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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Swini01

Loved it yaar...omg manveer kiss..hats off yaar.cont soon rocker dear.. :p

thanx dear 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally read all the updates sorry for late reply aint been well
Amazing Updates I'm glad Uday beat Sahir up what a idiot eughh... Manyata back in the kingdom... dont like maneka... poor Manyata hopefully Uday will apologise
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey guys here is chap 11 hope u like it

chap11

Manyata slept on the floor all nigth leaving an uday whom didn't knew his sleep has gone all he knew that he has hurted her soo much which he thaught she would not be able to tolerate he thaught he was a deamon who had hurted such a delicate creature it was his fault suddenly in his anger he broked the glass of wine in his hand with his firm grip he only knew one thing he has to fix it all he knew she would be now in an awful state coz his saying were not a lie but not acomplete truth how could he said it to her he heard a voice from back dada it was his little sister unatti seeing her dada's hand full of blood rushed towards him and applied first aid to it she sense anger in his eyes and guilt on his face it was first time yuvraj udayveer was revealing what he felt not his poker face sensation

Unatti: dada can I ask u something?

Uday: sure

Unatii: u have hurted someone whom u truly care for

Uday:u can say it

Unatti: I know u will fix it all up my dada is my hero and a hero cant do wrong to anyone

Uday: her words made his hard lips turn into a smily face yup choti its my mistake ill fix it

In morning in devgar palace as sunrays fall on her face she woke up with a smile

Smile for what? Bcoz she understanded it was her fault and what had it happened if he just kissed her he has the rights …. What rights? I know how could I blame a person who stood up only for me when for whome I was dearest consider me guilty how could I just be rough on him …. Rough on him he was the one rough on you? But I enlighted him up he would have never said anything how could he becoz he just helped me in anystate and never asked for any return I would talk to him he would forgive me I know as she move towards the window she saw an audi arriving in the mahal she knew who he was and why he had came her for her only for her by his mere glance all here turmoil was gone she has to be ready bcoz today they would share an another date she smiled and went in the washroom to change

As he entered in a rajmahal uday knew only one thing what he had to do when he has decided to do something nothing could stop but unfortunately he stop and heard a convo which shocked for the first yuvraj udayveer singh whom the fear himself feared was sc ared

But for what?

What make him feel like his going to lost something he has to react fast but how could he gather up himself his brain wasn't working bcoz of the fear his eyes got red and this was the moment his enemies would loved to sse even they would be shocked is he real udayveer or just hos mare clone any fear couldn't resist his bravery he would have handeled it alone if he wouldn't have been so attached but today it was on his face he needed guidance finally

Now there were two opinions his heart and brain

Brain: talk to ds she would help u get out of this

Heart: secure that thing which u threaten too loose make it ur strength not ur weakness

He found his heart was this time talking sense but then he found out all battles are win with the brain those with heart end up on losing went running

Manyata was ready to apologize to him to surprise himcoz she couldnot bear to loose him he was his it was whom helped her that night she felt helpless and betrayed by her love that night he would have done anythbing to her she wouldn't resist but he didn't he was atru gentlemen suddenly she hear a knock a smile came across her face as she opened the door her faced led down in dissappoinment

Manyta:Vijay bhai app

Vijay: kyu hum nahi asakte

Manyata: aisa nahi I was just thinking so early

Vijay : how can I sleep when something wrong is going to happen with my bhai

Manyata: vijay bhai don't worry till uday is with me nothing will happen to me

Vijay: today what I will show u, u wont get anything but hurt but its better to get hurt then rgretting it

Manyata: was now sure there was something relating to uday

Vijay just put the cd and showed her yv's and mainka's convo

And told her it was all his plan he has nothing to do with u he just want devgarh and he will get it soon

Manyata was shattered

Manyata: u are lieing all this is untrue

Vijay: if u don't believe why the hell I am here I have some more thing for u but u dont know whome are u true friends if u have a pinch of believe in me come with me ill get u over with the picture fiasco which happened and who did it

And she left with him

On his way to rajmata's office he stopped abruptly he knew if he asked her advice he has to told her everything even the bitterest truth what happened to here elder grand daughter who did it he then finally realised he should go and have a chat with manyata if she believes her no false plan will work but how will he go after last night but he gathered himsulf up and went to her room there was no sign of her he found the cd and knew he has to tell her everything soon where is she he asked the maid

Maid: she left with vijaysaab

Now he knew everything mainka came up how are u beta get ready to fall this time u wouldn't be able to get up love crumbles even the stronget men

Her words charged uv up

Uday: dsri riasat ke badshah ne apne wazir ko kam pe lagadya lekin ek bat btadu mjhse ye expect mt krna that u will face up someboy except me bcoz for my side I handle everything in a game bcoz the more u trust distributed the more u weakened

Mainka: we ill see who will won don't u forget u have learnt all ur cleverness from my mother and I am her daughter

Uday: but let me remind u one thing its ur mother's words even in real life chess or the game nobody hasn't borned who could beat yuvraj udayveers mind

Mainka: but do u think u arent the same uday the fear of losing ur beloved princess is on ur face go sse a mirror as mirrors don't lie it will tell u u hav losted it

