MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1)

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SaHillover101

@SaHillover101

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Awesome update:D Plzzz do continue soon n thanks for the pm!!:)

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puggyy

@puggyy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

fabulous...too good ...loved it...waiting for ur next update...pls lengthy one this time...donno about uday's birthday celebration...i doubt if manyatha will b able to get up da next day morning ...its gonna b horrible for her pain n stuff. i guess ...donno how she manages in da party ...poor manyatha... ur ff is tooo good...fabulous...pls continue

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puggyy

@puggyy

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

mindblowing...that was good...finally manveer became one...nice update...though it was short u covered up many things... pls from now no more misunderstandings...thanks.for da pm...nice update

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@.maleficent.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#174

it was fabulose and so ramantic

this is really a very good part of ff

and i loved it

plzz update soon

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Andrea Marie Villegas Baid

@diorslik

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Wow too good I loved it but hate you for making it short lol you got some hot update out their though

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@-SilverAngel-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

It was nicely done Navina!... and thank you for the awesome birthday wishes and for dedicating this chapter to me... that was so sweet of you yaar...

Some of Manyata's bold avatar like her saying 'khol ke dekho... shayad pasand aaye' surprised me... but then I thought abhi bold nahi hogi toh kab hogi?... so I'll say it was a fab update!

Plzz do continue soon !... Next should be Uday's b'day party right?.. Well whatever you've thought of...write it down soon.. cause I wanna read more n more!

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757315

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#177

sorry for the late comment

K now coming back to the update it was awesome

i loved the bold manyata

the small conversations in between gave it a more real real feeling

i loved the part when uday thought he was dreaming that was funny 🤣

the hot scene was kept in the boundaries but was not much nor was it to less it was perfect and complimented your story very well👍🏼

the whole thing on the overall was beautiful and i loved it

thanks for including me in the patient waiters list😆

please update soon u did a great job in this i know that writing hot scenes is very difficult but u really did a fab job😃

please update ASAP and thanks for the pm navi🤗

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Awesome

beautifully written

loved de confession

Manyata gifting Uday her virginity

tat whole concept was nyc

thanks for de PM

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

To,

MAHI1198 Chamakchallo30 Archi02 sweetshab AKlover101... pmpm1

Thank u 4 commenting & thanx 4 the compliments!

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: pia.raha
loved manyata's attitude,she didnt even wait for his answer!!!!!!!! then their moment was soo magical and romntic!!!!!!! uday like m in open hair,dat wass oo rmntic!!!!!!!!! out of dis wrld update!!!!!!!!

Yeah, our Manyata is 1 of a kind...Once she has set her mind on something; then nobody (not even Uday ) can stop her.

I had to make their 1st time special...glad u thought it was romantic.

Uday complimented M in the 2 DEC episode about her hair, that's where I got the idea from.

THANX 4 THE COMMENT & COMPLIMENT!