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@Lovelydrops

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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

RES Edited...

Great work Shabs👏👏

Firstly i love this song...do tell which movie it is from..

coming to the update...

I liked the Manveer cute fights like always...UV's dialogue

"kya yeh special taunt wala swagat sirf humare liye hota hai.ya
bakiyon ka swagat bhi isi prakar hota hai"asked UV sitting accros
manyata"...

This was so funny😆...

m not idle like many ppl around"she looked at him with small
smirk. He thought only boys would smirk often, but this girl brings
shame to even male species.

The smirk to the male species actually cracked me up...I never thought about such a line🤣

I enjoyed the part where UV carries her in his arms and she tries protesting😆

This Rudra is fishy, i think he wants revenge from royals...i don't like him..or rather hate him..But ya the description that u gave made me think for once that u were describing Uday😳..BUt then i was shocked to know there was a competition😲

Loved the last part where UV tries to feel her pain, and takes it as a challenge to know Manyata😛

Edited by sweet_gargi - 12 years ago

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#433

awww that was so damn awesome...
I loved it to core..
first of all a very big sorry Cuz I couldn't comment properly on last update...
I really feel bad fr manyata at times...
she's so hurt...
I just hope Uday brings her out of that depressed cell...
agreed Uday u do have ego problems
and now that u have realised that I hope u will understand manyata more...
aww this rudr is quite a nice guy...
manyatas very good frnd I guess...
that's why she trusts him...
poor Uday hehehehe
jor ka thappad khaya...
I wonder how isn't Uday angry...
and vijay jay part was the best...
perfect supportive siblings...
update sooon
plzzz
and thanks fr pm..
do pm me next update...

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#434

heyyy,it was awesomee,the way manyata got jelaous of meghna and the bickering is alwyas soo cuteee!!!!!! wats manyata's fear,hmm dis rudr,who is dis now,hmm will be waitng for ur nxt update!!!!!😊😊

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#435

Awesome, superb!

Love manveer and love the update!

I think this new entry is a trouble.

Do continue soon and thanks for the pm!

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#436

Awsome update

Urghh..I dnt like that new guy rudra

Uodate soon

Thanx for pM.

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#437

edited my comment on pg 63😊..thanks for the PM

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sonia

@sirjee

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#438

I just read chappy 8...n here goes my comments 4 dat...

it was so so so beautiful update!!!

i am speechless still...how u managesuch words...u r awsum wud ur writing...it was splendid mindblowing awsum grand royal pleasing stunning romantic wonderful n wat not...i guess i m running out of words darling...itna mast likhti hai tu...

m glad to get ziddi manyata back.

aur uday! haye me marjawa, he is the bestest guy ever!!!!

I m lubing dem...but obviously my uday is de bestest...noone can beat him...ll repky 4 others also in few hrs...

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sonia

@sirjee

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#439

Dis one is 4 chappy 9...rest i ll read sum other day n comment...

I luved da jay VJ n unnzie combo...i miss dem...n dere one lines...sply tom n jerry fights..n i knew u ll select dis song only...luved da cuddle but yy dis thunder always ends such beautiful scenes...

Manyata in a white manish malhotra saree vo bhi uday ki gift ki huyi 3 glasses of wine thoda aur pitati...da update was beautiful amazing mindblowing splendid fab romantic wondeful out of dus world...made me speech less

Lay abb main free hogai...fr next many yrs dont get upset 4m me...ke padhti nahi hai comment nahi karti abb kar dia na...lubbb u janu...

Edited by sirjee - 12 years ago