FF:- Taqdeerein (Updt:- 13/Pg 74) - Page 41

guysss !
Edit all the RES!
If u want an early update

awesome loved it loads!!!!!! plzzz update soon... and do pm me... sorry fr small cument m using cell.. once I get my laptop I'll definitely give huge comments...

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">well res!! will edit tomorow
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">edited!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">i am the first to cumnt! yippee!!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">shabs, once again u made me speechless!
u r too awesome writer!
cant beleive u wrote so nicely in ur talli condition!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">or ye talli hone ka fayda hain?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">lolz! talliness side pe!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">super duper awesome blossom update!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">loved the ManVeer scenes!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">well Manveer were much fierce in the study.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">manyata ne to ainvy chapwa di wo news! it had no valid reason!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">well shabs, the flashback of vasundhara made me cry!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">nah this is not just for the sake of saying, but its true! manveer swear!
jo kuch bhi hua, accha nahi hua!
and the second flashback, well what uday did was right!
u know, i dont think theres udays fault anywhere! </font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">i think manyata just over reacted a bit when uday came back after ayan's death</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">i really feel sad for giriraj</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">uday takes up things always!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">manyata always is her grumpy self! she doesn't accept only what her heart says! thats bad!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">well loved the way how uday convinced manyata for the press!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">and the last nok jhok!
it was utterly superbly awesome!
luv the way the fight!
thats what keeps ManVeer going!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">yeah, the update ended just too early!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">m so eager to know what happens ahead!
and i know, ur record making attitude isnt going to allow u to post the next update early and thats the worst part!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">u hv to update fast!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">luvd this update!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">update asap!
hugz! </font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff6600">thanx for such a lovely update!</font>

Thnk u dearie m sooo glad u liked it
Awww my lovely readers made me a gud writer
U knw na best things m talli 365 days
Awww srry for dat . i'll try to not bring da sad part again
Manveer will get fierce,lovely ,shaitan, childish nd romantic
Der was neither manyata fault, UV still dsnt knw wat she went through
Manyata didnt over reacted, she acted in the way she shud hav..she lost her brother coz of her blind trust,almost lost her father.
U cant expect her to b normal

Will try updating soon
All the RES gave me a yawnning

Originally posted by: sweetshab

guysss !
Edit all the RES!
If u want an early update

navina di jaisi dhamkiyaan di jaa rhi hain!!!!

@gabbar: dhamkiyan se bhi fark nahi padhh raha ..i HATE RES! :@

Originally posted by: ...navina...

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Shab , that was a flaw-less update! Simply out-standing!!!!!!

I loved every bit of it . Every dialogue was superbly written. We are starting to get some answers now as to what seperated Manveer. Hope their misunderstandings are resolved soon ... it's gone on for too long already. The flash-back sequence with Uday's mom was heart-breaking😭 . In fact whenever I read your updates , I end up crying for some reason😭😕. But the end was lovely , I smiled as I read Uday & Manyata's fabulous 1-liners😃. That was wonderful ... hope to read more banter like that VERY SOON😉!!!!

Lastly ... why did the chapter have to end so fast😡? I wanted it to go on & on & on & on 😆!!!!

Loved the update Shab ❤️,

thanks for the PM😊.

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Awww thank u navi :)
Yupp their MU took a long tym ..the problem is they both trust/love/adore each other unconditionally to question one other..in this ,they accepted watever their mind spoke!
Aww m really srry for msking u guys cry..but dats all my story goes by ..sads are coming to an end already :)
ManVeer wull be at the best with banter nd bickerings ;)

Was it short?? :O
Hayy it cant go on on ndd on ..i already see ppl bored with this FF :P

Thanks again sweetheart for the lovely n encouraging comment :)

Originally posted by: anjuroopak

fantastic update.loved it.

so uday is determined to
win back his princess once
again.

loved uday vasudara bonding.

all in all chapter was awsome
blossom.

continue soon.eagerly waiting
for next update.

Thankss dear
Glad u liked it
Ofcourse UV is determined to win back his smiling LIFE :)
Will update soon

Originally posted by: huma12.

awsssmmm shabsss

Thnks huma :)