manveer ss: Two HEARTS:that BEAT as ONE...part-64th pg-51 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Hey Pari 🤗, this update was hillarious, though I expected them to run away😉.

Uady's line of Akash ke ankhon mein akal pad gaya haai, was so cute.And manyata's line of tumhe dukh nahi ho raha hai ki mein ja rahi hu, tum log ro nahi rahe ho, was even better, loved it👏

Thanks for a lovely Update 👍🏼, and so wating for the next tadkedar meeting of Uday and his mirchi😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-10th

Jay'pdh liya letter,ab apni ye baarat utha or leke jaa.'
Vijay'or sun jeet,manyata ko jitna dhudna h dhundh le,wo tere hath ni aane wali'
Jeet vijay ka coller pkdta h'main wada krta hu yha sbke saamne teri hi bhan se shadi kruga..
Chalo papa g apni dulhan ko dhudhna h...
Wo sb chale jate h..
Br or komal apna sir pkad k beith jate h rone lgte h.
Komal'hmne kbi ni socha tha,ki hmari izzat aise uchlegi'
Br:hm uski hr gltiya maaf krdete the,lekin ye glti maaf krne layek ni h...
Vijay'waah kitni ajeeb bat h na,abi bi saari glti manyata bhai ki h.jeet ka behave ni dekha aapne...
Br:uski dulhan bhaagi h,unki bejati hui h.use to gusa ayegana.
Jay aankhe bdi krke'aacha hua bhaag gai,or hmne hlp ki h..aapki aankho pe shadi ka parda pda hua h.to khud hi krlo.
Chalo vijay bhai...or ha jitna dhudhna h dhund lo,aapko aachi trh pta h apki beti se jyada ziddi is ghr me to koi ni h..ha ni to.
Wo chale jate h.
Br'main bi dekhta hu kitna kb tk bhaagegi..

Gr home..
Dolly's father'gr g yhi hmare pariwar ki insult krane k liye hmari beti se shadi ki thi.'
Gr:dekhiye mujhe maaf krdijiye.
Hm smjh skte h apki halat,hmari bi ek beti h.
Dolly's father'ni aapka beta itna bttmeez h,besharm
Jagat shout'uncle g chup kro,wo mera bhai ni meri jan h,uske baare me kuch bolne soch lena.
Unanti'ha uncle,veer g ne to mna kiya tha shadi se,lekin aapke pariwar ko ha sunne ki adat h.
Dolly's father'saare bache bttmeez h aapke to.
Jagat'ha bttmeez h na,to jao yha se,wo bhai ne kya kha tha Dolly us kamre ki shadi jake kisi mahel se krado.
Mera bhai najuk h,aapki kudi k saamne.
Dolly:o g main kamra hu?
'challo g papa yha se..
Dolly's father wo pair patake chale jate h..
Maya'tu chup ni rh skta,idhr glti srf or srf uday ki h.
Jagat nd unanti'bhai ki glti ni h hm ne bhaagaya h unhe,bhai ki itni glti h ki wo bs apni zindgi apne pasnd ki ldki chahte h'
Gr:or main khta hu,us bttmeez ko koi ldki ni milegi..
Un:milegi,jrur milegi.
Jagat'jb aap jeise strict person ko maya mil gai,to bhai to bde cute h..
Jitna dhudhna h dhund lo,lekin main kamre ko bhabhi ni bula skta..ha ni to..
Chal unanti..
Gr:maya ye mere bache ni ho skte.
Maya'chup rhiye,ab to yakeen ho gya h ye aapke hi bache h..mujhe mera uday chahiye,main apne bache k bina ni rh skti...
Gr guse me chale jate h...

Nyt ho chuki h
Uday bhaagta h'ufff...main kha jau,ghr to jaana muskil h,wrna mera baap mujhe phr dulha bna dega...o god mujhe paani pina h...kya kru?

In other side
Manyata'kamine jeet tu jis din mere hath lga na us din tujhe ek thapad to jrur marugi,meri halat kitni khraab krdi..

Uday chlte-2 thak jata h,or ek jgh beith jata h'yar ab ni chala jata h.
Ek punjabi munda h
'o paa g yha kyn beith gye?
Uday weise hi thka h'to kha tere sir pe beithu...
Boy:o g sir pe kyn beithoge,shadi me aye ho wha chalo khao piyo..
Uday khush hota h'are ha shadi me aaye hu o paag chalo...main tera hi wait kitta..chl to wo chala jata h shadi me...

