MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 120

Originally posted by: DEK_girl

uday's yaddash will not be gone??ohh srry..i just assumed..becoz if that doesnt happen then uday will return to our dear manyata as uday! nd wer will major veer mallik come frm then??ohh i m puzzled now...

If u try to figure out my story ... you'll only get a head-ache😆.

Originally posted by: andy.a

i learnt it from some one named navina
you may know her
her stories are so awsome and super
try reading her stories
why r you waiting for monday? to update na

Originally posted by: ...navina...

<font size="3">H<font color="#0000ff">mmm ... NAVINA ... her name sounds familiar😆!</font></font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">Ooo ... so many compliments😳 ... </font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3"> .. are u buttering me for something😕???</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">Monday is my book-launch.</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">It is called : JOAW 2 ... REDISCOVERING LOVE !!!</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3">(IF U THINK OF A BETTER NAME ... do let me know😛)</font>

Originally posted by: Futbol_queen

OMYGOSHOMYGOSHOMYGOSH THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL NAVINA! YOU ALMOST MADE ME CRY 😭😭😭😭 I CANT BELIEVE YOU ENDED IT! AND IM SO SORRY FOR REPLYING SO LATE!

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

have I ever told you how much I love your chapter titles, they are so very apt to the chapter 😊

And both the chapters were amazing 👏👏. You are one beautiful writer Navi👏👏, u put life in ur words. every scene written out there was like a slide show playing in front of my eyes, Manyata compliaing that she has almost forgotten how he smells, and soon she will forget how he looks, OMG that was so heart pricking 😕.

I have to give it to you for creating such a wonderful character like Manyata, I mean in ur ff, she has evolved so beautifully from a immature chrysalis to a beautiful butterfly. she has to the T proved that she is Mrs Udayveer singh 👏👏. The way she blasted the Maharaj and Yudhveer singh for breaking the rishta, and the much deserved coldness with which she treated Akash's mom was so outstanding 👏👏.

Navi in this update you have also merged some wonderful flashbacks of our favorite show , the valentine's day gift was mentioned, murari was mentioned which even the CVS had forgotten.I mean this chapter was really like tying all the loose ends, so apt to the chapter😊.I liked how she went through the wedding album cursing her stupidity for ruining their best day in life, the childhood photo album was fabulous, and the flashback scene of his kiss was even more heart warming 😳😳.

The CD scene just made mt heart sink in my chest, It was so well written, so M has tried committing suicide , I so want the baby to step in so that she atleast has a reason to live from here on.

I read ur index navi, u r introducing a look-alike of UV, I dont know what u have in-stores like that look-alike being UV loosing his memory and M all going out there to patao him and get his memory back. I mean it would be so much of a role reversal right before it was UV dying for M's love and attention and now it will be M lol😆, but I cannot take even a look-alike to be in the place of UV if it is not UV. After creating a gem of a character like UV-Manayata I cannot see a look-alike in place of UV.But whatever way u r taking the story, I'm on for it 😊.

Navi u must have already heard about DEK closing , please either start ur second book in the fan fiction forum or start it here and talk to the mods and move the thread to the fan-fiction forum, but please dont stop writing navi. I so want to see the second book unfold . thank u for giving us such a wonderful book 1, waiting for the journey to continue in book 2 😊

Awww ... Chitra ... u are making me shed tears of happiness. Thank u so much for those sweet compliments.

That CD scene took me forever to write. After every sentence , I'd start crying. It was really emotional for me to write the "final wishes" of a character I adore. Yes ... the baby girl will be coming soon😉.

I hope u don't be dissappointed with MY SEQUEL. I will give away this much ... MANYATA & UDAY will live HAPPILY EVER AFTER WITH THEIR 3 KIDS😉!!!

Finally ... I AM EXTREMELY SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY ... the reason is : I was so depressed hearing the news about our forums closure , that I had taken a decision NOT TO CONTINUE WITH BOOK 2. Then ; I had NO IDEA - how to give u this news. Anyway ... now ; the plan for the new book is back on schedule😆.

Originally posted by: pia.raha

sorry for being latee!!!!!!! oh my god udayy ka accidentt!!!!!!😭 bt udayy humara heroo use to waps aana hi hogaa!!!!!! manyata will bring him backk defnntelyy!!!!!!!!! achha hua manyata ne akash ko mar diyaa,good job!!!!!!!!!!!😊😊

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Pia .. I missed u Dear.

Hey , Manyata will NOT bring him back ... I WILL😃.

Thanks a lot 🤗 .