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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: rocker12

no probz dear though it was short it was gr8 but ur plot makes me eager to read sorry cant help out gr8 work by the way contsoon :) will be waiting




will update soon i working on it now


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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
good work
enjoyed reading it
most of de part was given 2 de song
its 1 of my favourite song by the way
waiting for the next update
Edited by lilybabes - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi wow fabulous one dear plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: lilybabes

good work

enjoyed reading it
most of de part was given 2 de song
its 1 of my favourite song by the way
waiting for the next update


glad u liked it
will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Update soon Plez Plez Plez
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: san.gar

Update soon Plez Plez Plez


will update soon i am working on it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

One year later

As sun raises went though the large windows of her bedroom she woke up with a yawn and checked the time in her alarm clock it read 7:oo am in the morning she sighed and though to herself

Manyata (thinking): it has being exactly one year today one year since I have come to Devghar one year since uday left me one year since my soul had left my body now I have became just a walking machine who does everything she can of people her state

She then brushed off all those thoughts and went to freshen up, she directly went to the breakfast table where she was greeted her chef and her PA

Manyata: MR Roy what is the schedule of today (she asked while surfing threw her phone reading some mail

MR Roy: your highness today you have meeting with the MD of Khorana group of industries and your highness….

Manyata: what happened MR: Roy any problem Manyata asked as she saw the 27 year old man in a lot of stress?

Mr. Roy he was a 27 year old man he was not only manyata's PA but a also a councilor he knew everything about her and respected her a lot he knew the love she had for Udayveer and how much she missed him

Manyata: MR. Roy what happened any problem? She asked again this time a bit louder

MR. Roy: Manyata

Manyata knew that MR. Roy always called her using her name when something terrible had happened

Manyata: yes Roy tell me what happened I am ready for the worst nothing can be worse than the past (teary eyes)

MR. Roy: the invitation (he handed her an envelope)

Manyata: (reading the invitation) I want to be left alone and she walked to her room

Just after entering her room she busted out crying loudly she had shattered into ma thousand pieces that invitation had shattered all her hopes her dreams it had vanished even the last ray of hope in her life she laid on the floor crying and trying to gather all the pieces of her shattered like but after a few hours she composed herself wiped her tears and gazed at the that invite the last time before turning her face away

The invite said:

The royal family of Jaighar and Devghar invites to Mumbai for the wedding of

Yuvraj Udayveer Singh

And

Rajkumari Jaynandini

Manyata goes out of the room and calls for seemaji

Manyata: seemaji please pack my bag right now I have to leave for Mumbai it is the wedding of my sister (her face showed no emotion except her eyes had swelled up)

Seemaji: yes your highness (she bowed down and left)

On the other hand we see uday studying a file in his room when J enters and starts to bug his with her nonsense

J: uday I am so happy I am finally getting married to you

Uday: yes (looking at his file least interested in her talks)

J: you know I will get my clothes done form the scindia fashion house oh god so much shopping is supposed to be done only 2 weeks are left (pulls uday)

Uday: stop it J can't you see I am busy

J: uday I know you are hurt please give me a chance I would not be like Manyata

Uday: stop it J I don't want to talk about princess (realizes what he said) I mean Manyata

J: fine (she leaves the room with anger)

Unnati who had being witnessing all these things form the door of the room could clearly see the loneliness pain and hurt her dada's eyes she decided to talk to him

Unnati: dada

Uday: yes unnati you want something

Unnati: dada cant I talk to you just without a reason

Uday: ofcourse you can choti

Unnati: dada why are you marrying J she does not deserve you please dada you will ruin your life dada please rethink on your decision please dada

Uday: at she will not leave me when I need her unlike some other people(remembers Manyata her betrayal her leaving him)

Unnati: dada you are wrong you don't know the truth

Uday: I know everything choti it is K if you think I don't fine tell me the truth then?