Uday: ya its true first time has fear overshadowed my mind but I know one my love is true it will break all ur barriers

Mainka: ya u can dream of it and even try bcoz those who try even god helps them

Uday: there is no god for me and there never be one and even if this I don't need him for u u can have him on ur said bcoz what is mine nobody in the world has power to snatch it and left

He wnet to his car thinking of his move bcoz now manyata wouldn't understand her first tme the master planner of all has no plan in his mind its just a piece of shit the time time I am most needing its not helping me aawww he couldn't think anything else

But on the other hand vijay has already played his another move

He took he to the news office and cleared it with the official it was yuvraj uday who had forced us to show those pics she was now on the verge of breking down she felt her bones would break any second

And told her that ur love never betrayed he stopped this all by giving his interview but he took all the credits

There was a mistake by ur love but he truly loves you he cant spare any thing against ur dignity

Manyata: collapsed on a seat her heart was telling her he couldn't do this to her but there were enogh proofs to show his real face but sahir was also no saint she told vijay to tke him to sahir who was already in the gang and knew it was his turn

They knew playing with manyata heart was the most easiest thing she would never let her brain work in this situation she cant be uday who always has his brain on in the bitterest of moments and would definitely collaspe

Uday: know knew that there is one way of making him wrong is to stand one another right and who could be except sahir as he knew they would play with the poor girls heart

He went straight to hospital

As manyata and vijay entered sahir was holding a pic of manyata and crying vijay just showed him a thumbs up as manyata told him to leave but poor vijay was horrified by seeing his condition he knew that this is what going to happen with him even more worse

Sahir: sneha I am sorry so sorry I knew I aint worth I know u would never forgive me coz I knew after what I have done with I have gone down even in my eyes so what could I expect from u just leave plz

Manyata: why sahir why diid u this to me

Sahir: I don't know what came over me but the thing I saved u has given me chance to ask u one thing

Sneha: what in tears

Sahir: do forget me and move on u don't deserve me u

Sneha: was now cought off guard

Sahir: knew it I just played with ur honour I should be your savior but I truly loved from my heart and whenever u will need me u will find me earlier but when u will not find me thin k that I am not alive he just joined his hands just forgive me

Sneha ran to him and hugged stop this nonsense u are my hold one I love u I love with one of her hand on his back and another on his leg

Hearing this sahir should have hugged her back

But she didn't found he had touched suddenly she found something wet suddenly she saw him all feared

It was uday he just holded her hand and dragged her out not listening to her screams

Pushed her in the car drove in the rajmahal ignoring her and then when they reached her in her room he left her hand her hand was all red bcoz of that iron grip

Uday: what were u doing there u know he could have harmed but u promised me u won t meet him

Manyata: he would have not harmed he gaurded my owner publicly unlike u who tried to disrespect in front of whole media u were veryt near to ur plan showing sympathy and then marrying me but his truth made all ur plans ho unwail but have ur plans always ready na again u made him wrong in my eyes getting all the credit

Uday: how could u say that

Manyata: as if u think I don't I know all ur plans to snatch devgarh from there devgarh royals

Ds came in why are u two showting

Manyata: dadisaab its all his drama he just want our estate from our family

Ds: manyata beta aisa nhi

Manyata: I should have know it he had ur eyes behind a curtain just wake and see this mans plan

Uday: now u are getting over fist of all u should kn ow that devgarh is currently with there royals becoz I had financially supported them from year or it would have been a government property but now its payback time I want to married to manyata till tomorrow do u hear it ds I mean what I say

If she finds it was all my plan to marry then how could I let her wishes go unfulfiiled be ready to be my bride

Vijay entered the room and saw sahir in shocked

Where is manyta I hav to giet her home before suddenly he say his pajamas wet u peed

Sahir: uday was here and he took manyata now I don't whats going to happen to u and me all in fear

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Posted: 13 years ago
soory guys just reposted it
Edited by rocker12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great Part
What was the need to see Sahir Manyata has lost it why is Vijay bhai bad in here
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it it was very good why is vijaybhai bad here i wish he turns to be good later on and manveer forced marriage i wish they do get married and then hate and love track please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my god!!!!! he peed in his pants...omg...🤣he is sooo scared of uday!!!oh man i loved it!!🤣

and uday wohooo...awesome..amazing..i will call him iron man now!!lolll
u know what i always love such powerful and egoistic strong fearless unbeatable kinda heroes not like hindi serials lovey dovey romeos... a real hero is something like our uday...and i love him!!
awesome chapter..wow amazing..and eagerly waiting for the next part!!
i m so excited to read the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hahaha omg"ek din wifey in"lol.anyways mam awesome update.ughh that Sahir but Vj oh no cupid seh stupid bann gaye...Mam cont soon. 🤗
Edited by Swini01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx dear:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Swini01

Hahaha omg"ek din wifey in"lol.anyways mam awesome update.ughh that Sahir but Vj oh no cupid seh stupid bann gaye...Mam cont soon. 🤗

cupid se stupid woah 🤣
soon maybe in next chap there be his reallity check and then back to track :P

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