The Guard Of Honour Manveer ff :) note pg 65 - Page 22

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awesome really loved it please update soon and thanks for the pm

u welcome dear will update soon :)
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love it it was just great

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PRIYAL HAD ANNOUNCED IN FRONT OF MEDIA THAT ASHISH AND HER HAD BROKE UP A MONTH AGO
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hey guys here is chap 13 for u its way too long hope it wouldnt bore u up

chap 13

In the morning as manyata came out for shower she was greeted by the maid and gave her two dresses which were traditional lenghas which has been made overnight specially for her coz she was firstly going to be the yuvrani of devgar and secondly the new maharani of jayger the wife of yuvraj udayveer singh

She just hated this thaugt and eventually stylist came in and made her ready as she came out every eyes were staring her but the gaze of those dark black eyes made her uncomfertable she didn't knew why she has made her mind just to give him hatred and just crumble down his fame but he had such an effect on her that she is always helpless in his custody and those black pools have such an magnetic effect on her soul that she felt like to drown in them but why she has no answers .

Rajprohit ji was ready with the rituals to be begin but another person was ready

Mainka: guruji u allways on the side of the fairest so why are u the one doing unfair my son vijay has holded this riasat responsibilities as she was not there but why as she came here he have no right on devgar

Rp: mainka shant mene is bare me socha tha aur yuvraj udayveer ek pratugita ka mashwara bhi dia tha magar ye vijay ka he faisla hae ke manyata ko hi yuvrani bnaya jaye aur ise me yuvraj udayveer ke sehmati thi

Mainka: magar guruji yuvraj udayveer kaun hote hae ye tai krne wale aur vijay ko mna krne ka haq

Rp: mainka beta jo bhi ho ye riasat ke bagdoor udayveer ke madad se smbhli hae aur rajmata ne yuvraj ko faisla lene ka haq diya hua

And after that ritual took place manyata took the vows then was greeted by every one and then left to her room to change as now it would be her first mission as a yuvrani to destroy those who had a bad eye on devgar mainka was already waiting for her

Mainka: manyata hume maaf krdejie humne koshish ki thi ke apko yuvrani bne se bachale aur shadi se bhe lekin abh hume lagta apko bhag jana chaye sahir ke sath humne use baat ki hui hae wo bhe tayar hae

Manyata: bua saab ab me devgar ki yuvrani ho who manyata nahi jo kisi se pyar krte the ab bus mere hith devgarh ka hith chaye mjhe iske lie uday ke sath he rehna pare

Mainka: magar kya tum is riyasat ko waris de paoge kese bardasht karoge us insaan ka choona tumhare sath wo sb krna jo srf sahir ka haq hae

Manyata: ap ko kisne kaha ye haq sahir ka hae ye haq kisi ka nae aur agar isme devgarh ka hith hae to hum ise bhe bardasht krdenge aur kese bhe devgarh ke dushman ko chorenge nae chaye wo hamare hone wali pati hoo ya app

Mainka: was now disgusted and just left telling her that u wanted that always niw u are getting it u are faking that u have been forced

Now manyata was ready dressed in a mahroon bridal dress with heavy makup wearing the necklace of maharni vasundra nacklece which maharaj giriraj gave to her

As she descended every eyes fall on her with two set of guiltful eyes who else could it be vijay and uday

And now every thing happened peacefully no drama and all after tht the barat left for jaigarh rajmahal on the way uday and manyata didn't even spoke a word to eachother but he knew on thing manyata wasnot happy

As they entered unatti did the arti and took manyata to her room whom was waiting for his husband to show him her first plan

As it was more than an hour uday hasnot entered manyata found her plan failing of making uday burn with guilt she just cameout of room just watched downstair uday was writing something unatti came out and patted on her back she was hell scared

Manyata: whoo u

Unatti: waiting for dada he would be coming his old habit to write a dariy

Manyata: why what does he write ?