Or idhr manyata bi phuchti h dekhti h kuch logo ki bheed aati h..
Wo bi usme guss jati h..
Manyata'og phle ye dhasso yha shadi h'
G:oye kudiye tu to bdi pyari h,or tu yha aai h tere ko ye ni pta yha kya h?
M:arey pta h shadi h,lekin wo kya h mujhe koi janta ni h yha,jo mere 7th aye the wo to naraj hoke aadhe raste me se chale gye...main ki kitta.??
2nd grl:oye tu chinta na kr,meri dost bnke chal...
M:ha ha chal jaldi..
Grl:weise lg bdi shoni ri h khudi,ruk kaala tika lga du njar na lge tenu.
Wo ek kaal tika lgati h.
M:arey chal na...jaldi..

To wo dono us hall me jate h

To manyata phle paani piti h,phr paani leke bahr aati h or face ko wash krti h,or whi thodi duri pe uday bi apna face wash kr rha tha...

To uday dekh leta h,ki koi or bi h udhr lekin face ni dekhta..
'weise aap ldki walo ki trf se ho ya ldke walo ki trf se..
Manyata'aap mujhse puch rhe ho..
Uday'ha or koi dikh rha h kya idhr.
Manyata'g main ldki walo ki trf se hu.or aap?
Uday'main ldke walo ki trf se.weise aapka nam kya h?
Manyata irritate'nam kya krna h tujhe?aapne limit me rh.ha ni to
Phr uday dhire se bolta'ye awaz meine suni h khin,'ah nam aacha ni hoga isliye ni bta ri ho?ha ni to.

Manyata piche mudti h nd usi waqt uday bi bck turn hota h.
Manyata shocked'tu.
Uday also shock'tum yha.
Manyata'hy babag mere se kya dushmani h,jo bar bar is manhus ko mila dete ho mujhse.
Uday'o babag thanku g...ab tympas aache se hoga..

Manyata'jyada na daant mt dikha,wrna
Uday'ha ha malum h tod dogi,krti-wrti kuch ho ni khna janti ho bs..

Manyata uske pas jati h'abi btati hu,wo ek slap marne k liye hath uthati h,uday uska hath pakad leta h.
'oye Hoye kudiye,najuk hath h,pather na bna wrna nuksaan tera hi hona h.
Manyata'ek jb gaal pe pdega na tb pta chalega najuk h ya pather,chad mera hath wrna...

To uday ne uska hath pkad h or achanak wo zbrdsti apne hath ko mod leta h or manyata bck hug krleta h ek hath se.
'wrna...kya?
Manyata chup,wo uske bhoot close hota h..
'wrna main chilane lgugi,chad mujhe..
Uday little lost hr wetng face'chilla himmat h to...
Manyata chilla ni pati wo suddn uske hath pe bite krti h,nd she said'tujhe to main ek din aache se btaugi main kya hu..ha ni to.
Wo chali jati h.
Uday smile'or main tenu shant krke hi rhaga..
I mis u jagat alot..lal mirchi idhr h,to jrur pink wali bi idhr hogi..

Jagat 2 unanti'bhai k bina mera man ni lgta yar,pta ni kha hoga.
Un:main bi bhoot mish kr ri hu..mujhe unki chinta ho ri h...
Maya'jb uske bina rh ni skte to bhgaaya kyn?
Jagat'insaan k 7th joker aache ni lgte h,maine mna kiya tha agar ye shadi krawoge to kuch glt hoga..or hogaya..

Manyata guse me ander piche dekhti hui jati h.
Or aage ek ldke se takker kha jati h.
Ldka'arey shoniye kha piche mudke dekh ri h..hm to aage khade h..

Manyata piche hi dekhti h'oye hat na idhr se,pare hat.
Uday us ldke k 7th aake khada ho jata h'aankhe h ya button,dekh k ni chl skti kya tu..
Manyata phr guse me aage dekhti h'tu,idhr na mera dimag mt khraab kr,ye meri ghr ki shadi ni h..
Uday'to main ki kru..itni shoni khudi saamne rhegi to shadi kaun dekhega...

Manyata tightly bolti'bhoot bn rha h apne aap ko ab btati hu'
Wo na udhr se jane lgti h,or uske pairo me apne pairo se hit krti h or wo chilata h.
Wo actualy uday ne dusre ldke se apni jgh change kr li thi.
Ldka'oye ni kruga teri taarif mera pair chad de,
Manyata'o shit,o g main to is..maaf kijiye .
Uday khada hoke hs rha hota h..or use ek lyn marta h..

