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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Pari 🤗, ooosome update , Loved Manyata -unnati relationship. all are so funny, I love this ff for its light humor, it juts lights up my mood.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update PaRi
like akash in dis ss
he has a fun frnd 2 have
the frndship and romance in dis ss Rocks
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Posted: 12 years ago
Manveer ss. Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-54

Jagat'lalmirchi dar mt sb thik hoga..
Bs ek req.h
Manyata'kya?
Jagat'bs is jay ko apne jeisa bnade,kuch ni krti.

All laugh...

Vijay'hm punjab keise jayenge?
Tara'gaddi se
Vijay'of oh wo to mujhe bi malum h pr mumy papa permision de denge..

Tara'wo chinta mt kro g,uday jagat h na wo kam krne k lye..
Uday'ha apni lalmirchi ko chad k tera hi to bodyguard bnuga..
Jagat'ab hmari glti ni vijay hmari trh handsum hunk ni h to.

Manyata'ha bones shop tera nam isliye to rkha h...
Jay'kudh me smartnes ni h dusro ki bat krta h.

Akash check hm bysps.
Uday'ha akash after mariage tu pitega unanti ni...
Jagat'unanti k jyada bysps h...
Vijay'tere se jyada to mere h.
Akash'ni g sbse jyada uday k h.
Jagat'ha bda malum h tujhe.
Akash'ha malum h.
Manyata'phone diyo.
Akash'main ni deta,itne bde ghr k beti hoke bl.me 1rs.rkhti ho.
Jay'oye akash tubi to bde ghr ka beta h dubaara bl.ni dlwa skta..
Unanti'mujhe kya dekh rhe ho?she s ryt..

Sb delhi phuchte h...

Manindar calng br'hello.
Br'g ha bol rha hu c,aap kaun?
Manindar'oye delhi kya aaya dost nu bhul gya,manindar bol rha c.
Br hapy'oye,tu kha h?oye ine dino bad tere nal gal hui si...

Manindar'oye main apne putar akash nu shadi krni h or tu na ho aisa ho hi ni skta...
Br'oye tu bulaiyo bad me,main phle aawaga.
Bol kha h?
Manindar'hmare pind punjab me.
Ayega.
Br'oye jrur,pure pariwar nal aauga.

Manyata calng br bt bg ja rha h.
'ye papag kha bg h?
Akash'grl frnd bn gai hogi..
Jay'kiski?
Jagat'tere papa ki bat kr rha H.
Manyata'mere papag tere papag ki trh ni h.
Chal jay.
Uday bye..
Uday usko pkdta h'manyata tu dar mt tere chahre pe dar aacha ni lgta h.
Manyata hold hm chick'sb sambhalega na tu
Uday hugd hr'tujhe kya lgta h?
Manyata smile'hm sb sambhalege.
Uday kissed hr chick.
Chal ja aaram se.
Main hu na..
Love u alot alwys...

Sb apne-2 ghr jate h...

Br'main jrur aaunga..yaara.

Cal cut..

Gr'maya g,unanti k jwellery bnke aagai h pckng krlena..
Maya'g aacha.

Manindar'arey bs bache aajaye phr punjab k lye nikle.
Ds'wo aate hi punjab thodi jayenge,thake hoge.

Gr'punjab jana jyada jruri h maa..
Thakawat to bad me utarti rhegi..

Maya'bat to maa bi shi kh ri h.
Gr'ni aisa ni ho skta..

Sb aate h.
Uday'shasiyakal ds,maa,papag uncle g.
Manindar'o aagye tum log.

Uday jagat lookd each other
'kuch to asar pdega..

Gr'asar,keisa asar?
Uday'aapke 7th rhene ka anjaam,aa gye tum log.
Jagat'dikhai ni deta.
Aa to gye h..

Akash'papag main wo
Manindar'beta g,aaplog relax kro,sham ko punjab chalege.
Uday jagat shockd'kya?
Sham ko kyn?

Ds'shadi ka din 3 din k ander ka nikla h.
Uday'main ni jaunga aaj.
Jagat'me 2
Gr'kyn?
Uday'kya robot smjha h.
Hm thak gye h.

Jagat'ha hm thak gye h.
Uday ds k pas jata h'ds bat ki.
Ds'ni,meri sunta hi ni tha.
Uday'dadi plz ab to kisi bi hal me shadi krni h..or jaldi krni h.

