MANVEER OS: TRAPPED...

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Hi all, this is my 1st attempt at writing anything . Please dont expect a masterpiece ... Manyata was awoken by a door closing . Though it was done rather quietly, it still disturbed her. She rubbed her eyes and looked around for her cell . On finding it,she checks the time. It was 07:34. Well,she wasnt surprised...he was right on schedule. Her husband always left their room at 07:30, had breakfast, and left for work. Though he only starts work at 9,he leaves the Devgarh Mansion early so that he doesnt get caught in the thick Mumbai traffic. Yes, her husband is a ghar jamai...

She looked at the couch on the other end of the bedroom, that is where he sleeps. She was annoyed when she saw a drenched towel kept on it. HE IS SUCH A PIG ,she thought to herself. Anyways she decided; it'll be 8 0lock soon...I SHOULD TAKE A SHOWER. She showered quickly, dried herself roughly, wrapped her bathrobe around her, came back into her room, opened her wardrobe and stood in front of the mirror .
She dropped the bathrobe and stood naked in front of the mirror. She looked at her reflection...there was 1 lovebite on the left side of her neck, 2 on her left shoulder, 1 on the right side of her neck,1 just peeking out from behind her right ear, 1 on her left breast and lastly 1 on the upper of her right thigh. She took out her make-up kit and began the concealing process. She didnt bother about those on her body but the ones on her neck and shoulders and of course the 1 behind her ear had to be covered up.
She laughed to herself thinking about last nite when her husband asked WHAT IS THAT MARK ON YOUR NECK ..She told him that she went out to the building site of their new hotel and there were a lot of mosquitos, so the mark was probably a bite. He believed her...HE IS SUCH AN IDIOT, she thought.
On cue, 8 oclock her cell rings...she puts it on speaker...she knew who it was...HI JAAN, she answers. HI PRINCESS , was the reply... WHAT U DOING he continues... WELL I AM TRYING TO COVER UP YOUR HANDIWORK she announces. He immediately understood and started to apologise when Manyata cut in saying I DONT WANT YOUR APOLOGY...NEXT TIME KEEP IT BELOW THE NECK!!!! They laughed and continued talking about their secret meetings...or rather their sexual encounters... Manyata quickly ended the call as she noticed someone outside her door. Covering herself with the robe, she opened the door.
There stood her husband Akash with tears in his eyes. She raised her eyebrows at him as if asking Y IS HE STILL HERE . He slowly asked HOW LONG HAS YOUR AFFAIR WITH UDAY BEEN GOING ON... She proudly answered TODAY IS OUR 1 MONTH MARRIAGE ANNIVERSARY AKASH, TOMORROW WILL BE 1 MONTH FOR UDAY AND MY AFFAIR... He was stunned, the onlything he could muster was ; SO UDAY IS THE REASON FOR US NOT CONSUMATING OUR MARRIAGE. Manyata didn't feel the need to respond, she just rolled her eyes at him.
I AM GOING TO TELL RAJMATA WHAT YOU'VE BEEN UP TO... She grabbed his hand and pulled him into room. She needed to set him straight. She began...AKASH, DADISAAB HATES U , SHE GOT US MARRIED BECAUSE IT WAS MY ZIDD.IT WAS ONLY AFTER OUR WEDDING THAT I REALISED THAT I LOVE UDAY.NOW DON'T YOU THREATEN ME ABOUT TELLING DADISAAB, I AM SURE SHE WOULD SIDE WITH ME, AFTERALL SHE LOVES UDAY AS IF HE WERE HER OWN CHILD .
Finally as if to knock in the last nail into the coffin, Manyata stated: DADISAAB WOULDNT MIND MY AFFAIR WITH UDAY ESPECIALLY IF IT WOULD LEAD TO A TRUE BLUE BLOODED HEIR...
Akash suddenly felt like he stood in the centre of a tornado with no way out. He was a fly caught unknowingly in the Rajwada web...
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-RK_Ki_Biwi- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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NO, NO ,NO YAAR.😳 IT WAS A MASTERBLASTER PIECE.👏 👏 👏
FANTASTIC OS DEAR.😊 JUST MINDBLOWING.😉
THIS WAS THE BEST-BEST OS I EVER SEEN.😆
WHY I LIKE THIS OS SO MUCH, HERE IS THE POINTS:-
1. AKASH IS A GHAR JAMAI.🤣
2. NO HUSBAND-WIFE RELATION BETWEEN MANYATA & AKASH.👍🏼
3. MANYATA & UV DOING AHEM-AHEM FROM LAST ONE MONTH WITHOUT MARRIAGE.☺️ ☺️
4. LAST WHEN AKASH HEARD COOCHIE-WOCCHIE TALKS OF UV-M & HIS EYES FILLED WITH BALTI BHAR TEARS.😭 😭 😭 😭 🥺
5. MANYATA GIVES HIM A ZABARDAST JHATKA IN LAST LINES.
6- DS ALSO HATES AKASH.🤢
7. AKASH WANTED TO COMPLAINTABOUT MANYATA'S CHAKKAR WITH UV TO DS BUT POOR AKASH BABY...🤣
OMG, I'M SO EVIL.😈 😈
I'M GIVING YOU 20/10 FOR THIS OS.👏
GREAT JOB.👍🏼

Edited by sonam2801 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow.. it was GOOD!.. Akash as a fly caught in the Rajwada's web. Ooh now that's something and Akash as a ghar jamai lolll.

and OMG M concealing Uday's love bites?☺️.. that is enough to get any reader's imaginations working overtime.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mind blowing update and os plz do soon and add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful is the only word i can think of at this point of time i loved this update it truly rocked and it was a masterpiece and manveer doing ahem ahem after manyata being married to akash was bangon loved the update please write more stories i really liked your writing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was awesome...really u r so evil haan!
akash her husband...and she is having affair with uday..and i laughed alot on this line

She proudly answered TODAY IS OUR 1 MONTH MARRIAGE ANNIVERSARY AKASH, TOMORROW WILL BE 1 MONTH FOR UDAY AND MY AFFAIR...
omg...that was sooo gud!!!hayyeee akash ky sath aisa hi hona caihye!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fabulous OS!! I loved it:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it !!! akash deserves this .
do cont if u can

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Haye kya OS tha. Full too evil😈 Akash ghar jamai🤢 I wonder how J will tolerate him LOL😆 Great OS bilkul hum forumvasiyon ki tarah evil😈 about Akash😈 hahahahahahahahahaha ab bas ek aur part likh do and that shud be UV-M ka affair ka next stage... SHAADI😳 And Akash khud hee apne app ko cliff se gira de🤣 Good one👍🏼 Ekdum jhakas😎
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hahahahaaha 🤣
mindblowing, fantastic, fantabulous work..
wanna read more 😉

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