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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshab

hey anam

Nice update

I hate dis chipkoo n self centered amrit..u need to fix her up soon*winkkii*

Cont soon

Thanks a lot Shab😃 I know but u guys have to tolerate her yet for a few more parts😆 I will do soon just writing the part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

really loved the updates keep it up!

Thanks a lot Shonali😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 58

The next day Sangeet arrangements were going on in Jaigar

Giriraj- yeh aap sab kya kar rehay hai jaldi seh dekhiye wahaan bhi phool lagayi (he's phone rang) Hello haan wahiye car park mein (he disconnected the phone)

Unnanti- Dad aap please chintha maat kijiye sab kuch ache seh hojaygha

Amrit- hum bhi yahin keh rehay teh Uncle Giri ko yeh lijiye aapka juice ab aap araam kijiyeh

Giriraj- Thank you Amrit beta…. Humhe patha hai hai aap sab ache seh arrangement dhek rehay lekin humhe bhi sab ache seh dheknah paregha... aaj kal keh naukaar apna kaam hi nahiye tike seh karteh.. akhir hamare eklauteh bte ka sangeet hai koi kami nahiye honi chahiye hai

Unnanti- you're right Dad lekin aap ko rest ki zaroorth hai aap aiyi hamare saat

Amrit- Uncle Giri aap jayee hum sab tayaaria dheklenghe

Giriraj- acha beta hum jathe hai

Unnati took Giriraj

Rajbir- Uday Bhai kya baat hai aap pareshaan lage rehay hai

Uday- haan thode pareshaan hai Princess neh aaj phir phone nahiye uthaya koi zaroori baat karni thi

Rajbir- Uday Bhai woh sab thodi dher mein athe hoghe aap chintha maat kijiye.. hum abhi J seh poochteh hai

In Devgar everyone was ready and waiting for Manyata, J, Shanaya to come down.

Manyata- J, Shanaya hum ache toh lag rehay hai

J- Jiji you look very beautiful

Shanaya- yeah gorgeous lagtha hai hamare honeh waleh Jiju faint hojayghe tumhe dhekar

J- yeah agreed (she laughed) Jiji chaleh

Krish came upstairs

Krish- MAMI!!!!!! MAMI!!!!!!!

J- What happened Krish?

Krish- Mamu is on the phone I was playing games on it here you Mami (J took the phone, Krish went and hugged Manyata) Bua you look very nice

Manyata- Thank you Bacha

Krish- Bua you know this morning Daddy was crying again (he laughed) it was so funny... I was like my Daddy who is so strict has become cry baby

Manyata- Bacha why was Bhai crying?

Krish- you're so silly Bua for you he's like my Manya Bacha is getting married and all (interrupted)

Jhanvi- Krishy come here

Krish- Mama I'm with Bua

Jhanvi- I know Bacha but we need to get going now... chaloh Manya we need to go yeh J kahaan hai

J- hum yahaan hai chaliyeh Bhabhi

Now we see everyone in the car

J- Jiji... Rajbir ka phone aiya tha Jiju sa wanted to talk to you but Raz Bro neh mera phone lehliya

Nishimah- Raz batha raha tha he was like hum wahiye ja rehay ab yeh sab phone peh he bathe karethe rehenghe aur aap logo patha haina Viraj Bhai ka ghussah he will be very angry agar if he find out you guys are talking on the phone we are already late

Jhanvi- haan waise bhi we are going there Rajbir aur Uday dono wahaan hai

Vijay- Bhabhi inne dono ka phone toh inkeh paas tha lucky I tell you hamara phone bhi Viraj Bhai neh lehliye Unnanti seh baat bhi nahiye ki hai

Manyata- Vijay Bhai chintha maat kijiye hum abhi Jaigar poacheneh waleh hai Unnanti Bhabhi bhi wahiye hoghi araam seh baat kijiyehgha

Vijay- kya araam seh baat karenghe Viraj Bhai, Raz Bhai hamare saat hoghe aur wahaan Jaigar jakeh hamare Sasurji bhi wahiye hai aur woh churail Amrit bhi

Nishimah- Vijay tum chintha maat karoh Raz aur Viraj Bhai ka dyaan Manya peh he hogha hum haina tum araam seh baat karnah

