Battle of love & Power- New FF Part 2(pg 4) 08/10

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Nisha

@nisha1984

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: mahi0809
Its nicely done!... Fabulous work... update more soon! and plzz show Manyata as jungli billi but since she is educated too show that in her personality as well. She has been given lessons like royals at least make her say 'tum' instead of tu. Tu is just disrespectful.

Thanks

and will manyata behave? That is a big question right now. She will come to Rajmahal but she is not only taught to be a royal princess she knows how to be a warrior as well so my ff is different in term of her personality. Everything will be revealed as time passes...

Her life will be revealed which is different than the actual serial character

I hope you all will like it...

let's see when story progresses...

I will update soon

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Zainab

@--Zenu--

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Hey Nisha! Basically I Was I Silent Reader! Or Should I Say I Did'nt Get Time To Praise Ur Piece Beautiful Peice Of Wrk! I Love Ur FF! The Spark In ManVeer Is Similar To DEK ! Pls PM Me Wen U Update & Update Sooon

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sweet.tashi

@sweet.tashi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

wow what a beautiful Update..luved it..manveer nok jokh is d best.. do continue

Soon n pm me

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Nisha

@nisha1984

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007
Hey Nisha! Basically I Was I Silent Reader! Or Should I Say I Did'nt Get Time To Praise Ur Piece Beautiful Peice Of Wrk! I Love Ur FF! The Spark In ManVeer Is Similar To DEK ! Pls PM Me Wen U Update & Update Sooon

Thanks

I will try to update soon

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Nisha

@nisha1984

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: mahi0809
plzzz update soon!

I will try to update by tomorrow and if not wednesday there will be a update for sure

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sweet.tashi

@sweet.tashi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

plz update soon...it have been a month till now!!

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

plzz updatee soonn...am waitngg!!!!!!!!!😊

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Radhkibs

@radhkins

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

nice flow of story but isn't it too short? please write little long next time.😊

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Sonam

@-RK_Ki_Biwi-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

I jus read both the updates together.😛 Fantastic, superb, amazing, mindblowing updates.👏 👏 👏 I love UV n Manyata's First n second meeting..😉 J-Manyata's first meeting was hillarious, Poor J.😆

UV-Manyata's club scene was so passionate.

Precap sounds so exciting.😛

Thanks for the wonderful update.😊

Do update ASAP.😊

Great work.👍🏼

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