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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

AWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT 1000 YEARS HAVE PASSED LOVED HOW SHE HAS HER BROTHER TO PROTECT HER HOPE HE REALLY IS PROTECTING HER AWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT BEAUTIFULLY DONE THANKS FOR THE PM

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: ...navina...
Hi Payel Di 😊. Firstly , very sorry for only reading your update now.
Its okay sis 😊

I have been very busy at work recently , and I didn't want to post an "RES" because I wasn't sure when I'll be able to edit it😕.
Thankz for reading with your work pressure...Thankzzz a looot Navina😊 Your comments are my inspiration

Now , coming to the chapter ... It was brilliant 👏. Very well written!!!

Thankz and Thankz again 😊
Manyata is the new Yuvraani , but I think she'll be like the Prince of Jaigarh; in that ... she'll also choose love over everything else😳. Even as her Dada told her the story of her ancestor getting ditched ; she was relating more to the love-story of the Prince and his prostitute and I feel that she showed some admiration for what he did. ( JUST MY VIEW😆)!!!!

Your view is absolutely correct dear 😊

About Udayan ... I'm not sure if he's cynical or sarcastic 😕 ... maybe a mixture of both. Will judge him when I read more about him😉.

Yaap I've kept my Udayan in mistry 😊

So , di ; WHO'S THE MYSTERY CALLER😉???
You have to read till end to know the caller 😉
Update soon , so we can get an answer😆. Thanks for the PM😊.

I will try to update soon

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Supetb update payel di
Love it...
Update soon
Thanx for PM.

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Comment edited on Pg 15..sorry for the delay Payel...bt i forgot to reply that i had actually commented😆

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Res...😊...

Unres...

OK Payel i read the prologue again and also the first chapter and i was in a dream land...I am always fond of ur writing style.😛 Ur language has that ancient essence in it which makes it a very classy story. Sorry to comment late but these days m a bit busy dear thats why could not comment on time..

Looking forward to the next chapter...😊

Thankzzz for your support Gargi 😊

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Comment edited on Pg 15..sorry for the delay Payel...bt i forgot to reply that i had actually commented😆

Oh don't take tension for that dear😊

Edited by panchaali - 12 years ago

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: serat
plzzz
updateee
nexttt
chappp
soonnn

Okay Updating right now...but if have to read it now only 😉

Shart manjur hain?😉

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

res😊. Sorry Payel Di , I know this is very rude of me ... but I will edit it tomorrow , when I return from work.

Hi Payel Di , as promised ; here's the edited comment😉...

It was superb👏👏👏.

Someone , who's probably the Royal family's greatest enemy ... was behind the injuries of Mrs Sunitha , as well as the threat on the doctor's family and lastly on sending those dacoits to harm the Princess 😡 . But the question is 🤔 ... who's the mystery foe?

I truly felt sorry for the doctor ... he was positioned in a very difficult situation. But I'm glad that his family was safe in the end.

The attack on Manyata was very scary , but I'm impressed how valiantly she fought with those evil vermin🤢. (BTW ... Payel Di - U write action sequences BRILLIANTLY👏). I loved the beheading parts😈 ... THEY DESERVED IT😃!!!

Now , the entry of Uday has me confused😕 ... IS HE SOME KIND OF SUPER-NATURAL BEING? IS HE A GHOST FROM THE PAST? IS HE A REINCARNATED VERSION OF JAIGARH'S PRINCE UDAYVEER???

Hope we get some clarification soon😉!!!!

It truly was a fantastic update Di 👍🏼 ,

Very well-written ,

please continue soon ...

... thanx 4 the PM😊.

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: ...navina...
res😊. Sorry Payel Di , I know this is very rude of me ... but I will edit it tomorrow , when I return from work.

Its okay sis 😊

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LittleDhampir.

@LittleDhampir.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Really nice update👏

I just loved how Manyata left her coronation just to save the life of her subject. She really proved herself worthy of the crown.

And I hate those dacoits who harmed Manyata.😡

Yipee...Finally Manveer meeting...but is Uday real?😕 I mean he is shown like someone supernatural.

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