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@Singularity

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#251

WHOA!! That was brilliant...a total game changer!!👏⭐️ Wish I was there to see that selfish J cry ... LOVED how Uday reacted to Aakash touching Manyata...he is starting to recognise his feelings 4 M, finally! However hard u try to deny it UV, the fact is that u r startin 2 fall, and fall hard!😳Manyata, you'd better start behaving more responsibly and recognising your duties towards others, and don't try anything stupid again...you know how UV likes to teach you lessons!😉

Ur FF is astonishingly lifelike...I can almost feel the scenes playing out in front of me!! It's quite spooky!!😆😆 UV is such a mastermind..u have made me fall in love with him even more! And I don't want to say anything about that annoying Akash..why does he have to pop up at the wrong moment, every single time??😡

P.S Love you 4 the pm..u saved me quite a lot of time!😃

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Uday Lovie

@Udaylovie

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#252

hey awesum .. nd ya it was preety long ... plzz post next partsoon nd thnxx fr d pm .. :)

plzz pm next time

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@-SilverAngel-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: shana0127
u have really kept DEK alive prachurya as reading ur FF reminds me of the time when i used to wait impatiently for ur witten update on AT chat thread and u used to give live written update of episode .

It seems DEK is still going on and I am reading its live update.

Just one request dear pls give a bit of line spacing in dialogues as I really mix them up while reading and have to read twice to get it.

Do it only if u feel ok with it as I still like it anyways 👏

Thanks for keeping DEK alive as ur FF give me feel of a live update.

@Prachu: In red: I also agree with the spacing part... kinda gets tough to read in 1 go..and have to focus harder many times & I end up mixing up lines too

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Nisha

@nisha1984

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#254

awesome part

so Uday found out their plan and made manyata come back to roka but manyata was already feeling guilty anyway for betraying her father... i know Jay will do something worse or taunt Manyata but uday is also harrasing Manyata in a way anyway... upar se aakash bhi to hai stupid kahin ka...

i hope manyata ki problems door ho jaye aur at least wo uday ki feelings ko samjhe...

update soon

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#255

Awesome! awesome! You have kept the real spirit of DEK in ur FF! Uday was so true to his character! And I loved the 'spot boy' part. It was hilarious!

Thanks for the pm. Your FF is one of the best, if not the best, in IF land.

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SaHillover101

@SaHillover101

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#256

SUPERB UPDATE!! Loved it!! Plzzz do continue soon n thanks for the pm:D

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Niha

@-Niha-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#257

nyc update
aww uday found her he shudnt be looking at peoples phones 😆
thx 4 da pm

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kojagoryfan

@kojagoryfan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#258

thank u 4 keeping DEK alive .lov u 4 dis.a big hug.

as a reader m always hungry/thirsty so the length is ok.

once again m speechless.can't describe my feeling properly.just one word - loved it.loved it.loved it loved it loved it loved it.loved it.loved it.loved it. loved it loved it.m crazy.loved it totally.loved manveer scene.its beautiful.try 2 update soon.

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priya

@Priya_SD

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#259

Hey Prachurya, I was a silent reader of your FF for a while but these last two parts were tooo good, I had to comment! Reading your FF is actually like watching DEK, its so similar and reminds me of the earlier episodes with Manveer nok-jhok! You should have been the CV of the show lol. Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon 😊