Jhanvi- yeah tumhe chintha karneh ki kya zaroorth nahiye hai tumhaari dono Bhabhiya hai yahaan

Vijay- Thank you Bhabhi you both are so sweet only if Bhai's were same as you guys life would be so easy

Manyata- Bhabhi you brought the pins right

Nishimah- haan I have them don't worry

Jhanvi- so do I hum sab saat mein liaye hai

Krish- Mama, Bua hum agaye look this kingdom is so massive

Manyata- yeah Krishy don't go anywhere ok

J- Jiji hum Krishy keh saat hai ok

Krish- yes Bua I will stay with Mami and everyone else don't worry... you and daddy are both so paranoid

Manyata- bacha it's so many people here that's why you're only little I don't want anything to happen to you

Krish- Bua nothing will happen to me ok now don't worry let's get out of the car

Unnanti was outside waiting to greet everyone so was Giriraj, Amrit and her parents

Rajbir- Unnanti sab agayeh finally hum abhi Uday Bhai ko batha keh athe hai

Rajbir left

Remisha- omg Manya is looking beautiful and J Bhabhi is

Unnanti- I know they look very pretty

Krish- Maasi!!!!!!

Remisha- Krishy mera bacha (she hugged him) I missed you so much

Krishy- Me to Maasi

Everyone threw rose petals on Manyata and all of Devgar family, now we see everyone in Jaigar.

Manyata was wearing

Uday was wearing

Unnanti- aiye Bhabhi sa... Dada kabseh aapka intezaar kar rehay teh

Manayta- Unnanti meri dress toh tike hai

Unnanti- Haan its fine

Manyata looked at Nishimah and Jhanvi

They nodded their head

Now we see Manveer on stage

Uday- Princess aaj humhe marneh ka iraadha hai kya aap bahuth beautiful lage rahiye hai

Manyata blushed

Manyata- hum hamesha ache lagteh hai ok... patha nahiye aaj kuch zydah hogaya hai I'm so paranoid

Uday- no Princess its fine this dress really suits you

Amrit came

Amrit- I have to agree with Uday ab dress itni beautiful hai you shouldn't be too worried Manyata.. hum aap dono keh liye juice liaye hai

Manyata- (rudely) humhe nahiye chahiye hai

Amrit- kyun Manyata hum itneh pyaar seh lekeh aiye hai

Uday- Amrit yeh aap waapis lejoa abhi hamara maan nahiye hai

Amrit- tike hai hum lejathe hai

Vijay, Unnanti and J and Rajbir were hosting the sangeet

Unnanti- Welcome to the sangeet of Yuvraj Udayveer and Yuvrani Manyata aap logo ka bahuth bahuth suhagat hai... we will be hosting the whole ceremony and we have loads of surprises too

Vijay- to start off with we have a performance by Jairaj meaning hamari choti behen Jainandani aur unkeh honeh walhe Pati Rajbir

Jairaj danced too

Mehndi Laga Ke Rakhna — DDLJ

Everyone clapped

Jairaj- Thank you everyone I'm glad you enjoyed our performance... now we will be hosting and Unnanti Bhabhi and Vijay Bhai will be doing a performance

Vijay and Unnanti danced too

Salaame e ishq

Everyone clapped

Vijay- Thank you everyone... ab humneh dance bhi karliye now Uday bana aur Manyata ki turn

Unnanti- yeah that's fair aiyi Dada aur Bhabhi sa

Manyata- Uday yeh dono paagal hogaye hum nahiye jaighe I'm already paranoid and this dumb lengha is so heavy

Uday- Princess kuch nahiye hogha stop being paranoid ab chalnah paregha

Unnanti- kya hua Bhabhi sa aiyi na Dada chaliyeh

Uday and Manyata got up

They danced utha lejoagha mein tujhe doli mein

Both Manveer were very happy and Amrit was burning in jealously.