Unnati: dada she was (remembers manyata's promise that she will not tell uday anything)

Uday: see choti you have nothing to say and I don't love her anymore she is a long lost chapter

Unnati: no dada u love Manyata even more than you ever used to I can see it in your eyes dada I can see it

Uday: I don't love her choti I don't I hate her

Unnati: u love her dada she is in your every heart beat every breath dad accept it dada don't run away from the truth

Uday: enough unnati enough

Unnati (teary eyes): fine dada I will leave (she turns to leave)

Uday (stops her): choti I never wanted to scream at you choti

Unnati: it fine dada and I have news for you Manyata is coming back today after one year (she leaves)

Uday: what

The scene then shifts to the airport where Manyata has landed and the media is going wild Manyata who was once a chawl wali has now became India most eligible bachelorette and she had power money and people with her Manyata was surrounded by 10 bodyguards as the media and crowd was getting out of control she walked out of the airport wore her black sunglasses put a smile on her face and waved at people she then sat in her black Mercedes which was waiting for her

The car came to a halt just outside the palace, the media who was already there was again out of control Manyata stepped out of the car and walked with such grace and elegance that only a princess could carry out, the moment she entered she was greeted by warm hug form unnati

Unnati: bhabhi sa I am so happy you are back

Manyata: unnati I am not your bhabhi sa that right is no more mine it is J's

Unnati: sorry (all most about to break down)

Manyata (breaking the hug): its K unnati

Manyata then greeted all the other members of the family but her eyes were only looking for uday she could not see him but her heart felt his presence she knew he was near her she could feel his graze because her body was burning form inside and only uday had the power to do that to her she looked around again and finally after the wait of 1 year she saw him up the stairs though he was speaking on the phone she could feel him looking at her

On the other side uday was just faking the phone call he wanted to see his princess and hug her tight confess his love but her betrayal was stopping him he was feeling helpless and weak and only she had the strength to make the yuvraj Udayveer singh feel weak

He then looked down and she looked up and their eyes meet it was a feeling of bliss uday's intense gaze was burning Manyata and her soft and full of love gaze was making uday go weak after a few seconds they broke their eye lock though those few seconds felt like eternity for manveer

Komal: uday beta please comes down stairs

Uday went downstairs his gaze still on Manyata

Uday(thinking): she has changed the innocent and smiling eyes had now turned emotion less and cold her smiling eyes were lost the bubbly and chubby Manyata was lost she had lost weight her dressing had changed and her happiness did not reach her eyes her face showed very less emotion he felt guilty for some reason

Manyata: hello Udayveer

Uday: hi Manyata

Manyata: unnati can you please show me my room because a lot of things have changed I see (actually she wanted to get away from uday)

Unnati: sure

And Manyata leaves to go to the east wing while uday leaves to go to the west wing and all the family members are in the middle looking at the two

Precap:

Uday: so you have moved on in life

Manyata: yes uday just like you even I have moved on

Uday: so your new boyfriend does he make you feel like I do

And before Manyata could realize or even attempt to do or say something she was pinned to the wall. Uday leaned in and started kissing her kissing her shoulder removing her sari pallu for the side

Uday: does he make your body shiver like this (he kissed her next travelling up to her lips

Manyata tries to push his away put his grip is too tight on her waist and then uday roughly kisses her lips both lost in the kiss the kiss was not slow or full of love no it was a kiss of passion and war the tow were fighting uday's hands then unhooked her saree blouse making it fall on the ground

And

And

Guys if I write everything now what will you guys read in the next update please guys do read and comment please please

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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
gr8 update vampy :)it was truely fab great work just loved do cont soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
AWesome and emotional update
and
The precap😳 ...
Wating 4 nxt part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: san.gar

AWesome and emotional update

and
The precap😳 ...
Wating 4 nxt part.


i am so so happy that you found this emotional i suck at writing emotional scenes so if you found it emotional that it is an achievement i feel like i got an Oscar award 😃 šŸ˜† my forte is writing hot scenes like you saw in the precap😳

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