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Originally posted by: Roze12

lol..first april ko..update.. 😆 ...fool bana rhi ha.. 😛 ...tera update..2..saal taak nhn ho ga... 😆 ...may janti hn...


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I swear its soul mates birthday so its her gift lol
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Originally posted by: vampire12345678



Yeah i support homosexuality
What about u ?



tu jahan mein wahan😆
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THIS UPDATE IS THE LAST ONE

IT IS DEDICATED TO MY SOULMATE AKA NAVINA

HOPE U ALL ENJOY

THE MEETING OF 2 SOULMATES


As DS called udayveer
in the study her face showed no emotion her eyes were cold and her face looked
like a stone holding her head high just like a queen would she sat on the chair
in the middle of the study and gestured udayveer to sit on the visitors chair
and for what seemed like eternity both said absolutely nothing , both were in
their own deep thought.

outside the study the scene was different hearing udayveer's confessions manyata was upset though she was not hurt she always knew. He loved her and even in the room on the day of the engagement their small intimate moment where they have ALMOST just broken all bonds but what shattered her the most was the confessions of ronnie she trusted him and she loved him as freind now as he loves now she felt betrayed she felt like he just wanted to use her , give her favours and take advantage burying her face in the pillow she cried and weeped.

Komal saw her daughters from outside the room manyata who
was crying because she was over loved and J who was unconscious as she had just
been told to do the grossest of things too get her love both her daughters were

Outside the place unnati and vijaybhai were speaking to rajpurohit and they were shocked when they got to know that J's kundli actually had a problem and the option was her and jagat getting togther . Vijaybhai and unnati could not belive what they had just heard and there joy was out of bound. The Rajpurohit told them that in the mahal he had lied according to their plan but as he looked at her kundli he realised that she would make a great pair with jagat as their stars are meant to be .

In the study room finally the deafening silence came to an
end and udayveer and DS had a serious conversation in which also Ronnie was
included and DS made a decision which was J making out with donkeys and uday
will '' HAVE'' to accept j for the name of jaighar and devghar and manyata
would get married to Ronnie

The decision was annouced to all the youngsters and NO one but Ronnie was happy but it was short lived as manyata made him sign a contract that after 6 months of their marriage they will have a legal divorce and he can NOT touch her in any way , Ronnie loved manyata and he agreed.

On the otherhand udayveer was so so worried also he had to marry J and manyata was getting married to ronnie it was terrible he was troubled he found support in alcohol and immerse himself in work he hardly ate and did not speak to anyone


J was busy thinking how to escape from donkeys and her mind
was on manyata each time she thought about makingout with manyata her body
tingled with desire and she screamed at herself for thinking of the grossest of
things

Unnati and vijaybhai were very worried as to what would
happen as all their plans in the past
week to get manveer close were all going haywire


Then vijaybhai came up witha very lovely idea of going to
hariwar and he planned got manveer to get lost and in his own wild imagination
manyata was already pregnant and smiled and naratted his very Wild and Cheesy
and Filmy idea too unnati who also agreed


Then the younsters made a plan too go to for a picninc and
enjoy their weekend the week had been tooo terrible for all and haridwar where
they could see the wonderful hills and the beautiful hills they gotten
permission from DS

They had to leave in 2 days and they did all the packing

Manyata decided to enjoy herself

And udayveer decided to get WHAt WAS HIS


The day arrived when the youngsters wanted to leave and every thing was a mess J screaming to get her clothes set. Unnati and vijaybhai were laughing outsides J's room as they knew her donkey love story was to start after they got back from their little picnic and they were happy to put their plan into action to get manyata and udayveer to get manveer again

Udayveer was moving toward his room when he collided with
Ronnie with a huge force

A skimmpy small shorts and a blouse that looked more like a
bra fell from his hands udayveer looked at it and bursted out laughing


Udayveer: hahahaha really ronnie u wear that really???

