MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1)

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snowdream

@snowdream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#771

gr8 update navi..

enjoyed to bits...

sry dear for the late commenting i was updating last ni8 whn u updated ...

please update soon navi...

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#772

Originally posted by: san.gar
awesome lovely nice amazing romantic & hotness is out of the world... loved the part when m make him eat spinach cream it is really yuck , poor uday plez update soon nd thanx 4 pm...

Thanx Sanya 😳. I had to eat creme-of-spinach because I am anaemic and let me tell u ... "YUCKY" doesn't even come close to describing how it tastes🤢.

🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel
hot+nice update..nd happy diwali to u 2...

Thanks Ravneet ⭐️.

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#773

Originally posted by: psp.pari
read all the chapters i
its awesome

do continue soon

please pm me if possible

Thanx Dear 🤗 .

I shall add u to my PM list 😊.

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#774

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Navina..it was an awesome episode...👍🏼

Very nicely done..👏

loved it and enjoyed each part to the core...😛

Great job baby and thank you for keeping your promise...👏

Thank you Gargi ⭐️.

I have learnt that the most difficult thing in this world is : TO KEEP A PROMISE😆.

The chapter you're waiting for - IS COMING SOON😉.

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#775

Originally posted by: puggyy
Fabulous update 👏 👏 👏

Loved it to da core dear

Manveer was so cute

Baby planning is so cute😉

Uday tho too much ,even in that condition he did it😉

U showed each and every scene very nicely👍🏼

OUTSTANDING EFFORT!!👏

It's really a worth waiting for this update ...navi u rock dear

Thanx Anisha 😳. Glad u thought those scenes were cute. Uday can do it ... ANYTIME , ANY PLACE & IN ANY CONDITION . He is SUPER-MAN 😉☺️.

Thanx for the lovely words - it means a lot 😊 🤗 .

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huma

@huma12.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#776

love it niviii i read it last night but cant cmment becouse of network problem

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#777

Originally posted by: zinayrules

loved the update to the core!

kia jhakas update tha! i loved it so so much navina u rock👏

uday apni hi biwi k sath flirt krne ka koi moka hi nai chorta 😆 seriously i really enjoy this flirtious uday and his smirks i enjoy it when his smirking face comes in front of me! 😆

the love making was... O MY GOD! WOOF uday zakhmi halat ma bhi...it was so damn hot yar!

i thoroughly enjoyed every bit of this update...thank God u kept the evil out!

a full maveerilious update...i was totally lost in the manveer land! too good!

hahaha! poor girl uday ki wja say dr. uncle k samne sharminda ho gai...lol...

this was one of the best updates!! all fun and love types!😉 just perfect! 😃😃

update soon!

waiting for ur next update eagerly!

love ya sweety! 😊

Thank u Zainab⭐️ . I feel extremely elated and proud when I read your comments. I appreciate every single word. Now my problem is 😲 : WILL I BE ABLE TO TOP THIS CHAPTER??? 😕

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#778

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
WOW SORRY FOR LATE REPLY...
MY XAMS WERE ON...
AWESUM AWESUM...
LUVED IT NO WORDS...

No problem Mahi ,

I understand that it was exam time.

BTW - u were not late!

Thanx for the compliment 🤗 .

Originally posted by: huma12.
love it niviii i read it last night but cant cmment becouse of network problem

Thanx Dear 😳 ... Don't worry - THERE'S NO NEED TO EXPLAIN!!!

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#779

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx
[ SIZE=4]Navi di this ws awesome 👏 👏
Loved it to d core ❤️
i never expected dat uday would make love in such a situation and dat too in a bathroom😉 uday is such a flirt apni biwi se hi flirt
awee he is designing a room fr d baby i really liked dat scene
karva chauth ka vrat dono ne rkha well dis sounds romantic
the nurse and the patient 😛
Happy diwali to u too bt ye ap diwali pe kehne vo bhi update k saath i noe i sound mean bt hum toh aise hai bhaiya 😉 [/SIZE]

Thanx Sana 🤗 . Glad u loved it. Any normal person won't be able to make love after going through such an ordeal ... BUT THIS IS UDAY!!!!😳 ( he can do anything & everything ☺️) . At least he is flirting with his own wife - & NOT THE NEIGHBOURS WIFE😆. Uday is preparing for his daughter's arrival . Since it is Karva Chauth season - I THOUGHT I SHOULD INCLUDE IT IN THE UPDATE 😉. Actually it should be : THE POOR NURSE & HER DEMANDING PATIENT .

I know the greeting was lame ... BUT MAIN TOH AISI HI HOON BHAIYYA!!! 😎