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Originally posted by: andy.a

hi payel😃

first of all a huge sorry for not commenting, i stopped commenting from my phone as i messed up with the comment in the library princess

No dear that kind of things happen with PC also, don't be sorry for that 😉

you know i was very surprised to see the update of abinashwar, i read the update that day itself, but the comment got delayed

Doesn't matter 😊😉 only comment matters 😃😆

the update was really beautiful, i loved each word of the update👏

first when i read the part where manyta takes her anger on rani, i wanted to slap her . she was so arrogent there, 😡

He bhagwan!!! 😲 she had reasons. By the way Manyata is very much emotional, when she is kind she is the most compassionate, when she is in love, she can give up everything for it and that is why when she is angry, don't even try to mess with her...😉

but later when i read what made her do that and the scene where she apologises in the 3 letters i really felt " poor manyta" she really has a heart😳

Her heart is full with emotions...I told you 😉

but a question is haunting me. why does uday say he wants to stay away from manyta? 😭please payal, dont separte them na and please change uday's mind please...

He had to change it na!!! But the more he will want to stay away from, the more he'll come closer, I tell you haaan 😉

the flashback scene was really cute😳. moniya's thoughts, that pure love, the rain falling over them, it made me very happy, to read such a pure form of love that too without a tinge of vulgarity...only very few can write like that, and you are one of them payel👏👏salute you for that..😳

Thank you Andy, it is possible only for the magic of Manveer, I have no choice but always have to put mt best on them, because only they makes me write...And I am still blushing with your praises 😳

really looking forward for the next update, even if its in december, your updates are really worth the wait😳 thanks for the pm

And thank you for understanding and being patient with me 😊

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Awesome update Payel...just loved it!👏👏...the entire pain n misery of Udayan is so deeply described...i am truly in love with Uday now...

Originally posted by: priyamvika11

Sooo sorry for late comment but my net access is disturbed that is why further about update is owsome fantabuouly written. And the way manyta act with rani but then she apologize very sweetly and the sad thing why udhy said that he stay away 4rm manyta so sad but hope this will not TRUE waiting 4 ur next update hope 4 best tons of loves 👏 😊

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

Wow, I loved it. <3

Thanks Hina 😊
Sorry for commenting so late (and not commenting at all)...I am really lazy at writing comments )

That's very bad really really 😭 😭 I cry all the time for getting very less comments in this story 😭 😭 and suddenly you stop commenting in all my stories, I thought you don't like my writing at all 😭 😭

But I have always followed your stories. 😛

Oh really 😃 That's goood 😃 in fact greattt 😉 😃

I love angry Manyata😆. But what she did with Rani was wrong and so likely of her to send apology letter to the three people she had hurt intentionally or unintentionally.
Flashback of Moniya and Veer were great. 😳

Thankz darling 😳
And the misery of Udayan 🤔 and he wants Manyata away from him😕

Yes because he thinks Manyata died because of him at their previous birth

It will be more clear in upcoming chapys 😊

Absolutely enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for the PM and sorry once again 😛
Its okay 😊