The Guard Of Honour Manveer ff :) note pg 65 - Page 47

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey soz for the late reply... read the parts that i missed and i just loved dem dey were to god hayee in dis part manveer scene just made me blush update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: panchaali

Super hot 😳


Loved the love making scene ā¤ļø 😊

Nicely done šŸ‘šŸ¼

thanx dear :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preya_radev

hey soz for the late reply... read the parts that i missed and i just loved dem dey were to god hayee in dis part manveer scene just made me blush update soon and thanks for the pm

thanx dear will update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandy61

when will u update ????

soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
tonight :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
so finally i am updating soo sorry guys for the delay was messed up with some work
chap 19 part 1

They all were standing still waiting for uday to reveal the tasks for vijay but it look like as if he is no mood to tell anyone he motioned towards the mahal gates the car arrived and rajprohit ji stepped out of it he greeted him and brought him will all due respect every body took the blessings of the raj prohit then they all moved to puja ghar as rajprohit was gonna do for the betterment of the royal of jaigarhs and for vijay to win the tasks

Md was hell busy in the chain of his thaugts he still considered uday as an manipulative brat he only considered him the one all capable of winning then why does he making th rp prays for vijay do he really turn good no a udayveer could never change even the whole world witness it he couldn't believe after what he did to him the pooja rajprohit himself announes the quest

Rp: rajwaroon ki reet hoti hae who suraj ka tilak krte hae they only had the eyes to face it its there pride and for vijay there 3 tasks will be those for any yuvraj

Looking after states affairs showing his capapbility in it one task from devgarhs yuvrani

His tamperament to be honoured one task would be by mahasabah

Fight for his right one task from jaigarh's yuvraj

After this manyata announce the first task for vijay

"he have to go to devgarh and look after the hopitilisatin situation in the kingdom and make amends to take it to new heights"

Md: was now hell shocked soo easy task the first one and there's no sign if tension on uday's face

Ohh how could I forget he is the biggest poker face once ever borned

Hearing the task a new life was given birth in vijay a new shine new glow plastering his face

Manyata: uday vijay bhai ke chereh pe jeetne ka junoon kitna saaf dikh rha hae

Uday: kash ye jeetne ka junoon hota ??? over confident nahi

Manyata:uday u can't take everything in a wrong way

Uday: bcoz the path choosen by your brother is wrong

Manyata:what are u saying uday??

Uday:I don't really don't know but I couldn't bear to see md by his side there's only one thing in vijay I like he isn't complete but he is pure he have some hesitation while he is doing something wrong and that hesitation is clearly now visible in his eyes and I hope his desparation for achieving his love may not completely change him as a person which unatti never thought that would be in vijay

Hearing uday's words the last night chat bw vijay and md started to flashback in manyata's min

She definitely have to talk too vijay and that too be alone what is this ad mystery why he wanted to take revenge from uday soo badly that once he used to be his best friend now biggest enemy what made him turn soo wild

Md:soo uday what about the rules

Uday:first of all md no pain no game the rules are that there are no rules

Md:so great yuvraj you are a true genius

Yu have became great in the eyes of every one thinking that u have given him a fair chance is this equallity

Uday:first of all listen to me

No rules means that intensity of the tasks could have no measures and if anything unfair took place from my side that tasks need no further completion

So now for you get ready

Then he lefts

Manyata: vijay bhai want to talk to you alone

Manyata and vijays go in the corner where as unatti was thanking md for his true and genuine support towards vijay

Manyata :vijay bhai u sure u aren't doing anything wrong

Vijay: no manyata bhai

Manyata:vijay bhai uday have showed faith in you in parting the taks giving one to me and one too mahasabah don't break his trust vijay bhai

Vijay: manyata bhai I wont

Manyata: then why are u seemed to indulge with that md whose trying to do worng to uday

Vijay: manyata bhai believe anything wont happen to uday and neither jaigarh I did all this bcoz he was the perfect man in this situation to help but he would regret trusting bcoz in my mind and heart uday's trust has a high place then for my love if this hasn't been this man I wouldn't have been foegiven by you my sister who I would I actually tried to murder her inner soul how could I repeat the same mistake

Manyata you are more than anything to mee will I ruin my sisters hapiness for my own

No manyata bhai never if that was the case I would have left unatti on the first place

Manyata bhai I respect uday's love for her sister

And means hurting uday is in one kind also betraying unatti and for that would be the biggest hurt that could reach her manyata bhai u know na I can't see unatti in any sort of pain so how can I betray and hurt her trust uday's trust believe me manyata bhai

I ont let anything wrong happen they both hugged eachother

But the other way round it was a different story

Unatti hugging mahinder

Unatti: mahinder bhai If It wouldn't been u I would have been died by the tension how would vijay be able to complete his tasks thanx for ur support

Md:beta don't worry I wont let anything wrong happen to you

Unatti: mahinder bhai but why u are so rude with uday

Md:beta leave it u don't know there a big mess up out of ur knowledge and u didn't have the mind to understand it

Unatti:mahinder bhai why u always call me beta???

Md: becoz I always wanted to have a child like u I always adore u as my little sister the same as uday use to adore u

Unatti: than bhai how could u even think that dada could stoop soo low to do what he did to you behind it there was someone's else's masterplan and I know every part of it and my dada has tolded me everything even those parts which u don't know

Md: if he soo saint then tell me who was it and what I don't know

Unatti: one day will surely tell u when I have the guts too disclose the person and broke the comitment I made to dada
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful and lovely in this story unnati is betraying uday i mean how could take the support of mahinder anyway this is what is called love is blind anyway great update haz i could feel everything happening right infront of my eyes i truly loved it the feel the situation u created and the task was awesome i hate mahinder but i know u will handle him well please update soon and thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great Part Haz
So Mahinder is helping Unnanti so he isnt evil... but he hates Uday so I think there somehting like a big misunderstanding that took place so thats why Uday and Mahinder dont talk it needs to be cleared...
Cont Soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update clearing a little bit confusion regarding md
cant wait for the next part cont soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update!! Do continue soon n thanks for the pm:D

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