MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 91

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update Navi :D

U r a beautiful Writer ;;)

Hee Cute n Romantic ManVeer Scene in the Morning :D
hehe UV calling har persistently.. and then!! tht!! urghh!! akashh!! mr Impotent :P

ahah Funny n hilarious Scene was when he was telling M tht he Became Impotent :P
hah M coudnt suppress her laughter poor girl bit her lip to control her laughter to burst in front of him :P

aahh Flowers n Flowers :D

Anniversary tym to Celebrate...

so can i req this update before sunday ? :P

waiting for the Night to Remember update :D
im gng crazy over this FF.. Love this FF to d Coreee

Muaaahhh <3

~Jazzy 😊



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pari.prisha

superb update dear, loved it

do continue soon

Thanx Pooja 🤗 .

Originally posted by: Khawaunju

Omg I love it waiting fr next update :)

Thanks Anushka 🤗 ... & I'll be waiting for YOUR response😉 .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: puggyy

Nice update 😊


Loved it ...pathi dev ji scene was so CUTEEE 😊

Thanks Anisha 🤗 .

Originally posted by: sirjee

WAooo manyata in naughty mood

... and we all know from whom she learnt THAT😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zina-

comment edited on page 116😊

Thanx Zainab⭐️.

Originally posted by: -Zina-

Holla! i am again late😃

so coming to the awesome, Blossom, lovely, superb, outstanding, marvelous dhamakedar update!! i loved it to the core as always!
and that Pakash😡 urrghh i hate him like hell!!😡
well how can someone control their laughter when that pakas😡 said that he is impotent lol 🤣🤣 i pity manyata how did she control hers! man what a champu he is!😆
the phoning scene was so pati dev ji! aww how sweet he himself changed it!
i am happy that manyata slapped that pakash😡 and more over she will prove it to him that she only belongs to uday! go on sweety i am with u!😊
eagerly waiting for the night to remember when my dearest manyata will prove it to that pakash😡 that she only only loves uday and hates him!
very nice update navina!
hope sundy comes soon😃
love u😊

Nope ... not late at all. Thanx for all 7 compliments😳. Akash was drunk that's why he said it, otherwise which IDIOT will admit something like that😆. PATHI DEV JI was a last minute change I made in the chapter ... I'm so pleased that u thought it was sweet☺️.
I need all the support for Sunday's update😲 ... I'M SURELY GOING TO HELL AFTER POSTING THAT 1😭.
THANX ZINA FOR THIS AWESOME COMMENT 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Choco.Swiss

Awesome update Navi.It was just wow.Loved it 2 the core.[/IMG][IMG
But the last line.Wo merey sir seh upaar chala gaya.
Uday , dinner Mr aur Mrs Wong ke saath karna,
lekin desert ... SIRF MERE SAATH KARNA!!! He gave his signature smirk as he understood the
hidden meaning.
matlab?????????Anyways waiting 4 the next update.PLIZ pliz pliz cont soon:D

Thanks Swini 🤗 . Well, if u didn't understand - NO PROBLEM. Agle update parh lena😉 ... tumhara jawab wahi milega!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Tannu-

nice update

akash IMPOTENT!! :O :O...u made my day :P hehe

cont soon :)

Thanx Tannu 🤗 .
😈😈😈 ... I'm very evil!!!
I will 😉.
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Posted: 12 years ago

I just read all the chapters from 2.6 and OMG I am like absolutely in love with this SS!! Like I couldn't stop reading!! Great work and I'll looking forward to readng your update on Sunday :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey navi 🤗, finally u updated what an oosome update 👏, so finally Akash is reintroduces back.And what a re-entry, This is no where compared to the stupid reentry the serial makers fed us. this update had everything right from manveer's romantic tadka, to Manyata's wittiness to majnu's dilkush defective re-entry 😆.

Loved the cute manveer scene, and Manyata chose UV's outfit that was even more adorable.And then the Patideviji scene was just so Awww 😳😳. I mean itni respect hazam nahi ho rahi lol , Naughty Uday I though he like being called Halkat veda, lol😆 and the nok-jhok that followed with so manveerish 😉.

The villian's call and Manyata using her brains and letting rajat know about the call and taking his help, was such a oosome move. I love this new transformed manyata, atleast we are sure that she is not some dumb emotional bimbo who can be folled by any tom, dick and harry .

Finally Akash entry, I'm so happy that u dint make him re-enter by his other name Aryan, he is Akashn and this u have made it clear right at this time that he has disguised as his look alike to get all the money that he has now, with this I can look forward to what else you have to offer us from this character, instead of wasting like 2-3 updates trying to prove aryan is akash or not.

OMG what a jackpot for me Akash ko impotent bana dala, dil jingala lol 🤣, OMG how did u come up with something so ooosome like this, u know I hated him for shootimng my prince, but this things has cooled me down a bit lol 😆

Again loved how Manyata showed her presence of mind and tricked Akash in his own trap by lying that she saw the tape, I'm liking Manyata equally as UV now 😃, and the tapad, was so pending, bass aab UV ke hath se dhoobi pachad bhi karwa do , sari murad puri ho jayegi lol 😆

Ok now seriously what is M planning to SHOW akash, my mind is already swimming in the gutter here lol 😆

Thanks fro the PM navi and do update soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshab

hee finally update update !
Wow! Starting
Akash killed it ...ye bhoothnaath laut kar kyun aaya ?? It was better with his dead new

Koi nahi now UV dnt have to live in guilt about killing this spineless guy :P

Annieversary :D

Ahem ahem

Cont soon :)

I purposely started with the cute Manveer moments😳 , so that I could trick my readers into reading AN AKASH'ful CHAPTER😆.
Had to bring Akash back for Manyata to see the difference between the 2 guys😉!!!
☺️☺️☺️ ... 6 month anniversary,
with lots of DESERT😳😉😈.
🤗 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda.diva

desert sief mere sath ... lol

maanyata rocks ... :)

😆😆😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel

nice update..agar ye sanki budha pakash na hota to jyada acha hota

Thanks Ravneet 🤗 .
Don't worry about Akash, Manyata will take care of him 😈!!!

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