Unatti: no body knew it as its his secret as nobody is allowed

Manyata: made up her mind after that she will read that dairy which will show somebody else's curse fall on yuvraj udayveer singh

Manyata went inside then took the towel and went to take a shower

Uday was now in his way to hbis room he didn't knew how would he confront her how would he face her he was now feeling light because all the confessions to her mom

He made a habit of writing dairy in which he considered he made all the confessions written as if to tell his and what he feel s

As he entered he was strucked by a view which he thought he would not be able to see

Nature's master piece in front of him manyata wrapped in towel her curves he was just feeling the urge to get to love her to lick that water which was flowing on that wet body he has desire to love her but he knew that wasn't going to happen and then reallity struck him

Uday: sorry u change ill come in a while in an embaressed tone

Manyata: no need I was waiting for u

Uday: know knew she was upto something big

Manyata: had different plans for him she just took the towel of her and threw it on thebed

Uday: was now hell shocked and surprised there was his dream come true he couldn't uter a word could not control himself in his amzement just muttered whaaat is this

Manyata: that's what u want na yuvraj udayveer singh you lust me na just want my body here I have taken all the stones in your just pin me to ur bed and do what u want as you do with all the girls but this time it wouldnt be considered as a rape not in your own eyes not even in the world bcoz u have put a name for the thing that u want to do play with my dignity yuvraj udayveer singh its all yours

Uday: was struck hard here words pierce his sole it was good for yuvraj udayveer to have been on a war and get killed brutally rather than hearing this manyata do you know what the hell u are talking

Manyata: uday why showing anger don't hesitate fulfill ur desire u have done all this drama for this if u don't want devgarh u had such a command on its matters that what do u want me just my body na

Uday: now was super anger his eyes were red manyata could fell those dark black pools have now just become red blooded she was scared uday grabbed bu her waist and pulled her close and just wrapped her lips in his manyata was now with eyes wide open he just kisses her making it deeper and deeper manyata was about to fall but just then saved her by holding his collar which make it more intense he was now exploring all over her she was helpless she wanted to join him but her ego didn't let her then she moaned in his mouth and that moaning made uday stop he just escaped from the kiss manyta was so breathless that she just sticked to him lioke hugging him he pulled her out and throwed her on the bed her naked body was lieing in the bed she was thinking whats gonna happen next her plan just wanted to make him guilty but her plan backfired

Uday: don't think to much ur highness I am not going to do anything that was just enough to show u that If I wanted u if had u on the first place as sneha as nobody could stop me not ur fake brother or anyone and about that me raping womens those womes climb on and I am famous in them but that doesn't mean I make out with them

Manyata was now the one who was guilty

Uday: if I wanted to play with u even if u were manyata u couldnot stop neither ur grandmother parents and that mainka bua whom u find her wellwisher wouldnot be able to stop people respect bcoz of whom I am not bcoz what people had shown me up

Manyata: what ever she is she is better then u she was thinking for her son not unlike just thinking for urself

Uday: for ur kinf information yourhighness I am neither intrested in ur body nor ur riasat if I want na all yuvrani could line up for that u are no special don't even think of that now with smirk

Manyata: his smirk turned up the moment made manyata more annoyed was about to say but intuurepted

Uday:I don't care what have they shown and what I have said to them and I will not disagree from bcoz I am not the same with everyone u know that and every one knew what I have done for u would do it for no one not bcoz ur are special or just a stone to overcome between me and devgarh I don't want u to own a thing which I already own

Manyata: another lie mr yuvraj udayveer singh u can make the whole world fool with ur talks not me so why u married to me just reply have no answers

Uday: ya there is something which u don't which I care the most is ur life whom is on top of my every wish ur security is most important even more than my life bcoz after my mom u are the only girl I love and u know why I so much care for u bcoz that mainka has killed ur sister jaynandani and nobody knew it just to put her command on the throne I don't want that even to happen u and I know u wont believe buth that's the truth she was the one again taking u to sahir even she just brain washed vijay but poor guy believed he was saving her sister but didn't what he was doing he would having the biggest hand if any thing had happened to u

Manyata: knew he was saying the truth his eyes told him but she was not convinced how could I becoz it's a lie how could ds not know who killed her grand daughter if she knows about me

Uday: u have ur own answer in ur question that's why u were saperated

Manyata: another lie ur every talk is a lie even ur love is lie u didn't enjoyed the las moment bcoz I didn't paricipated na that's why u are making up this stories so that I would fall for u and enjoy u but u are mistaken I am not that type

Uday was now super angered he just raised his hand to slap her manyata who was now scared but uday sopped he hit on the wall his hand left out oozing blood even maks stayed on the wall he just rushed out leaving manyata who had only negitivity for him again in thinking state

Manyata was now crying like hell don't know what to do not bcoz she was hurt but bcoz uday huirted himself rather than hurting her all the elders saying came in her mind about uday that he cant hurt her

