~Hold Me Close~ a manveer OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: alissa345

Lol thanks mummy 😃 I am so happy you liked it 😳 Hahaha yes Lissa is their daughter, so u recognized Lissa haan mummy? 😉
Lol yup now he is my UV daddy 😆 I put Teddy in it too, so that you could recognize me 😆
Thank you so much anam mummy for reading my OS 😃

finaly finaly u write it thanks 😈 ok nw cm on os it was awesome aalu 👏 it was jst pure romance nd rain kiss i cn imagine manveer 😳 nd manyata told abt her pregnency tht cute!!! I love it"i luv u nd even god cnt deny it" awww i like lissa nd her teddy btw ye lissa alissa se inspire hai na cz ths lissa name remind me Alissa nd teddy remind me Mr.Doodless hahahaha ya bt inshort i like ths surprise. Dialouges u write of manveer those r awesome nd eye conversation is so passionate nd adorable ths is the main thng tht two people who in luv they dnt need word to talk their silence cn talk. Nw i cn say u cn write pure romance too love ya aalu loved it thnx for writing nd thnx fifu fr lovely titel. See Alissa ths why i love rain.

chooo cute update..lissa was cute..i can imagine lissa..nd UV M scene was rocking..

Originally posted by: Havvii

finaly finaly u write it thanks 😈 ok nw cm on os it was awesome aalu 👏 it was jst pure romance nd rain kiss i cn imagine manveer 😳 nd manyata told abt her pregnency tht cute!!! I love it"i luv u nd even god cnt deny it" awww i like lissa nd her teddy btw ye lissa alissa se inspire hai na cz ths lissa name remind me Alissa nd teddy remind me Mr.Doodless hahahaha ya bt inshort i like ths surprise. Dialouges u write of manveer those r awesome nd eye conversation is so passionate nd adorable ths is the main thng tht two people who in luv they dnt need word to talk their silence cn talk. Nw i cn say u cn write pure romance too love ya aalu loved it thnx for writing nd thnx fifu fr lovely titel. See Alissa ths why i love rain.

soumy 🤗

Originally posted by: alissa345

Lol hi basanti 😆
What was all that ahem ahem about? 😆
Pm me quick Lol...I wanna know what's cooking in your head basanti 😉
Really? U thought it was hot? 😳 I thought it came out to be cute 😆
Soumy wanted it all romance but this became cute 😆
Lol so u recognized Lissa 😉 Lmaooo so creative of me rite? 😛 And the teddy was there too 😆
Thank you so much baby for reading it 😃
So happy you liked it...love you basanti 😛

gud one and i understood tis time😆

Originally posted by: alissa345

soumy 🤗

yay I AM SOOO HAPPY u liked it 🥳

i was kinda worried cuz it came out to be cute and not romantic😆

yup Lissa is inspired bu Alissa 😎thats why she is a cool baby 😉🤣

LOL yup i put teddy there on purpose 😆

hhahahah man this slow romance took me a while to write😆but i guess it paid off since you liked it 😃...hahhahah yeah i got it now why you love rain so much😆but dry romance is not that bad either 😉🤣thank you so much soumy...i am soo happy you liked it 😃

lissa part was cute nd manveer part was romantic nd kiss kya kahna...awesome. Nope tht dry romance u hinting tht is neva cn romantic its good only in room wet romace is dreamy. Jst love nd passion nt any... u knw what i wanna say. I told u a simple hug or kiss cn be magical for me if its touch my heart thts why i loved it. Love ya for writing i knw its hard fr u gutter queen 🤣🤣

very cute hoping for nice ending for Manveer in show too! thanks for pm!