Ds'uday-jagat tum dono jra rum me chalna.
Manindar'g kyn?
Uday'ye akash ka baap dirty mind,o uncle g kuch talk shok krna h..
Jagat'chalo.
Wo 3no jate h.

Ds'kyn?krni h shadi.
Jagat'arey ds ho gya na.
Ds'kya?
Uday'arey whi Ho gya jisse bache paida hote h..
Ds'whi kya?
Jagat'ds kya ho gya tumhein??
Arey whi.
Uday'of oh,jisse tera giriraj hua h na whi ho gya.
Ds'haayee,raaba...
Mtlb uday tune apni SR mnali.
Jagat'ha mnali me bhai ne SR mnali..
Ds dono k kan pkdti h'bde shaitan ho itne shaitan kb se ho gye.

Jagat'dadi,niyat to sharifo wali hoti h,pr ye bttmeez ldkiya niyat bigad deti h.
Uday'dadi mere kan pkad ye glti maine ki h,jagat ne ni.
Jagat'mujhe to jute maro,maine kyn ni ki ye glti ye soch rha hu.
Uday jagat laugh..
Ds'aacha main bat krugi gr se,lekin unanti ki shadi k bad.
Uday hold hr hand'dadi sb thik hoga na..
Jagat'bhai fikr not.
Ds'uday sb thik hoga..
Kuch bi ghr ki bhu to manyata hi bnegi.
Jagat cntinuoes dadi ko dekh rha h...
Ds'arey ha jay bi bnegi..

Jagat'o thank god yad h..
Lekin bhabhi ko izazat k 7th lana h.
Ds'ha,or agar ni manege pariwar wale to
Uday'to hm to h hi punjab k sheir...

All said
'ha ni to...

Manyata,jay,vijay nd tara bi aate h.
'papag ye kha jane ki taiyari ho ri h.
Br'hm sb ja rhe h..

Jay'kha?
Komal'punjab..

All shockd.
'kya?
Kyn?
Br'chila kyn rhe ho?
Mere dost k bete ki shadi h,isliye hm ja rhe h.

Manyata apna sir pkad ti h'haayee,mera sir dard ho rha h,main rum me ja ri hu.
Menu ni jana punjab.
Wo chali jati h.

Vijay'main dekh k aata hu kya hua use?
Tara'main dwai leke jati hu.
Jay'main dbane ja ri hu.

Br shout'jo krna h kro,sb apni zid krte h.
Meri khushi ka kuch ni...

Manyata'haaye rabba uday ko keise btau.
Unanti ki shadi bi to punjab me hogi,tb kya bhana krege.

Uday sudden
Aata h.
Akash k hath me se phone leta h phone de jruri cal krna h.
Akash'ni yar.

Manindar'akash delhi aake bigad gya h.
Uday'jwan ldana sikh gya h uncle.
Jagat'uncle g ko tmeez wale log pasnd h.
Gr'ha tum dono bde tmeez wale ho.
Jagat uday'thanku papag..
Uncle g phli bar taarif ki h..
Gr'oye khote jake apni pckng kro.
Uday'ha hm apni pckng krege,or aap hmein utha ke lejaoge..

Wo cal krne chala jata h.
Wo manyata ko cal krta h..
'hello uday.
Uday'ha mera babu main abi sham ko punjab k lye nikal rha hu..
Manyata'kya?tu bi ja rha h.
Uday'main bi ja rha hu mtlb.
Manyata hapy'jaanu,main bi aa ri hu.
Unanti ki shadi 3din bad h na.
Uday'ha tujhe.
O teri maninder tere baap ka bi dost h.
Manyata'ho skta h,hm bi kisi ki shadi me hi ja rhe h..

Uday happy alot'chal meri jaan milte h punjab me.
Manyata'muuuhhh bye.
Cal cut.
Uday'arey khush rhti h to bdi changi lgti h..
Zindgi ni tere bina ab..

Manyata'oye sady mt hoye,hm sb punjab ja rhe h.

All happy.
Yeeeppii.
Br'arey kya ho gya?
Jay'gadi mgalo punjab chalege..

Unanti ghr me puja krti h nd cryng.
Akash'ye system kb se bna puja krte huye rona.

Maya also cryng'beta,chup..
Tu to kbi bi aa skti h yha.

Uday jagat also sad.
Gr sad'ab meri beti aapki aamant h..
Manindar'arey meri bhu ni meri beti h.
Tu chinta mt kr...

