan. Really I am blushing like an idiot now with all the praises 😳 . Lol.
I will update by tomorrow Inshallah and will PM you 😃
Hahahaha I actually loved your long comment. Makes me feel my effort was worth it. So keep them coming 😳
Once again thanks a lot Jehan for this lovely comment and your sweet words. Love ya 🤗

@Fia: Cool... bas plzz don't forget to update tomorrow. My day becomes BORING if I haven't read at least one update... just a reminder post!😊

Originally posted by: mahi0809

@Fia: Cool... bas plzz don't forget to update tomorrow. My day becomes BORING if I haven't read at least one update... just a reminder post!😊

Don't worry the update will definitely be up by tomorrow 😊

Originally posted by: fia21

Hey Jehan. Finally you are back 🤗
Where were you lost dude? 😲 . Hope everything was okay. You are absolutely right, it's never too late 😊 . Lol I am glad you liked the title, I always feel so good every time you take notice of my titles 😳 . Hahahahah Title Queen? 😆 . I am honored 😉 . Thank you so so much Jehan. Really I feel so good now on my decision on having started this FF. You guys are really so sweet and supportive. I am really glad that you liked the prologue so much and the teardrop line. I felt people could really connect to that. Awww really Jehan you are too sweet 😳
Oh man now my face seriously hurts. I am smiling so much reading your comment. I am really happy that you liked the first chapter and only the first chapter got you so hooked to my story. Thank you so much for the appreciation and the lovely words. Well what happens in the next chapter, you'll have to wait till tomorrow to find out 😉 . You pointed out exactly the main parts that I focused on and am glad you did. I feel elated to know that you liked all those scenes, especially the party scene and the bonds between Uday-Karan and Manyata-Jay. Every time someone appreciates Karan's character I feel so content because Karan's character was not planned to exist at all. It just suddenly came to me while I was writing the first chapter and I instantly knew I had to include him. So thank you for liking him. Lol yea I like that line too 😆 . Yes you will read more about his problems since my SS is basically Uday's perspective. I would show Manyata's POV too in the middle, but this is basically Uday's story. Well there isn't really any love triangle in this story. Oops I don't know if I had to tell you that 😛😆 . Anyway the reason I mentioned the Sharma guy was because as you must have noticed, the Manyata in my SS is different than the original. And so is Uday. I made Manyata's character more mature, smart and outgoing. A girl who isn't unaware oh her surroundings and who's hormones function like a normal girl so she is not afraid to voice her likings for a guy 😉 . Lol.
Wow you mentioned all those lines that I thought would have an impact and it feels so good to see that you pointed exactly those out 😃 . Well as you said, I focus more on the emotions of a character and their surroundings. So that was basically what I tried to do, to show the emotions of the characters so that people could connect to them and it feels good to see that people are connecting to them. Exactly, this Manyata has brains and she doesn't are about materialistic things. I will include more of Jay and Manyata, but not for a while. Because as i said, this SS is basically Uday's perspective, but Jay will stay in the story too. I have mainly focused on the young characters as individuals and haven't included a lot of family drama, so that is the main reason I included characters like Karan and Jay because Manyata and Uday do need someone they could talk to about stuff, since sometimes parents don't really get you! But that does not mean that the parents and family do not exist. They are there, but won't be too focused on. Awww thanks so much Jehan. Really I am blushing like an idiot now with all the praises 😳 . Lol.
I will update by tomorrow Inshallah and will PM you 😃
Hahahaha I actually loved your long comment. Makes me feel my effort was worth it. So keep them coming 😳
Once again thanks a lot Jehan for this lovely comment and your sweet words. Love ya 🤗

Awesome FF! I agree that all love stories don't have a happy ending. In fact that is why I was just thinking the other day why does anybody not write a tragic FF on Manveer. And lo and behold! Here is your FF!

Originally posted by: pmpm1

Awesome FF! I agree that all love stories don't have a happy ending. In fact that is why I was just thinking the other day why does anybody not write a tragic FF on Manveer. And lo and behold! Here is your FF!

Please pm me when you update next.

Glad to see that you agree 😊
I will definitely PM you. Thanks for dropping by with your comment!

woww fia it was so good plz upd8 soon 👏

superb update u possess amazing peice of witing skills tough it was super long i can't bare it to end soo early i wish reading more and more update soon 😃