8th fan-made epi!! one hour special :) complete !! - Page 4

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

this was a cute episode fia😊 loved it a lot.. u r an awesome writer👏
manyata talking to uday abt their first date and d day when uday go her pizza was sweet...
such a romantic episode😳😳 n uday tracing her scar n saying sorry.. cute scenes..
😳but yeh uday manyata ke sath kya kar raha hai undoing her zipper 😆
woh pool side mein hai.. wat if d waiter or staff comes to ask them if they want anything else😆
smooching thak teek hai.. not that i dint want these scenes..
loved them.. but they shud have been in some private place..
ya entire gazebo was reserved for them.. but hotel staff aa sakthe hai na😆
anyway gud dat no one came there n we got hot scenes.. 😃

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Amazing Update Fia and Saira Loved it... Vijay and Unnanti scene was so funny becharah bhaag gaya hai... loved Manveer date... dont like AD get rid of him

Originally posted by: fia21

Would it be weird if I reserve a post to comment on the episode that I have written myself? 🤔
Yea it would I guess 😆
So I am going to let everybody else do the honors of leaving their precious comments and let me know if they liked my episodes yesterday and today 😊

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Okay I read it again. 😃 Here goes:

"Tum sach main Uday ki he behan ho. Kahin tum main Katrina Kaif ka bhoot to nahin ghuss gaya na? Woh zara zara touch me touch me zara zara kiss me kiss me wala bhoot?" , asked Vijay looking scared and taking steps backwards.

"What?!?!" , Unnati was even more confused now. But being Uday's sister, she wasn't going to give up so easily. So she decided to tease him further because by now she had realized that Vijay was scared of being romantic and she decided to take advantage of that.

"Tum kehtay ho to main tumhari liye who wali Katrina Kaif bhi ban sakti hoon" , whispered Unnati running her index finger all the way from his temple, down to his chin.

"Bachao bachao humari izzat ki naiyya doobne se koi bachao" , Vijay screamed and ran away from there as fast as he could.

"Arrey Vijay ruko to sahi" , Unnati burst out laughing at his antics.

🤣 🤣 OMG this was frikken hilarious! Could imagine the whole scene in my head nad literally burt out into laughter! Especially the part about her bieng UV's sister after all! 😆

Hahahaha. I was so unsure about this part but you liked it and that's all that matters 😃

He looked dashing as always in a black suit with a white shirt with two buttons from the top left open, revealing his perfectly chiseled chest.

☺️ Great..you've already got me all smiley and blushing even befre the update started! 😆 It's the Udayveer effect 😉

UV didnt know who Manyata was!? 🤣 Lmao he just asked for where exactly the reservation was done. Itna bara hotel hao, gum hojata to? 😆 . And to top it all, the poor guy got confused after watching a girl in a black dress because he wouldn't expect Manyata to be in it 😛😆 Hahha thats jokes and OMG you described his reaction at seeing her soo frikken well! 😲 Seriously man koi kasar nahi choddi tumne! Perfect!! Flawless!! 😳 Eeep I am so happy you liked that part. I wanted it to be perfect which is why I had to think like a guy 😳😆

Uday was glad to see that no one else was there to eye his Princess in that dress since only he had the right to look at her like that.

Awww!!! 😳

And oh man, that intense gaze 😳..LOL no wonder Manyata all of a sudden felt the need to cover up... Love his intense gazes 😍

The scene that followed was written so beautifully man! 😳 And Manyata's shyness was just adorable! Thank you 😃

"Ab jaldi se humari Maharani ban ker hamaray Mahal main ajao. Roz roz itna hot dikhogi to hamari niyat bigad jaye gi na, aur ab to sach main humse control nahin kiya ja raha" , smirked Uday.

Awww!! ☺️

"Are we just going to eat the whole time?" , asked Uday

"Why? Do you have to go somewhere?" , questioned Manyata

"Yes. In your arms" , whispered Uday, leaning closer from across the table.

Oh man..that line from Uday was just brilliant! 👍🏼 Really loved the scenes that followed, totally took me down the memory lane..them eating pizza on their date..ahhah soo adorablee!! 😳 I have always wanted to see a scene in the show where they both revive old memories but it never happened, so I had the authority to do it here and I thought why not? 😉

And now of course moving on to the part that got me the most impressed. Seriously this part cant be described as nothing less than FLAWLESS! Right from the beginning, the whole poolside, water, feet thing...😍 even their setting is sooo romantic man!! 😳 can just imagine everthing! Awww man stop it already my mouth hurts from the excessive smiling I've been doing ever since I started reading your comment 😳

And the kiss...Should totally declare you the indisputed Queen of Kiss Writing! 😆 not too much detail and not too little - its just PERFECT! On top of that I felt like it was so PURE..just like the love of ManVeer! 😳 Seriously man you write the best kisses! 😆 They are so hot, romantic, passionate, yet like I said - PURE! 😳 I am so glad that you mentioned that because that is exactly the way I wanted to show it. With neither too much detail, nor too little detail and keeping it hot and passionate, yet pure. For me the action doesn't matter, it's the feelings that come along with it. So I don't give too many detailed explanations on how the kiss is going on, but I like writing on how it feels to the characters because that's what matters. So thank you for noticing it and liking it 😳 . Indisputed Queen of Kissing hahahaha 🤣 . Oh God you cracked me up big time 😆

The whole scar scene was just BEAUTIFUL! 😍 The best way to conclude. Yaayy thanks 😳 . The scar has been always important for me in their story, but the CVs just forgot it. Idiots.

He turned her around to face him, brought her sleeves back to their original position and hugged her with all his might and simultaneously closed the zip of her dress. Manyata felt at peace in his arms. Being in love with Uday was the best thing that ever happened to her.

Awww!! ☺️ 😍 Loved the way hes hugging her so tight..im getting jealous damn it! 😆

Me too. She gets to romance him everywhere yaar. No fair 😆

Okay really this whole chapter was just amazing, one of the best things I read! Great writing Fifu and great editing Vampy! 😃

Thank you SOO much for the lovely comment Ranju. Seriously I feel so good after reading it 😃

Love ya guys for this! 🤗

Love you more 🤗

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Amazing Update Fia and Saira Loved it... Vijay and Unnanti scene was so funny becharah bhaag gaya hai... loved Manveer date... dont like AD get rid of him

Originally posted by: annysyed

Fia n saira marvellous work,outstandind episode,awww the manveer date was so romantic