Unanti'main last tym yha puja kr ri hu.
Iske bad pta ni kb..

Ds'unanti beta chup..
Bs ro mt..
Gr wipes hm tears'oye khote
Jb ni bolna chahiye to bolte ho,jb bolna hota h to bolte ni ho...

Uday jagat huged unanati.
3no ne hugd kiya h.

Jagat'oye Unanti bhagwan kha ja rhe h,yhi h.
Uday'roj aajaiyo or puja krliyo.

All laugh
Uday'ya phr hm ye murti leke tere ghr aajayenge...
Jagat'g bhar k puja krliyo..
Again all laugh.

Maya'chalo sb.
Unanti'bhai aap mujhse waada kro manyata hi meri bhabhi bnegi..

Uday smile'promise.
Jagat'ab chale.
Uday jagat ko pkdta h'manyata ayegi to jay bi aahi jayegi...

Jagat'isliye to main khush hu.
Akash'chalo.

Sb chle jate h...

Br'achanak maan keise gye?
Manyata'chalo ni chalte h.
Br'aacha aacha sry chalo.
Jay'of oh.
Chalo.
Sb chalte h.
Br'komal ye hmare bache itne dangerous kyn h?
Komal'qki aap ni ho..

Precap-gr nd br meetng in unanti's mariage...

Pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey pari🤗,nice update, excited for Preca,-pakka jagda hoga br-gr ke beech mein 😉, wo car wale incident ko lekar
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Pari, amazing.👏 👏
Unnati-Akash marriage date fixed now n BR is Mahinder's friend.😆 Precap was exciting, now waiting for the next update.😉
Thanks for the regular updates.😊
Great update.👍🏼
🤗 🤗
Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Both chapter were fabulous...oh i love this Akash he is so sweet n innocent (Hailaa me to Akash ki fan banti ja rahi hu this is all ur fault Pari I TELL U)
ManVeer were as always wonderful...Uday-Manyata-Jagat ki tikadi jabardast hai...
Brij-Giri face off pata nahi kya hoga shayad bhukanp(earthquake) aajayega haha...
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Posted: 12 years ago
SUPERB update PaRi !!!
dis line manali me SR manali cracked me up😆

haaye rabba Maninder Br to dost nikhle
ab back to punjab
jara hum b toh packing shacking karle 😉

ummm Precap
br gr pehli meeting hi kuch tadka vali
thi abb patha nahi ye meeting kaise hogi 😛
i hope Maninder acts as a mediator and also
as a bridge for UV M and Jag J marriage


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum update pari cnt wait 4 the next part the precap has made me curious as to how they will behave wen they meet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Manveer ss. Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-55

Manindar'oye gr teri trh mera ek or dost h brijraj.
Tum dono mere change dost ho.

Tu apne uday jagat ki shadi unki betiyo de nal krde.
Bhuye changi milegi tenu.

Uday'uncle g aap apne bete ki shadi ki socho,hmare piche to duniya pdi h.
Gr'itne bi sundar ni ho.
Uday'jeaolusy.
Jagat'uncle g hmare papa yhi sochte h ye itne smart h main aisa kyn hu??

Gr'oye khote chup...
Manindar kya krte h brijraj g?
Manindar'oye tu crore ka malik h wo to tere se jyada aamir h.
Ds'ni apne poto k lye main ldki dhundugi.
Gr'maa,ek bar dekhne me kya problem h.
Uday'ha phr se bhais simran jeisi uthke pkada doge...

Manindar'maa g,br ki bdi beti wo to agar aapke ghr me aa gai to lakshmi k kadam pdege.
Kbi koi udas ni rhega.

Jagat dhire se'bhai ye manindar kuch jyada taarif kr rha h..
Ds'arey tumhari M J k pita ka nam kya h?
Uday'unse to fursat milti ni thi nam kya khaak puchte..
Jagat'rhne do itni aachi kismat ni h jo ye manindar unki bat kre..
Akash'oye mere papa ka nam lene ki jrurt ni h.
Uday'uncle g akash dhamki de rha h.
Jagat'bura bhala bol rha h.
Akash'chup chup aacha sry.
Manindar'akash chal thodi deir me punjab aajayege,tb tujhe btata hu.
Uday jagat lookd akash'yes,ab tu pitega.


Br'bs ab1ghanta or hm apne pind phuch jayenge...

