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Posted: 12 years ago
wen will you update saira
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 7486E13

nice ending but...<font color="#F5F5F5">1359980517454</font>



I have not ended it yet
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Posted: 12 years ago
update kro darling...dekho mekko roi roi a rhi ha... 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Roze12

update kro darling...dekho mekko roi roi a rhi ha... 😭



Roze darling I am so busy
Even sameer is complaining he was angry yesterday that I don't give him time
So update is a far thing lol
Will try to update when I have mid tern break
Awww darling don't cry sweetheart
Should I call nihal for u * wink
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Roze12

update kro darling...dekho mekko roi roi a rhi ha... 😭

mekko bhi roi roi arrahi hai sexy item
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Posted: 12 years ago
plese update kariye na plzz
warna sachi mei roa dungi
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Posted: 12 years ago

Heya guys I have finally updated chapter 8 of this story and now I really wanna show how the story will progress, this update is not very long as I was running out of time but I have given a precap and a really long promo according to me at least lol. This update is for roze darling as she has blackmailed me so bad I hope u all enjoy this update well and I promise u that the next update will also come soon as I have mid term break for 2 days so will try to update k will now stop my nonsense please guys do read and like and comment please

chapter 8 😳


Rajpurohit: k then beta for 2 months u will have to wake up at 4 in the morning at shower will cold water and u have to marry 5 black donkeys and drink their urine before and after breakfast and at night before going to bed and also I have to eat one spoon of their shit every day

Standing there j felt like the world is about to finish, she fell into reverie where she was in a pink bridal dress and was taking phera with 4 donkeys and was sitting on the fifth the scene shifted to j sitting on a bed which was decorated with flowers and j was sitting in the middle when the 5 black donkeys entered her room and attacked her like she was a jennet and "her" donkey's could speak

Donkey 1: j darling anko se anke chaar karne dhooo roko na roko na hum gadho ko pyaar karne dho ( pouting )

Donkey 2: mehu kala gadha theyar chipkale muje fericol se nen(eyes) hum laraenge miss Jaynandini se

Donkey 3: my name is gadha, gadhe ki jaawani ,I am too sexy for u but please meri baho main agao

Donkey 4: hum tum ek kambre mein band ho or kapre nikal jae

And before the fifth donkey could say a word j screamed and came out of her revere

J screamed her lungs and the only word that came out from her mouth was " no " everyone sitting on the hall was surprised at the sudden outburst of j screaming like she had seen a ghost but everyone understood her reaction as she was told to the most disgusting things anyone could even think of doing

When j was screaming and acting all crazy Udayveer sat there as cool was ever and rajmata was in deep thoughts manyata and Ronnie kept staring at each other as both had no idea on what to say unnati and vijaybhai had a smile on there faces and komal and brijraj was trying to calm down j who seemed traumatized after a few minutes rajmata finally spoke

Rajmata: purohit ji is there another option

Purohit ji: rajmata is there was a nother option I would have told u

Rajmata: please see again what if there is another option

Purohit ji: there is another way but '''''''

Rajmata: what is that way please tell us

Purohit ji: the way is that j should '' married to a married to a women and make love to her for 10 days until which her stars should be in her favour

Rajmata: what ! she exclaimed

Purohit ji: and it can not be any random girl it has to be manyata her own sister

At that time Ronnie and Udayveer both burst out together

Both at the same time: what! That's not possible she is straight I know that and just no way what about me how will I live without her I wanna be the first to touch her I love manyata

They stoppend talking as they felt their words echoing in the room and it was disaster Udayveer had just proposed to manyata and so did Ronnie but the main thing was Udayveer

Rajmata stood up from her seat and looked at Udayveer with a her old eyes and her eyes were plain with no emotions at all and she told Udayveer

Rajmata: I WANT TO SEE U IN MY OFFICE NOW


precap:

*Edited by DT because it contained explicit content*

Guys after reading the precap I would request u not to think its uday as I am also not sure whther it will be uday or Ronnie so if I get 35 likes it will be Udayveer and if I get less than that then it will Ronnie who will be making love to manyata and will change the whole plot lol so please do like and comment I like long comments lol hahaha

Promo:

All the youngsters made a plan to go for a picnic and enjoy their weekend after a very stressful one week they all needed a break and the best place was to go to haridwar where they could see the wonderful hills and the beautiful fountains

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"Udayveer manyata is going to wear this short shorts and this tan top and come for the picnic because I want her to do so" said Ronnie in a proud tone

"My princess will not wear something like this " said Udayveer in a know her too well tone

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She looked like a greek goddess when she moved from one place to the other she looked like an angle actually that would be an understatement

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As she cried for help both the biys ran from their places and ran for hr help Ronnie reached first and rescused her while Udayveer stood there with tears in his eyes he thought he lost her

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Her breaths were short and her bosy was falling cold there was no way out he had to supply her with body heat he looked at her face which was turning pale and he moved closer to give her mouth to mouth oxygen

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He puched him on his face and made him unconscious

"Udayveer " manyata exclaimed with horror all over her face

Okay guys that was the promo for the next 2 chapters and it has a lot more to come with fight love war and sex so please stay yuned and will try to update soon

I am sorry for the delay but next time the majnu threat will not work as I am over and done with that so think of something new lol

Please please do read and like and comment

Thank u so

Love u muah

Edited by LoveRosh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hailaa...chalo majnu kuch kaam toh aya sairu ne update toh kiya...
Lollzz...super funny update OMg...that gadha scene was superb aur J ki suhagrat bhi...precape me no nono it cnt be ronnie ronnie ko bich me mat ghasito waran majnu OS k liye rehana...haa nahi toh plzzz...update soon.
Edited by Ashish.Holic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

the promo is posted above

😉

Edited by vampire12345678 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
saira accha hua tumne precap me likhdiya ke ronnie ya uv mese ek hoga muji laga j ha lol
and itna chota chappy not fair lekin something is better than nothing the chappy was so good loved it and also promo cant wait to read ahead
mindblowing fantastic awesome
and next time update super fast as i cant wait to read ahead okkk

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