MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1)

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NAVINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#781

Originally posted by: chitra_rao
OMG Amazing update Navi 👏👏, loved it. Manyata as the nurse and Uday as the naughty patient, and as u said the chapter was too much hotter and manveerlicious .

What if - we have a baby boy ... THEN WHAT? Then we are returning it. Arre, aise kaise?

gosh this line cracked me 😆, so it means Manveer r gonna have a cute baby princess😳.

And will be waiting impatiently for the name 😳😳, And the Manveer spinach cream scene was just so cute, loved it😛

Thanks fro the pm navi, and yes teh entire GAJAR was tasty and sweet 😉

Thanx Chitra 🤗 . Uday as the naughty patient - IS AN UNDER-STATEMENT!!! 😉

So glad u found that line hillarious ... I had to add in a bit of humour .

Yes - they will have a baby girl ... BUT - it will take a while . ( SHE WILL ONLY MAKE HER ENTRY IN THE NEXT BOOK😃). I am also waiting impatiently for the name 😲 - I HAVEN'T THOUGHT OF AN APPROPRIATE NAME YET. Whilst writing that Manveer/Spinach scene , I couldn't stop smiling ... I'm so happy that u felt it was cute.

Welcome for the PM😊.

The GAJAR KA HALWA will be even better ☺️ ... coming in 2 chapters time 😉!!!

( I KNOW I'M SOUNDING CONCEITED ... MAAF KARNA😆)

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#782

Originally posted by: snowdream
gr8 update navi..
enjoyed to bits...

sry dear for the late commenting i was updating last ni8 whn u updated ...

please update soon navi...

Thanks Krishna⭐️.

Awww - so sweet of u 😳.

There's no need for apologies - I UNDERSTAND COMPLETELY!

I'll update this weekend😊.

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NAVINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#783

Originally posted by: swetsurati
awsomeee...fantastic superb gr8 update navi dear...
awww...kissi wala scene is soo...cuteee...hawww...bathroom me bhi romance...ufff...ye uday bhi naaa but that was hot...hot hot...i m loving it parapara...aur bichare dr.uncle ko bhi pata chal gaya lolzzz...awww...uday ne manyata ke liye karwa chauth ka vrat rahaa...how sweet...
Princess - your place is not at my feet. It's here (he indicated his heart). Your place is CLOSE TO MY HEART. Both hugged.
aur itna chutku sa update next timelamba update karna and thanx forPM.

Thanx Sweta ⭐️ ... seems like you mentioned every scene😲 - I'm glad u enjoyed it. "CHUTKU SA UPDATE" 😕 - Arre mujhe toh 3 ghante laggai, is update ko post karne mei.

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Kavya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#784

Hi Navina di. How are u ? u still remember me na? I dont come to da forum [ u know y] but i still read this ff on me fone. LOve it lots n lots. U told it will end in Decmber. It will end with baby , right? I cannot wait😳.

Happy Dewali to u. I wish dewali was everyday, then I will be at my cousins house and she will let me use her lappy to come to da forum😆 n give my comments.

I send u Pm ; u didnt answer😭.

Update da next piece soon.

Keep up da very good work😃👏

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NAVINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#785

Originally posted by: MsLuscious
The update was fabulous navina... i really loved manyata as nurse and uday as her patient...

Her love for uday is increasing day by day. The scenes

between manveer were written beautifully this update was

manveerlicious. Uday managed to flirt even in that

condition. Loved it to the core navina great work.

Thanx Sarah 🤗 . I figured that after 2 very dramatic chapters , I should leave this 1 with just the 2 of them ☺️. I knew no-one would mind if I give the villain a break 😈. So glad u enjoyed the update .

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#786

Originally posted by: pia.raha
it was soo soo rmnticcc!!!!!!! lovedd uday ringing dat bell and asking for kiss,thenn nursewala episdee!!!!!!! bathrroom part wass veryy veryy passionatee,doctorr part wa shilarious,manyata was soo blushiongg!!!!!!!! loved itt!!!!!!!!!!😊

☺️ ☺️ ☺️ !!! Uday became a bit too naughty there😉!!! Then , his fantasy was out of this world !!!! Bathroom scene becam too HOT ... tht's when his stitches split😆!!!! Doctor Uncle embarassed our "love-birds" - STUPID MAN 😡 ... ( but I'm happy that u found it hillarious)!!!!

Thank you Pia ... for your lovely comment 🤗 .

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#787

Originally posted by: sweetshab
awesome update

Loved it
Nursey wifey
And stubborn patient:P
Hayy i love manveer <3

Cont soon :)

Thanks Shab ⭐️ . I decided to give them time with each other 😳 ... just in case ; THE VILLAIN STRIKES AGAIN 😡.

I know the feeling ... I LOVE THEM TOO ❤️.

I'll update this weekend 😊.

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Rohitha

@...Rohitha...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#788

superb update navina

tht was awesome 🤗

uday was flirting with his own wife 😆

wow uday getting a room ready for his

chotu princess wow tht was cute

all in all loved evry part frm d core

update soon

thnxs for d pm 😊

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#789

Originally posted by: mrs.K
Hi Navina di. How are u ? u still remember me na? I dont come to da forum [ u know y] but i still read this ff on me fone. LOve it lots n lots. U told it will end in Decmber. It will end with baby , right? I cannot wait😳.
Happy Dewali to u. I wish dewali was everyday, then I will be at my cousins house and she will let me use her lappy to come to da forum😆 n give my comments.

I send u Pm ; u didnt answer😭.

Update da next piece soon.

Keep up da very good work😃👏

Hi Kavi,

of-course I still remember you😃. So ; your mom still hasn't given u permission to come onto the forum. Don't worry , 1 day she will give in to u!!! Yes Dear - the SS will end soon😲 ... but - it will not end with the baby😕. I will continue this SS in another book - THE BABY GIRL WILL MAKE HER ENTRY THERE .

Happy Diwali to U too.

Sorry about not replying to your PM ... I was having trouble with the network yesterday 😡. I couldn't access or reply to my messages😔.

Thanx for commenting Kavi 🤗 .

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira
hey hi navina...😳

wow,,,,what an amazing nd awesum update ,,,,,,yaar...

totally manveerlicious...😳

i just loved this update,,,,,frm the beg till the end,,,it was bang on...😳

loved the romance b/w manveer,,,nd the make out session was beautiful

even in tht condiion,,,uday couldnot resist his princess charms...

amazing👏

plz update next part soon dear😃

Hi Nira⭐️ . Thank you

. I did promise that the update will only center around them.

Glad u loved it and found it romantic☺️. DO U REALLY THINK THAT IT WAS UDAY , WHO COULD NOT RESIST HIS PRINCESS'S CHARMS??? I thought it was Manyata who could not refuse Uday in the bathroom😉!!!

Next update is on Saturday!

Thanks for the lovely comments 🤗 .

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