Vijay'ha apne pind punjab phuch jayege.
Komal'tara dulhan bnke mere 7th chalna babag k aage sir tekne.
Or maafi maang lena apni glti ki.

Manyata'kaun si glti?
Br'jis trh shadi ki.
Jay'jeise sb krte h weise hi to ki h.

Komal'phr bi glti to ki h na..
Manyata'kya glti ki h?
Sb pairo se hi chalke faire lete h,sb gle me hi manglsutr phnate h,to inhone ne bi aisa kiya h.
Vijay'wo bi babag ki marzi thi isliye hua h.
Tara'bs kro sb,maa main chalugi..

Manyata'aapki kismat aachi h jo tara mili h,wrna aa jati koi danda marne wali.
Ha ni to...

Sb punjab phuchte h.
Uday yuwing'haayee meri jan mera punjab...
Unanti'kyn?
Uday'2 wjh h ek to main paida hu dusra yha meri koi zindgi bn gai manyata..
Jagat'yaadein taaja ho gai...

Or whi br or unki family utarti h...

Manyata'papag aap yhi ruko hm saaman ki checkng kra ke aate h.
Chalo sb.
Jay,manyata,vijay,tara sb jate h..

Manindar'oye mera dost br gr aao milata hu.
Gr'tu chal main aata hu..

Manindr jata h br k pas'oye mere yar ki hal h?
Br'oye manindar tu,bda mota ho gya h..
Milke tenu bhoot aacha lgda si.

Manindar'oye menu bi chal,tenu apne dost gr se milata hu.
Br'chal.
Manindar'bhabhi g kitte h?
Br'o wo bache de nal saaman ki checkng krane gai c..
Manindar'aacha tu chal..

Wo leke jate h.
Gr bck turn khade h.
Maninder'oye gr dekh mera yar br...

Gr bckturn hota h
'tum.
Br'tum..
Manindar'oye tum tum kya lga rkha h,jante ho kya?

Gr br both iritate
'ye tera bttmeez dost h jise gaddi chalani ni aati..

Br'manindar pure punjab me yhi bekar insan mila dost bnane k liye jise bat krne tk ki tmeez ni h..
Gr'mere bache ni h abi wrna tujhe jwab dete.
Br'mere bache bi ni wrna tere sir pe bache kuche bal bi hta dete.

Manindar'arey dono thand rkho.
Both shout'kya thand rkho?
Ni rkhna thand.
Gr'mere bete ki shadi iski betiyo se kbi ni.
Br'ja ja tere beto se shadi krne se aacha meri betiya kuwari rhe...
Gr'hat
Br'hat pre...


Udhr sb saaman checkng krwate h..
Uday'ds tujhe sexy khte h iska mtlb ye ni ki tu sexy h..
Ds'hawww jagat dekh uday ne mera tag chin liya..

Tara'ay manyata wo uday jagat waigre h na.
Jay'kha?
Vijay'aasman me kha dekh ri h,udte thodi h wo.
Manyata hapy'arey ha wo rhe h.

Jagat'arey ds tu sexy h.
Uday'mera mtlb tu double sexy h,side me khadi hoja..

Ek aadmi'arey ye bi to saaman h,dhona pdhta h ise bi..
Uday jagat'kamine idhr aa,wo is aadmi ko pkdte h or chckng machine h uspe beitha dete h...
Jagat'bhoj hoga tu,ye hmari dadi h.
Uday'saale chalne ka saleeka ni malum or hmein sikha rha h...

Manyata dur se chilati h'uday.

Ds'arey manyata beta..

Manyata bheed me khadi hoti h..
Ek aadmi use push krta h'hatiye na mam hmein bi kam h..
Manyata halka gir jati h.
Uday'kamine idhar hi ni udhr bi h.
Ruk jagat saaman leke aa...

Manyata khadi hoti h us aadmi k bal pkdti h or sir pe 2 4 punch krti h...
Kamine teri maa,bhan mar gai h jo tu is trh kh harquit kr rha h...

Uday'le saale pit gya mil gya chain..
Ab hat pre.
Aadmi'tu kaun h?
Uday'iska pati.
Khush hat...ab..

Manyata hugd uday'tu yha keise?

Uday'punjab to ek hi h..
Tere liye bi mere liye bi.
All laugh.

Continueos
Pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Pari 🤗, oosome update👏, Gr and Br ka toofani jagada, was expected, lol, waiting for the next chappy, update soon

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