She just looked at the splash of blood on the creamy white wall she didn't knew what to do she just wanted to hurt his mind never expected that he would do some thing craxy to himself but she was the one who was guilty she dressed up in a nighty was now ready to go down she again saw him writing something as she was moving down with the firt aid box she saw pick up the empty wine bottle which he drank a while ago he just broke It on his hand he was hurting even his hand which dared to hurt his princess she rushed up to him holded his hand but he escaped from her hold

Uday: what now there is something left to say now

Manyata: uday

Uday: just collided his both hands and said manyata aur nahi mein tmhare age hath jodta hu aur nahi plz mene apni zindagi ke sab se bari galti ki aj ke din jo scha tm smjho ge lekin nahi mjhe maaf krdo me aur nhi bardasht ker paonga there were tears in his eyes which made her more guilty the yuvraj udayveer singh who was famous for his poker face expression was crying and then he left hermoving toward another room down stairs

Manyata was left shattered and guilty she sat there crying suddenly her eyes went on the dairy

And started reading the last part which he has written in anger I t stated

" dear mom I am sorry I promised u that anyone that would try to hurt her would no go from my warth but I am the one who was about to hurt her mom I hurted that delicate creature so badly now even u would be ashamed of me I know mom I did wrong I always lie but I never lied to her nor my care neither my love was a lie u know they why didn't she understand mom am I that bad am I not worthy of happiness am I that selfish ahh selfishness as if forcing her was my selfishness yes it was I wanted her to be save even if she hates me I want her to be alive even if she desired to kill if this is selfishness than I am selfish what now she had done now gives me no right mum no rigth the thing that was I proud of that I find my fainse is just washed off ,mom I never wanted her love neither her body but why am I that wrong that even my right saying made me wrong my right doing made me evil mom I love u the most hope u were here everyone whome I loved had betrayed only choti is left one day she will be in the list mom even u left me dad I didn't expected anything from him ds, and now manyata also I would have killed my self if I wasn't a rajwada if hadnt had the responsibility of jaigarh mom rajwada's don't cry but what to do tears don't stop today I feel like my whole existance is a lie"

These lines hurted her more as it hurted his husband she knew he wasn't he did it for her only for her how could she treat apure soul like that now I have to fix my mistake now she went inside that room and found uday sleeping she just bnadaged his hand which woke him up now he was super angry

Uday: ab kyu ai hu kitna todoge is udayveer ke gurur ko ek din me tum ne who krdia jo koi nai kr ska he holded her wirst and just took her out of the door and said chale jainge hum tmhari dunaya se and just closed the door and locked manyata cried there uday uday but he didn't listen unatti came and took her to her room and confronted her she told her that now nobody could cool him down when his anger will cool down he will himself come to u don't worry manyata couldnt sleep all she was thinking how confront uday but it was her bad luck sleep just caught her hold and she slept all in tear

Precap: and the next morning a knock came her way it was the maid who brought her a packet which uday has left for her as she opened it and started reading it tears bursted out of her eyes all her dream which she saw while sleeping were once again crushed but she has decided she will find out where he was she was now determined in only one thing in establish her in a way which he wanted when he will be back he will find his princess the way he wanted
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fireroad99

PRIYAL HAD ANNOUNCED IN FRONT OF MEDIA THAT ASHISH AND HER HAD BROKE UP A MONTH AGO

so what yaar its there life what they better chiise for themselves first of all it was u who about to break up with someone u would think about the things which didnt let move it on or let it be on ur friends who say that u both look cute but nobody knows better hope they will soon be together do think too much it will hurt u and them also :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg awesome update as always..oh that Menka ughhh lagta hai god neh uska 7khun maaf kardiya.tabhi toh khun karti jaarahi hai aur jayegi.anyways that kiss hay vamp u r so fast...ek din main hi kiss seh leky diary tak sab hogaya awsome.dear cont soon:p
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great Part
Hate Menaka get rid of her asap put her in dungeons where she cant get out.. Manyata went to extreme level she believes the wrong people... hopefully once menaka is out the picture everything will be ok between Manveer
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part i loved it
oghhh hate this menka
why is she being so evil
and ya thankxxx for pm
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Swini01

Omg awesome update as always..oh that Menka ughhh lagta hai god neh uska 7khun maaf kardiya.tabhi toh khun karti jaarahi hai aur jayegi.anyways that kiss hay vamp u r so fast...ek din main hi kiss seh leky diary tak sab hogaya awsome.dear cont soon:p

yar krna para i started from the begining it was becoming boring and melodramatic which i was hating finally all the drama has ended thnx god a new beginning to come :)

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