Jairaj/Unnanti/Vijay- that was a great performance now you guys can go back to your seats.. next we have our baby Krishy who will be saying a few words

Krish got the mike

Krish- Ghama khani everyone my name is Krish Viraj Dobriyal Sharma I want to say Congratulations to my Bua and to Prince Udayveer I love you both very much (he went on stage game them both flowers and gifts and hugged them both and kissed there cheek)

Manveer hugged Krish and kissed his cheek

Manveer- we love you too bacha

Krish- Prince Udayveer I have one more thing to say if you ever upset my Bua, me, Spiderman, Batman and Robin and my Daddy, my three Mamu's will beat you up so keep that in mind

Everyone laughed Krish was giving threat to his Prince Udayveer

Uday- don't worry Bacha I won't ever hurt your Bua I love her too much

Krish- I know you do but I had to say it in case

He hugged him

Giriraj saw a parcel and was very upset it was Manyata infertility report.

Giriraj- Amrit beta yeh parcel kaun degaya tha

Amrit- patha nahiye Giri Uncle kisi naukar neh kaha koi post walah tha

Giriraj- ise mein toh Manyata ki reports hai hum abhi sabseh ise bareh mein baat karteh hai

Amrit- Uncle Giri hum baad mein akeleh mein Uday aur Manyata seh baat karlenghe aise sabkeh saamneh acha nahiye hogha aap yahaan tariyaan hum Manyata aur Uday ko lekeh athe hai yeh sach mein bahuth he buri khabar hai

Giriraj- nahiye hum sabkeh saamneh baat karenghe

Just then Manyata heard everything and came inside

Manyata- Uncle sabko meri haalat keh bareh mein patha hai isliye hum aur Uday London ghe teh aap please hamaari baat samjaneh ki koshish kijiyeh

Giriraj- hum bewaqoof nahiye hai hum aap jaise baje rajkumaari ko apneh ghar ki bahu kabhi nahiye banaghe hum abhi yeh shaadi thorteh hai abhi sabko batha keh athe hai

Uday came inside

Uday- Dad hum aapko samjathe hai

Giriraj- aap humhe kya samjayghe aap ko ho kya gaya hai Uday sab kuch janthe hue aap inseh shaadi karneh waleh teh

Uday- haan kyunki hum Manyata ko bahuth pyaar karteh hai (he explains about the treatment)

Giriraj still wasn't listening

Manyata- Uncle tike hai hamaari shaadi ho janeh dijiye agar 5 months keh baad humhe koi bacha nahiye hua toh hum khode Uday ki doosri shaadi karwadenghe aur isse mahal seh hamesha keh liye chaleh jaygheh aur hum yeh baat aapko paper peh bhi likhar desakteh hai aap contract bhi bana sakteh hai... ab sab tayaariyaan ho chuki hai dono parviroh ki bahuth bezaathi hoghi aur hum nahiye chahteh koi Devgar ya Jaigar par (interrupted)

Uday was angry

Uday- Princess what are you saying this is rubbish contract and all doosri shaadi never hum aapke ilawah kisi keh bareh mein nahiye soch sakteh hai...

Giriraj was in deep thought

Giriraj- Tike hai hum contract banwathe hai hum kisiseh kuch nahiye kahenghe yeh shaadi kal he hoghi... aapke paas sirf 5 months hai aur auseke baad hum Uday ki shaadi Amrit seh karwadenghe

Uday- Dad yeh aap kya kehrehay hai (interrupted)

Manyata- Uday tumhe hamaari kasam tumhe haan karni pareghi

Uday- Princess you can't do this to me

Manyata- Uday jaldi seh haan karo warnah hum abhi jakeh sab ko bathadenghe yeh shaadi nahiye ho sakthi... humneh tumhe apni kasam di hai kya tum chahateh ho hum marjaye

Uday- Nahiye Princess hum aapko kabhi bhi nahiye khonah chahateh hai tike hai jo aap chaheghi wahiye hogha

Uday was helpless he had to agree

Amrit was very happy

The sangeet had ended

Uday was very upset he went to talk to Amrit

Uday- why did you tell Dad?