Manyata'kamina khin ka.
Wo jati h guse me to to uday uske hatho ko notice krta h,usne whi chudiya phni h jo usne di thi...

Wo dekh k bhoot khush hota'oye hoye ye chudiya tere liye hi bni si kudiye...'
Lg bhoot shoni rhi h,bs apne hair khol de to qyamat aajayegi...

Precap:uday-manyata ki fight cntinuos..

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Hey Pari 🤗, cute update loved it, nice fight, their nok-jhok are so adorable, love them.

I was expecting that they both might know, that they hav run from home in this update, but never mind, waiting to see their reaction when they would know that each one had run away from their marriage 😆

Lovely update pari, thankyou 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
lol i cldnt stop lafin i was dying lafin n cldnt stop..👏...thanx fr pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
it was gr8 fighting and fighting hope they will bcome friends soon :)
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-11th

Manyata akeli khadi h...
'haayee rabaa mere ghr pe sb shi rkhna...jay vijay tara ko koi nuksaan na ho. mere papag ne ab tk pta ni kya-2 krdiya hoga...

Uday kuch ldko k 7th beitha h,wo apni baatein krte h.
Wo boar ho rha h..
1st boy:oye tu kyn shant beitha h,bolta kyn ni h?
Uday'oye mujhe mera dost bhai yad aa rha h jagat..
2nd:aacha ek gal dhash tu kisi ldki nu love krda si?
Uday'love,ni paa g aisi koi milli ni..
To ek bolta h
'oye paa g milta wilta koi ni pyar to kb kise ho jata h pta ni chalta,tujhe bi ek din ho jayega or pta ni chalega..'
Uday cnfused smile...

To manyata akeli hoti h to ek ldka aata h tej bolta h..
'oye kudi koi ni mil rha cmpany k liye to menu join krle..'

Sb phr whi dekhte h
Uday bolta h'gya,pita ye.
Manyata'apni sakal dekhi,hat idhr se.wrna..
Uday'ha bhai hat ja wha se wrna tod degi tujhe.'
Wo aadmi'hahaha,meri patni bi yhi khti h,aaj tk ni kr paai..ab to dar bi.
To manyata suddn use slap krti h'main teri biwi ni hu,or ye jo bar-2 wrna..ki lyn complete kr rhe h na,unke liye bi h...ha ni to.
Uday naugtynes k 7th use dekhta h'oye paa g komal hatho se thapad lga ye bi aapka luck h'
All boys laughng..

Manyata use guse me dekhti h..
Uday wink krta h...

Ldka'oye shi kh rhe ho,lucky nam h mera or tere hath se slap khake i m lucky.
Lucky wife-aacha ghr chaliye super lucky bnanti hu aapko..

All start laughng.
Manyata also,nd sudden uday notice hr laughng face...
He thout'kamal h,hr ada iski kamal ki h...

Uday use chadne k liye uske pas jata h
'o ho to tum hasti bi ho,
Manyata stop laughng'bhagwan ne hsne ka hq tujhe diya h kya srf?
Uday'main to normal insaan ki trh hsta hu,tum rakchs(monester) ki trh hsti ho,isliye puchna pda..
Manyata'thik h,tu hsta h na phool ki trh,ja khush rh phool ki trh hsta rh.bloody fool.hat
Wo dono 7th sath khade h,ld rhe h tbi ek punjabi grl
'haayee,tum dono ki jodi kitni cute h,ek dum childish jodi h..

1boy:o g ek photo lo inki,such me perjaiye ne such bola..
Manyata'chi,iske 7th meri koi jodi wodi ni h,main to..
Uday'natak kr ri h,photo khincwana iska shoq h..

Tb manyata use guse me dekhti h,or uday use muskurake,tbi ek snap khinc jati h..

Manyata jaane lgti h,or uday bi.
Grl:arey kha idhr aao,uday ko ek ldka push krta h or manyata ko whi ldki dono me takker hoti h,manyata k hath uske chest pe h,nd uday ne use waist se pkda h,or dono ek dusre ko little lovly eyes rection k 7th dekhte h...then tb dusri snap capture ho jati h..

Phr dono suddn alg hote h,dono ko embresed feel ho rha h..bt wo weise hi fake smile sbko dete h..