Ronnie: lol uday u really think that actually this is for my
would to be wife manyata she will look so damn hot and her curves will be so
highlighed ) he licks his lips

Uday got so so pissed of his face turned RED

Uday: ronnie manyata never wears such clothes

Ronnie: udayveer manyata is going to wear this to the picnic
as I want her to wear it and she is getting married to me and I have to see the
trailer of what is waiting for me after marriage

( Though ronnie knew that he will never get manyata but he
was determined to get her ANYWAY)

Uday; MY PRINCESS will not wear something like this ( he said in a know her TOO well tone)

They both gave each other smirks and left their ways

Manyata came down looking like a greek goddess actually that

would be a be an understatement as she descended down the stairs udayveer and
Ronnie unintentionally hard hard ons and J was wet and that was bad her mind
screamed at her to stop acting like a homo

Udayveer smirked at what she was wearing after all he was
right and manyata did not wear that very reavealing outfit but she was wearing normal shorts upto her
knees and a john cena Tshirt she looked so so so so so beautiful and her hair
was tied in a pony with a cute hair hand

They all started their journey manyata was sitting next to
ronnie , uday next to J , unnati next to vijaybhai

They reached their destination and started to build their
things and getting everything well

And as it happens in all block buster films manveer were in
a tent and the tent fell resulting in uday being on manyata but her clothes
were making udayveer turned on all he was seeing was her lips her chest
touching his with her every breath and all he could feel was her breath
caressing his face and he leaned in and kissed manyata with all his passion and
she responded they knew it was not right but desires took over them and they
kissed with passion uday removed her shirt alittle exposing her shoulders and
he licked her neck leaving wet kisses from jaw line and squeezing her breasts
manyata moaned in pleasure all was forgotten even the setting they were in but
their very blissful moment was broken as the other youngsters removed the tents
over manveers body and all of them gasped in HORROR

Manyata her eyes closed, shirt half up and a deep love bite
on her exposed shoulders and udayvver was on her his shirt torn from the back

As soon as the sunlight hit their faces they realised their
position and manyata pushed udayveer with all her might and ran from there to
the river

As manyata reached the river she was panting hard she washed

her face in the river and closed her eyes her scenes with uday came flooding in
her mind and she washed her face again and stood up to go back to the camp but Manyata screamed and screamed for help and udayveer and ronnie heard manyata they both ran at the speed of vampires before j unnati or vijaybhai could ask them what had happened they were long gone in the rescue of manyata .

Reaching the river ronnie reached first and took manyata out
of the water and udaveer just stood their looking at ronnie as he rescued
manyata and carried her into his arm back to the camp udayveer leaned against the back of tree he had ALMOST lost his princess

As ronnie returned to the camp with manyata in his arms and udayveer behind him everyone panicked to see manyata in that state and the sun had set by then and it was so cold.

Ronnie took manyata in his camp and rubbed her feet and hands
her body was turning cold and she needed heat he moved towards her lips the
heat from the fire giving him a push in his desires ronnie was about to a mouth
to mouth when udayveer entered the camp fussing in anger as due to the night
and fire the shadow that reflected outside the tent was very indecent

Udayveer grabbed ronnie by his collar and punched him hard
on his face

Ronnie too was no less and the massive fight began

Udayveer; how dare u touch her

Ronnie; she is my would to be wife I have the rights to
touch her

Udayveer ; no u don't have the right she belongs to me

Ronnie ; NO I am going to get married to her

Udayveer; yeah right now wait and wtch

Udayveer grabbed bottle of soda from broke it resulting inhis hands bleeding then he walked to the bed post where manyata laided and he filled her forehead with his blood , he took out a mangarsultra which he had bought with his as his mothers last wish. That her mangalsutra should be given to her sons first love and he had brought it for manyata he then played a wedding ritual song in his phone and carried manyata around the fire and claimed her his and all ronnie could do was STARE with his mouth handing open

Udayveer passed his signature smirk

Uday: now she is my wife with all the rituals go now get out
I have to tend to my wife

