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wooow...wonderful.nice update.👏

beautifully written.👍🏼

stunt sequence was superb👍🏼

😊

Originally posted by: ...navina...

res😊. Sorry Payel Di , I know this is very rude of me ... but I will edit it tomorrow , when I return from work.

Hi Payel Di , as promised ; here's the edited comment😉...

It was superb👏👏👏.

Thankz a lot dear...I didn't like this part myself...but I didn't know how to improve it 😕 so posted it

Someone , who's probably the Royal family's greatest enemy ... was behind the injuries of Mrs Sunitha , as well as the threat on the doctor's family and lastly on sending those dacoits to harm the Princess 😡 . But the question is 🤔 ... who's the mystery foe?

Dhire Dihre...not so soon dear 😊

I truly felt sorry for the doctor ... he was positioned in a very difficult situation. But I'm glad that his family was safe in the end.

The attack on Manyata was very scary , but I'm impressed how valiantly she fought with those evil vermin🤢.

(BTW ... Payel Di - U write action sequences BRILLIANTLY👏).

Really Navina!!!!!!I thought I am the worst at it...thankz again...and I wanna hug you specially for this line 🤗

I loved the beheading parts😈 ... THEY DESERVED IT😃!!!

I too loved it 😃

Now , the entry of Uday has me confused😕 ... IS HE SOME KIND OF SUPER-NATURAL BEING? IS HE A GHOST FROM THE PAST? IS HE A REINCARNATED VERSION OF JAIGARH'S PRINCE UDAYVEER???

So many questions at a time about our hero...all I can say is...you will know it soon 😊

Hope we get some clarification soon😉!!!!

It truly was a fantastic update Di 👍🏼 ,

Very well-written ,

please continue soon ...

... thanx 4 the PM😊.

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

Really nice update👏

I just loved how Manyata left her coronation just to save the life of her subject. She really proved herself worthy of the crown.

Yaap she is 😊

And I hate those dacoits who harmed Manyata.😡

They deserves that only 😡

Yipee...Finally Manveer meeting...but is Uday real?😕 I mean he is shown like someone supernatural.

That you will know later 😊

Originally posted by: catty2000

Fantastic update 👏

Loved it 😳

Your writing is superb !

Everything is easy to imagine !

And our wordings really make the story worth reading !

Thankz a lot...this means a lot for a writer 😊

Coming to the update,

Manyata is a true royal ... 👏

Wow finally Uday came to her rescue 🥳

Waiting for their interaction ...

Continue soon ...

Thanks for the PM !

You are welcome dear 😊

P.S. And i am sorry for not being to regular on your stories as i was a bit busy lately !

I too am not regular with my stories for the very same reason 😆...don't be sorry I underrstand...read if you get time