Grl:oye kudiye menu maaf kr jodi itni pyari lg ri thi,ki bs rok ni paai.weise ek gal dhas teri shadi ho gai..kya?ye lehenga to bridal.
Manyata 'ni g i m unmaried..wo shadi me aa ri thi to glti se y lehenga phn liya'
Uday sochta h'ldke wale to us din dekhne aye tha,pta ni jwab kya hoga.weise itni pyari ldki ko koi na ni kh skta...

Preeto'o ek min.aap to uday g hona.
Uday'g hang aako
P:lo g bhul gye,o kudiye manyata tu idhr aa..
Tara ki veer g ki shadi me uday apne mere 7th dance kitta..
Manyata'arey,ha,bdi changi jodi lg ri si,phr se dnce krona..
Uday'o na g preeto,dance krna thoda mushkil h..aaj mud ni h.
Manyata uday ka hath preeto k
Hath me deti h'aise keise chalega uday g,kisi ka dil todna buri bat..jao
Uday'tum ye kya kr ri ho,mujhe
Manyata'bda smart smjhte ho na apne aap ko ja nach.uske 7th.ja..
'or ha uday g lift bhoot aacha krte h,wo jrur krna..
Manyata naugty smile,uday also share angry smile...

Preeto'hai hai,manyata ye keise soch liya main dance krungi..
Uday happy apne dil pe hath rkh k'thanku preeto g.
Manyata 'to.
P:o oh dance to tujhe or uday ko krna h.
Uday stop step nd bck turn leta h..
Manyata shocked'kya?dimag to thik h,menu is ullu k 7th dance ni krna..
Uday'kisi ka dil ni todna chahiye,rhne do preeto g,dance krna aata to jrur krti,or us din saara dance maine kiya tha,ye to bar-2 uth ri thi..
Manyata'o to kya maine kha tha uthane k liye,gadhe ka kam uthana hi hota h,or tu gadha h,menu dance ni krna'wo jane lgti h.

Uday uska hath pkdta'oye izzat ka sawal h,ab to gadha bnana h to gadha hi shi,wo manyata ko again apne shouldr pe pick up krleta h...

All guests laughng nd clapping.
Groom'oye munda ho to uday jeise jiger wala..
Bridal'shi kh rhe ho g,munda idhr uday hi h,aap sb munde thodi ho.'

Sb chup,nd manyata-uday eye cntct me
Uday'le phr se utha laya tujhe'
Manyata'kasam khati hu,dubara tere se ni milugi aaj k bad'
Uday'o g ab to maan hi le tu bhagwan g ko hmari solid chemistry pasnd aa gai h,isliye mila dete h..
Manyata'ab se pasnd ni aayegi Qki ab se tere saamne ni aaugi..
Uday'tu ayegi,mujhe ykeen h kismat pe,uday use waist se pkdta h,bad ki bad me dekhenge,phle dance to krle...
Manyata uska hath apne waist se htane ki koshish krti h..
Uday'koshish mt kr,yha agr aisa krogi,to log sochege such me dance krna ni aata'...
Manyata make a irritate face nd wo silently dance krne lgti h,
1boy:oye hoye hm bi munde h,apni-2 kudi nu 7th leke aajao..or sng dulhan ka fav.sng hoga.
Bridal:o g,mere pati ka fav.sng chla do g..
Sb aate h...
{sng start}
(Male version}
'teri yadein,mulaqaatein,
Main keise bhulu chaht ki wo brsaatein,
{uday-manyata dancing start passinately,bt uday c hr nt manyata.
Uday thout'chandni rat me chand mere 7th h,or uper se ye aag lgana wala sng..ha ni to...,}
Tuhi mera dil h,tuhi meri jan,
{uday manyata ki waist ko tightly apni trf or push krta h,then manyata uski trf dekhti h,nd manyata use chod ke jaane lgti h..}

