jealousy plays the cupid FF chpter9 pg95

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K guys this is another FF i am starting i know some people will say i should the first one first but this is a way i am expressing my happiness of becoming a goldie 😃 the plot is given by mahnoor i am just developing it

prologue of jealousy plays the cupid
its the time when uday decides to leave with jai and (actually i was thinking if DEK hadnt ended ,it would have proceede😉d like this ) manyata is very heart broken and she tells unnati to not say anything to uday about the truth and decides to move to devgadh so she can go away from uday
then a leap takes place of one year and manyata is in devgadh ,the number one yuvraani of india and she is the same loving caring manyata but she misses uday a lot and her family,she keeps her bust with her kingdom and misses her family a lot !overhere there is a change in manyata's clothing ( she could wear beautiful sari which wold udas our urge to see her in) ,her attitude (in a positive way ,she can fight for her rights and stuff)!and still uday and manyata still miss eachother alot
at MUMBAI
you could see that things have changed like vija bhai is handeling everything over there and uday is the yuvraaj of jaigadh not the womaniser but a little cold hearted but still a touch of old uday in him who misses manyata every second and is still with jay trying to adjust with her even though not wanting to !then the story proceeds that uday in order to take out manyata from his mind decides to marry jay and so manyata gets to know about this and though she cries about she she makes herself understand that this is destiny and that uday has moved on in his life and that she cannot create problems in jays life and after seeing the happiness in both the raaj parivaar's she decides to maintain a distance with uday when she is called for jay and uday's wedding!overhere now when manyata reaches to mumbai

what happens when they meet again?
how will they unite?
will they meet or separate for ever?
how will manyata and udayveer became manveer again?



so guys that was kind of like a summary on what happened before the first chapter will from when manyata comes back to mumbai please guys do let me know whether i should continue or not and people who want pms please send me a buddy request
please do comment and like


index

Prologue page 1

Chapter 1 page 5

Chapter 2 page 10

Chapter 3 page 7

Chapter 4 page 18

Chapter 5 page 27

Chapter 6 page 49

chapter 7 page 73

chapter 8 and promo page 85


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its nice!!!!
Now have to read the chapters to look forward wat's happening!!
Thanks to mahnoor for the plot
And saira for developing!!
Edited by Gowri05 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dying to read this ff saira, god plot continue this please 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i jst loved the plot,plzz cntinue soon!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: chitra_rao

dying to read this ff saira, god plot continue this please 😛


glad u liked it will update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: pia.raha

i jst loved the plot,plzz cntinue soon!!!!!!!!!


i will😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskan99

Great Job

UPDATE SOON
LOOKS GOOD



thanks will update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good Plot Mahnoor & Saira! The Story Would Be More Intresting If You Would Make ManVeer Close V Sooonn! I Love Saira's Way Of Writing The Censored Scenes ;) & Hope This Will Contain Some :D Ty 4 d pm & I'm Eagerly Waiting 4 This FF's Update & Love Coem Again's Too! Pls Update The Both FF's Sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashukapoor007

Good Plot Mahnoor & Saira! The Story Would Be More Intresting If You Would Make ManVeer Close V Sooonn! I Love Saira's Way Of Writing The Censored Scenes ;) & Hope This Will Contain Some :D Ty 4 d pm & I'm Eagerly Waiting 4 This FF's Update & Love Coem Again's Too! Pls Update The Both FF's Sooon


thank u zainab and dont worry this FF will have jealous uday which mean intense and hawt scnes and yes naughtie scenes 😆 thanks for the appreciation will update both FF i hope would not be lazy and will update love comes again tomorrow for sure and a hawt and naughty update just the way you like it😉 i am really happy that u like my work😃 and manveer will be together soon dont worry by the way read your comment for lost heritage 😉😛 dont worry i would not disappoint you because i love manveer
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Posted: 13 years ago
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already love the ff, please update soon and thanks 4 the pm

but is uday going to marry j or are they already married?

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