Amrit- humneh nahiye batayah ok

Uday- yes you did tumahare ilawa koi aur nahiye ho saktha

Amrit- Uday humneh nahiye bataya ok kisineh papers post kiye teh hamare paas papers kahaan seh aiyghe.. aur haan yeh sab Uncle Giri neh kaha hai.. hum toh unki baat man rehay hai... aur ek baat kehnah chahateh hum aapseh bahuth pyaar karteh hai hum aapka wait karenghe

Uday- let me tell you one thing Amrit hum aapseh koi pyaar nahiye karteh ok hamaara pyaar sirf aur sirf Manyata hai.. aaj majboor hokeh humhe haan karnah parha lekin humhe yakeen hai hamaari Princess tike hojayghi aur hum aapseh kabhi bhi shaadi nahiye karenghe

He went from there angrily

Amrit- shaadi toh karni pareghi Uday warnah hum Jaigar ki Maharani kaise baneghe... poor poor Manyata bechari (she laughed evilly)

She rang someone

Guy- Amrit Jiji humneh sab ache seh kardiya hum kal he Jaigar arahaye hai

Amrit- Welldone Akash jaldi seh ajoah

PRECAP- HALDI/MEHENDI CEREMONY

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Posted: 13 years ago
.OMG, OMG😲 Fantastic, awesome, great, superb, beautiful, fabulous, marvalous update Jiji.👏 👏 👏
I really loved it.😊 K, starts with good things.I loved Devghar Palace scene n convo of J, Jhanvi, Krishy, Manyata n Vijay Bhai.😉
Loved the Sangeet scenes of dancing & my fav. part was KRISHY THREATS. 😆I'm in love with Krishy.🤗 He's really sho sho cute boy🤗
I think Giri uncle ke head pe hair ke saath-saath Mind bhi nahi hai.
I hate, hate, hate, hate this Amrit.😡 She's not Amrit, She's Poison(Zahar) of this FF. 😡 Chudail kahin ki.😡
She's so desperate yaar. & Contract!😲 Giri uncle pagal ho gaye hain.
🤪 Silly oldman.🤣 I know this Amrit is planning something against Manyata😡 I told you Amrit last time just stay away from my n Manyata's UV now see what'll we do with you Gawar.😈 🤣 Right now I'm talking like Moniya gawar, chudail n all.🤣 Please do something about her.😆
Yes UV, iss chudail se dur rahan samjhe.😉
OMG, OMG😲 I was right, I was right ye MAJNU AKASH iss Zahrili Amrit ka hi BHAI nikla.🤢 Dono milkar game plan karenge.😡
Pls Jiji give some mind to UV.😆 Itna sweet hai but aise hi chalta raha toh wo BALD UNCLE UV ki marriage iss Zahrili Amrit se kara denge.😆
I loved both dresses but specially Manyata's. Beautiful dress with great color combination.👍🏼
So all n all Full update was superb, Amazing.👏
Thanks for the awesome update n PM also.😛
Pls update next part ASAP.😊
LOVE YOU JIJI N HUGS FOR YOU.🤗 🤗 🤗
Edited by sonam2801 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice...thank god finally kaise bhi par manveer ki shadi ho rahi hai...butthis amrit is too much i tell u...kamini kahin ki hat dhoke uday ke pi6e pad gayi hai...but i m sure manyta will be fine...aur uday ko ush kamini amrit se shadi nahi karni padegi. Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome and beautiful update Anam dear👍🏼
You know i really M being paranoid bride 😉 She was so non traditional bride in terms of tantrums usually brides just blush all the time and here she was saying to UV I AM SO PARANOID 😆
Sangeet was just superb👏
I like it so cute and funny😳
Krishy bacha is just out standing like always😊
and what to say about contract😲
M and UV are so helpless right now😒
and now I am guessing the new entry will be in Amrit's team 😡
story is going great👏
update soon and you didn't pm me😔
😳
hugggsss🤗
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Edited by rubaarana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
gud that their marriage is happening😊 but i so hate this amrit😡
wish manyata becomes fine soon.. or may be the contract is lost😃😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was a Gr8 update daer...

Hate this Amrit n Giri Baldy

n also Akash...

I'll hate him coz he's Amrit's bro
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chii chiii what has amrit done? and Akash OMG! 🤣 akash is becoming a very popular kidnappers nowadays. anywayz
wow i hate amrit soo much
shes a big problem for manveer now
i hope they sort her out
and please no more kidnapping
becheri manyata, shes been kidnapped more then 3 times now 🤣
loved the updated mummy
do update soon
and thank you for the PM :)

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