'kbi to paas mere aao,
kbi to njrare mujhse milaao,
kbi to dil se dil ko milao,
o jaana...
{uday uska hath pkdta h,nd roundng style me use apni trf khincta h,nd uske chin ko pakd k up krta h,ki mujhe dekh}..
'meri jan palke u na jhukana,
Meri jan mujhse dur na jaana,
Meri jan mujhko bhul na jan,o jana...
Mujhe lauta de wo mera pyar..
Manyata's one
hand was holded by him while her
other hand was on his shoulder)
Manyata pissed ho ri h.'main tera hi diwana hu,
main teri baatein bhul na pau,
Tuhi mera dil h,tuhi meri jan..
O yara kyn khafa ho mujhse,
O yara kyn judaa ho mujhese,
Mera pyar h tujhse,o jaana..
{(he twirled her around,he pulled
her towards him as the distance
between them decreased,wo
dance bhoot fastly krte h.)..
Tere bin zindgi h adhuri,
Tere bin bndgi h adhuri,
O jana..
(uday lifts her
and rotate hr so passionately.
Both forgot evry thng..)
Saare couple ne arms pe catch
kiya then finished dance...
'mujhe lauta do,wo mera pyar...
{both in solid eye cntct,nd usi me uday uski hair pin nikal deta h,jisse manyata k hair puri trh open ho jate h}
Dance finished..
Manveer eye cntct.
Sb unhe dekh rhe h...
Bridal:haayee,hmara phla gaana ye tha,jb hm ek dusre nal nu diwane bne the.
Groom:oye lgta h inka bi phla sng yhi h..
All laughng.
Break both eyecntct...
Manyata wo phr jaldi-2 wha se use dekhti bhar aajati h..
Uday ne jo uske hair pin nikala tha uske hair me se wo uske hatho me hi h,or wo bi bahr aata h uski hair pin dene,pr wo khin hoti ni..
Uday'bhaag gai,hair pin kya main lgaau,god g aap pe pura bharosa h..'

In mrng..
Manyata dhire-2 chal ri h
,aage dekhti h kuch gunde type log khade h.
Wo manyata ko dekhte h,or manyata unko.
Manyata'oye aise kamino ki trh kyn dekh rhe h,artificial jwelery h jo bi'
1bolta h'arey yhi jeet g ki dulhan pkdo ise'
Manyata'o teri tum jeet k chamche ho,kamina,bhaag manyata,wo dubaara bckward bhaagne lgti h..
Manyata runing fast nd uske piche gunde..
Manyata'babag,ek bar or hlp kro na,plz..
Uday'ek jgh ruk k apne phone ka network laane ki koshish kr rha h'aaja na,apni grlfrnd se bad me mil liyo,aaja network'..

Manyata bhaagti-2 dekhti h,koi khada h to or tej bhaagti h,or gunde ekdum uske piche hi h.
Manyata'o g mujhe bchalo,gunde pde h piche,plz mujhe..
Uday aage dekhta h'o teri,tu jhuth kitna bolti h,ki main tere piche pda hu,mere piche tu pdi h.
Manyata dari h'arey ha thik h main tere piche pdi hu,mujhe

Tbi gunde phuchte h.
Manyata uday k piche chup jati h'bda smart bnta h na,inko bhaaga k dikha'
Uday'o teri ye bhaynak log h kaun?
1gunda'oye kudi nu chad or ja yha se.'
Uday'kyn be?kudi ek to bdi mushkil se mere pas aai h,or aise keise chad du.
Weise piche kyn pde ho?
Manyata'ye tumhare dost h kya?are mere baap k bhej huye gunde h.bs ab ld.
Uday'itne bhaynak log tere baap k hi ho skte h'.ha ni to.
Manyata'ha tera baap kitna sundr tha,maine dekha tha'...ha ni to

Continueos...

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Uday'kyn be?kudi ek to bdi mushkil se mere pas aai h,or aise keise chad du.


how the heck do u come up with such lines🤣🤣

Manyata'ye tumhare dost h kya?are mere baap k bhej huye gunde h.bs ab ld.
Uday'itne bhaynak log tere baap k hi ho skte h'.ha ni to.
Manyata'ha tera baap kitna sundr tha,maine dekha tha'...ha ni to


🤣🤣 gosh even in these situation they are fighting, Loved the update pari👏, thanks, and update soon🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
awesome yaar gr8 work cont soon now he will fight
last line was the best (tere bap kitna sunder hae mene dekha hae)🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
PARI JUST READ THE BOTH CHAPTERS.TOO GOOD.👏 👏 👏
IT WAS SO FUNNY.😆 I LOVE JAGAT-UDAY CONVO WITH THEIR PARENTS.😆
M-UV AGAIN MEET IN THE MARRIAGE & FIGHT LIKE TOM & JERRY.😆
I LOVE THIS SS.😳
THANKS FOR THE FANTASTIC UPDATE & PM ALSO.😊
LOVE YOU.🤗 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Hahaha haha...awesome update Pari kamini.meri mano toh dono keh baap hi churail jaisey hai...n Uv keh lines omg.n last scene hahaaha...sorry aur kuch nahi hai bolney keh liye:p

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