Ronnie who was so caught up in the moment just left without
arguing

reaching out he narrated the story to j , unnati and vijaybhai
and when j went all crazy unaati and vijay controlled her and ronnie left the
camp with tears in his eyes

In the camp udayveer had planned to give manyata body heat in a very rightful manner as he was HER OFFICAL HUSBAND

He started with removing her clothes and his own and soon
their bodies became one

( Guys I know u wanted details but I have got 2 warnings if
I get the 3rd one then will be kicked from the forum so no sex in this sorry)

1 LATER

Dada dada said unnati screamming her lungs out

Udayveer; what happened choti ( he asked worriedly)

Unnati: bhabhi is in labour and she is in a jungli mode

Udayveer panicked and he ran to the room to find manyata
yelling in pain , as manyata saw him he called for him

Manyata; AHAHAh udayveer singh halkat veda u stupid moron u
were so horny then u have pregnanted me and I bear all the pain that's NOT AHAhA Fair

Udayveer; please baby calm down

Manyata; calm down when Your BABIES are giving me AHAHAH

Udayveer carried her into the ambulence and she was taken to the hospital where all the doctors were their to attend to her udayveer was asked to stay with her in the delivery room as she coud not leave his hand

Manyat: U f**ko u are a horny bitch

Udayveer; manyata I am ur husband please respect me

Manyata; did u respect me when u kept banging into me for
hours

Udayveer : princess control

Udayveer was very embrassed the king of jaighar and devghar
was being screamed at and all his bedroom secrets were said out and the doctors
and nurses were laughing so hard

Manyata: when I reach home I will throw the the red
transparent nightie because when I wear it u became a BULL

AHahahgAhahahahahaha she screamed and the baby came out
after 2 minutes she was in pain again and another baby came out

Udayveer was over joyed he carried his 2 babies out and
everyone laughed at udayveer first and were overjoyed to see the 2 YURAJs

J carried one of the babies and admired him

Udayveer; J when are u planning to suprise us afterall I
know jagat is a MAN

Jagat; udaybana we have planned it already

Komal and brijraj saw the kids and smiled

Komal; I am so happy both my kids are married and happy j
got married to jagat and manveer have kids I am so happy to be a grand parent

Brijraj: komal everyone is plannning kids should we try *wink*

Komal; ( blush )

the nurse then took the babies for a cleaning and everyone
went to meet manyata and laughed

Manyata then realised what shit she had said and was so
embrassed that she did not speak a word and kept her head down

Soon enough the babied were brought and manveer hugged their babies and it was a
happy ever after but picture abhi baki hain freinds

50 YEARS LATER

Manyata was 75 and udayveer was 79 they were old but they
did not stop their love

Manyata came out of the washroom wearing a towel and
udayveer stood in his pajamas he went forward and kissed manyata but due to old
age he started coughing and got ashtma attck in 1 minute of their kiss

Manyata ran and got him medicines and told him to rest but
udayveer even after being so old was still young at heart he pulled manyata and
they both fell on the bed and they hugged as kissing was out of the question

100 years later

Manveer could hardly walk brought and will chairs they were
taken to their 100th year wedding annivery party by their great grand children and manveer cut
the huge cake and fed each other and vowed to be together in each and every
life


K guys this marks the end of my story jealosy plays the

cupid this chapter is tooo long sorry if I bored u guys this has been a
wonderful journey I love u all please do like and comment

Please guys do like

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Edited by vampire12345678 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hahahahahaha
loved the last part
haaahahahahhahaha
loved the way
uday got married to manyata
haaahhahhahaahahha
awesoem
you are a gr8 writter
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Posted: 12 years ago
cumnt editted on pg 97 😉😉
Edited by iluvmanveer - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hehahaha...oye vampy ye sb kya tha? main to hass hass kr pagal ho rhi hun..asthma scene to was too much hilarious..
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Posted: 12 years ago
res 4 d comment...😉

abhi padh ke unres karti hu...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesme update... Realy so funny nice upda e... I love it

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